中考英语作文指导PPT课件.ppt

初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导 1中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（1-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。2中考作文要求：1.根据提示，写一篇60-70字左右的英文作文。要求：内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词拼写和标点符号正确，书写工整。完整准确通顺正确3书面表达（writing)翻译（Put the sentences into English)Writing skills:1.判断时态。（根据时间状语或上下文，判断句子或整篇文段的时态。）2.长句变短句。3.简化难句。4.注意连接词的正确使用。5.注意中英文表达的差异。1）根据英文的表达习惯来断句,并添加所缺部分。2）正确使用英文主动句与被动句。3）按照英文句子的语法顺序翻译。4What do you think of English?Englishinterestingdifficulthelpfuleasyuseful句子扩写：1.English is2.It is to learn English well.3.I think it is for to learn English well.5A：Peter 出生于英国，去年来到中 国的一所中学教英语。Peter was born in Britain.Last year,he came to China.He taught English in a Middle school.heHe6A.一场交通事故使他不能走路了。He cant walk because of a traffic accident.He cant walk after a traffic accident.a traffic accident他不能走路了7A:Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。Peter is very happy because he likes Chinese food very much.()Because Peter likes Chinese food,so he is very happy.补充句子：He is not good at English,_ he works very hard.but 8A.有一天，在他回家的路上,遇见他的中国朋友李雷，李雷告诉他住在哪儿，并邀请他去家里吃晚饭。One day,on his way home,he met his Chinese friend,Li Lei.Li Lei told him where he lived.Then Li Lei invited him to his home for supper.1）有一天，在他回家的路上,他遇见他的中国朋友李雷。2）李雷告诉他住在哪里。3）然后李雷邀请他去家里吃晚饭。9A:我校建于2001 年。B：佛山建起了很多高楼。My school was built in 2001.()My school built in 2001.Many tall buildings were built in Foshan.10A：他很喜欢中国菜。He very likes Chinese food.He likes Chinese food very much.()112024/2/28 周三12 Peter 出生于英国，去年来到中国的一所中学教英语。有一天，在他回家的路上,遇见他的中国朋友李雷，李雷告诉Peter 他住在哪儿，并邀请他去家里吃晚饭。Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。1.Peter 出生于英国。2.去年他来到中国，并在一所中学教英语。3.有一天,在他回家的路上,Peter遇见他的中国朋友李雷。4.李雷告诉Peter他住在哪儿。5.然后他邀请他去家里吃晚饭。6.Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。1.What tense(时态）?2.断句（长句变短、简化难句）3.注意中英文表达差异13One possible version:Peter was born in England.Last year,he came to China and taught English in a middle school.One day,on his way home,Peter met his Chinese friend,Li Lei.Li Lei told him where he lived.Then he invited Peter to his home for supper.Peter was very happy because he liked Chinese food very much.14Summary：Writing steps:1.浏览全文，了解意思；判断时态,做好中文断句，翻译句子；注意连接词的正确使用、中英文表达的差异2.检查（标点符号，字母大小写，单词拼写是否正确，语句是否通顺，是否遗漏要点。）15 我是个中学生,对电脑特别感兴趣,一放学回家就开电脑，有时玩游戏，有时上网和朋友聊天，有时给朋友发电子邮件。尽管我喜欢玩电脑，但我父母阻止我这样做，他们认为我在电脑上花太多时间。于是我在晚上做完作业后才玩一会儿电脑。1.我是个中学生。2.我对电脑特别感兴趣。3.我一放学回家我就开电脑。4.我有时玩游戏,有时上网和朋友聊天,有时给朋友发电子邮件。5.尽管我喜欢电脑，但我父母阻止我这样做。6.他们认为我在电脑上花太多时间。7.于是我在晚上做完作业后才玩一会儿电脑。Practice:write the following according to the tips mentioned above.16One possible version:Im a middle school student,and I am interested in the computer.I turn on the computer as soon as I come back every day.Sometimes I play computer games,talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them.Though I like it very much,my parents stop me from doing that.They think I spend too much time on the computer.So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.17Writing skills we learned today:Tips 1:判断时态Tips 2:断句（长句变短句、简化难句）Tips 3:Try to use some linking words to make your writing more fluent.(尝试用正确的连接词把文章写得更加顺畅)Tips 4:注意中英文表达的差异（增词、主被动句、语序等）18Homework1.Finish the composition;2.Use the tips above to make your composition fluent and beautiful.19advice：抓住大分，再争取小分；锦上添花。只抓小分,放弃大分;竹篮打水一场空写作难在坚持，成在坚持。advice大家要下苦功夫，更要用巧功夫Practice makes perfect!2021 Before class,wed better read the textbook,and we are supposed to make a vocabulary list.In class,listening to the teacher carefully is also a good way to learn English.Its also important to take notes.After class,we should memorize the words,and wed better watch some English movies.English is so important that we need to learn it very well.If you want to learn English well,the following tips can help you.Before class,wed better read the textbook,and we are supposed to make a vocabulary list.In class,listening to the teacher carefully is a good way to learn English.Its also important to take notes.After class,we should memorize the words,and wed better watch some English movies.English is not so difficult.The most important thing is to put your heart into it.As the saying goes,Where there is a will,there is a way.beginning ending Key wordsCompare222024/2/28 周三23