四六级作文模式.doc

四六级作文模式
 ( 议论文)

Model 1           问题—解决类作文写作
Example: social problems ( pollution, divorce)

       With the development of        , more and more people are concerned about the problem  ①（描述现状）  .Accordingly,   ②（伴随此现状而出现的一些新问题） problem is becoming more and more serious.

       People have found many solutions to this problem. For instance,   ③（采取措施一） .However, I’m against the idea of   ④（应反对的措施） We can imagine how uncomfortable it would be to   ⑤（前景预测）  .

       In brief,   ⑥（结论）  . But this problem is very complicated. Perhaps people can hardly rely on only one way to solve the problem completely.

Model 2           积极有利类作文写作

Example: Sports
Nowadays,   主题   plays an important role in our life. For example,   ①（举例说明主题的现状） .

       Generally, its advantages can be listed as follows. First,   ②（好处一） . Besides,  ③（好处二） .

       Through the above analysis, my attitude toward this matter is positive, and the reasons are simple. It not only brings us  ④（好处之一） , but also gives us  ⑤（好处之二） we have not expected.Therefore, I can see its bright future from now on.

Model  3           利弊分析类写作
Example: The Opening of Universities to the Public
套路 1
       Nowadays many people prefer  主题  because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First,   ①（优点之一）  . Besides,   ②优点之二  .

       But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that   ③ (第一个缺点)  . To make matters worse,   ④（第二个缺点）  .

       Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to   ⑤（我的看法）  .

套路2
With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality. Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful. The phenomenon of   ①（主题）  is an example of the former/latter ones.

       There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most typical ones. First,   ②（优点一） . In the second place,   ③（优点二）  . Eventually,   ④（优点三）  .

       The negative effects on our life/or sth else could be seen in several ways, too.The apparent example is that   ⑤（举例说明缺点一） . In addition,    ⑥（缺点二） .

       On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society. There is still a long way for us to improve/eliminate   ⑦（主题）  and make our life more comfortable.

套路3
Everything has two sides of effects on human life. 主题is no exception, too. The most apparent and positive effect is    ①（优点一）  . It will bring us   ②（举例说明一）  . It also will give us   ③（举例说明二）  . the second advantage lies in   ④（优点二） .

       As I have mentioned above, however, A has a negative influence on   ⑤（缺点一）  . Furthermore, A could make us feel   ⑥（缺点二）  . Sometimes   ⑦（缺点三）.

       From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by that way,   ⑧对前景的预测  .

Model  4    观点对比类作文写作

套路1
       The topic of   ①（主题）   is becoming the most popular one recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say  A  is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of            ②（支持A的理由一）  . What’ more,   ③（理由二）  Moreover   ④（理由三）  .

While others think that  B  is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,   ⑤（支持B的理由一）  . Secondly,   ⑥（理由二）  Thirdly,  ⑦（理由三）  .

From my point of view, I think   ⑧（我的观点） . The reason is that   ⑨（原因）  .

套路2

       Many students like   ①（主题）  . Among them there are two types of attitude in   ②（主题）  . some of them think that  A . They think that   ③（支持A的原因）  and they should  ④（结果）  .

Other students, however, don’t think so. They feel that  B . They argue that   ⑤支持B的原因  .

I like A. Because   ⑥（支持A的理由）  . So, as a result, I   ⑦（选择A的结果）  . By A, I can   ⑧（重申支持A的理由）  . I like this way of   ⑨（主题）  .

Model 5.       定义解释类写作

       The good old proverb   ①（名言或谚语）  reminds us that   ②（释义）  , Indeed, we can learn many things from it.

       First of all,   ③（理由一）  . For example,   ④（举例说明） Secondly,   ⑤（理由二）  . Another case is that   ⑥（举例说明）  . Furthermore,   ⑦（理由三）  .

       In my opinion,   ⑧（我的观点） .

Model 6                 图表作文
      As is shown in the table (or in the graph), … dropped from … in 1994 to … in 1996.    According to the figures given in the table, … has great increased (or decreased) in the past … years (or decades), reaching … in 1996.  From the table we can also see that there has been a sharp decline (or rise) in …    It is clear that …
      There are at least two good reasons for …    On the one hand, …    Let’s have an example to illustrate the great increase in …   On the other hand, … is due to the fact that …    In addition, … is responsible for …   Maybe there are some other reasons to show …    But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable.
      As far as I am concerned, …   /So my conclusion is that …    I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. 

常用句首短语及句式（Phrases and Sentences Used to Start an Essay）
1．With the (rapidly) growing popularity of Internet surfing (computers/cars/mobile phones/pagers/PDP television/... ) in China, the quality of our lives is improving for the better.

2．With the (rapid) growth of our economy (heavy industries/transportation system/market economy/population/private enterprises/housing industry/... ),  an increasing number of problems, such as (water shortages/traffic jams/industrial pollution/waste of energy/desert spreading/... ), are beginning to surface.

3. With the (rapid) development of science and technology (market economy/electronic industry/information industry/higher education/... ) an increasing number of people come to realize that (knowledge is power/a weak nation has no International prestige/education is of vital importance ….

4. There is a wide concern that many large state-owned companies are in deficit (quite a few Chinese cities face the problem of water shortages, industrial pollution and waste of energy/various kind of superstition flare up/... ).

5．Currently, there is a widespread concern over drug abuse (high unemployment rate / wildlife extinction /environmental pollution/desertification/organized crime/widespread corruption /energy crisis/water shortages/traffic jams/increasing traffic accidents/... ).

6.       In the past two decades (In the past five years), millions of private enterprises ( private schools / supermarkets / fast food restaurants/... ) have mushroomed all over China

7.       There are three major values of owning a car (a computer/an apartment/a mobile phone/a
beeper/... ). To begin with  ...  Next  ...  Last  ...  There are, on the other hand, more reasons against it. First(!y)  ...  Second(!y)  ...  Finally…

8.       Different people have different attitudes towards the biding of the 29th Olympic Games (access to WTO/private cars/high unemployment rate/Internet surfing/private schools/state monopoly of telecommunication/urbanization/stock/... ) Some are in favor of... while others are against…

9.       When it comes to the access to WTO (Internet surfing / private schools / brain-drain / e-business / high rate of unemployment/China's football / recycling / widespread corruption …)most people believe that... But other people argue that...

10.   Recently, extensive studies (statistics/surveys/investigations/...) show (reveal/indicate/ demonstrate/prove/... ) that 107 Chinese cities and 1231 small towns suffer water shortages.

常用句尾短语及句式（Phrases and Sentences Used to End an Essay）
1. Without computer (cell telephone/PDP television/cars/microelectronics/telecommunication/ Internet/genetics advances/... ), it would be difficult to imagine modern life.

2. We should redouble our efforts to build China into a powerful (prosperous/better... )nation with international prestige

3. It is imperative for us to take effective measures to correct the situation (fight corruption/ hold back a tidal wave of crime/terminate excessive exploitation of natural resources/ease water shortages/... )

4. . In order to make our world a better place in which to live, we must learn to live in harmony with all wildlife species (stop polluting our environment right away/conscientiously follow family planning).

5． In short, (population explosion, environmental pollution and exhaustion of natural resources)    are the major problems to be solved to make our world a better place in which to live.

6.  I want to be a teacher (a doctor/or to do something) not only because.., but also because.

7.  It goes without saying that science and technology constitute the primary productive force (knowledge is something/creativity is everything/cheating never pays/... ).