高考英语作文指导之应用文求助信省名师优质课赛课获奖课件市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2017-9-15,刘 晓,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢,Practical Writing,(Request),应用文,-,求援信,-,刘晓,第1页,折衷式,(Semi-Block Style),Dear Sir or Madam,(Para1),(Para2),(Para3),Yours(sincerely),Lihua,第2页,-9-15,刘 晓,信件写作流程,1,、仔细审题，明确写作要求,一审,文,体,：,二,审,时态、人,称,：,三,审,要,点,：,2,、列出提要，构建框架结构,-,框架,-,关键点分布,-,逻辑关系,-,语言（词汇、语法）,（动词、连接成份、可用句型）,格式,正确，,语言得体；,时态前后照应人称,上下一致,；,关键点齐全，,逻辑,清楚,第3页,3,、,依据,提要，,扩展成文,紧,扣提,示,，,适,度发挥,，,扩展成句，,连,句成文,。,尽,量使用,较丰,富词汇和语法结,构,。,4,、核查文章，适度修改。,格式正确,关键点齐全,语言,准确,衔接自然,第4页,-9-15,刘 晓,求援信,内容关键点,：,-,写信目,-,说明困难,-,请求帮助,-,感激并,期待,回复,第5页,-9-15,刘 晓,求援信,起首句（,the opening sentence,）,Im writing to ask you a fovor.,Would you do me a favor?,结束,语,(,the closing sentence),I sincerely hope you can,I am looking forward to your early reply.,Hope for an early reply,I would be grateful if you could,I would appreciate it if you could,第6页,-9-15,刘 晓,求援信,表示求援惯用句式,Would you be so kind as to?,Is it possible that?,I sincerely hope that you can,第7页,假如你是李华，暑假参加了某,微信公众号（,Wechat official account,）举行英语原版书阅读活动，并写了一篇书评（,a book review,）。现你用英语给外教,Sam,写一封信，希望他能帮你当面批改书评，内容包含：,简明介绍活动,提出请求,提议见面时间,注,意：,词数,80,次左右,可适,当增加细节，使行文连贯,文体,人称,(3),时态,(4),关键点,求援信,第一人称,普通现在时,普通未来时,写信目标,求援内容,结束语,1,、仔细审题，明确写作要求,original English books,English originals,第8页,-9-15,刘 晓,Dear,(Para1),(Para2),Yours(sincerely),Li Hua,2,、列出提要，构建框架结构,请求帮助,提出请求,&,约定时间,感激并期,待回复,说明困难,写信目标,依据交流对象,选取,称呼,和,结尾礼语,Dear Sam,Yours respectfully,Yours truly,Yours sincerely,介绍活动,第9页,-9-15,关键点罗列,ask,you a favor,sign up for a reading activity and write a book review,help me correct it/make some corrections,meet after class on Friday/spare me some time,thanks and expectations,第10页,3,、,依据,提要，,扩展成文,ask you a favor,I am writing to ask you a favor.,I am Li Hua,a student from our school.,I am writing to ask you a favor.,highly related,loosely related,第11页,3,、,依据,提要，,扩展成文,sign up for a reading activity and write a book review,As a keen lover of English books,I signed up for an English origial reading activity during the summer vocation.I wrote a book review on my favorite book,Jane Eyre.,As a keen lover of English books,I signed up for a reading activity during the summer vocation,where I read some English originals and wrote a book review.,Supporting+Key,non-restrictiveclause,第12页,3,、,依据,提要，,扩展成文,help me correct it/make some corrections,I am not sure whether I have got my idea across,so I sincerely hope you can help me to correct it and give me some advice on writing.,Being poor in writing,I am worried there might be some mistakes.,Would you be so kind as to help me make some corrections?,Supporting+Key,Using a question to be polite,第13页,3,、,依据,提要，,扩展成文,meet after class on Friday/spare me some timession,If possible,can I meet you after class On Friday,?,If you are avialable after class on Friday,please tell me and I will meet you in your office,.,Can you spare me some time and tell me when so that I can go to meet you?,Concession,Concession,Result,第14页,3,、,依据,提要，,扩展成文,thanks and expectation,Id be grateful if you could give me a hand.Looking forward to your kind reply.,第15页,Dear Sam,(I am Li Hua,a student from our school.)I am writing to ask a favor of you.,As a keen lover of English books,I signed up for a reading activity,during the summer vocation,where I read some English originals and wrote a book review,on my favorite book,Jane Eyre.,But,I am not sure whether I have got my idea across,so,I sincerely hope you can help me to make some corrections and give me some advice on writing.,Can you spare me some time and tell me when so that I can go to meet you?,Id be grateful if you could give me a hand.,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,格式、关键点、语言,4,、核查文章，适度修改,cohesive and logical,第16页,-9-15,刘 晓,Dear Sam,(I am Li Hua,a student from our school.)I am writing to ask a favor of you.,范文（来不及打了）,Id be grateful if you could give me a hand.,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,4,、核查文章，适度修改,第17页,-9-15,刘 晓,-Thanks-,第18页,-9-15,刘晓,