大学生兼职.doc

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Part-time Jobs. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
　　1. 有些人赞成大学生做兼职, 有人反对
　　2. 我的看法
　　审题：1. 题目：College Students’ Part-time Jobs
　　2. 提纲：1. 有些人赞成大学生做兼职, 有人反对;2. 我的看法
　　题目关键词为: part-time jobs
　　3. 提纲转化为三条：
　　1. 有些人持相反意见
　　2. 有些人赞成大学生做兼职
　　3. 我的看法 (无需写出)
　　先结构：
　　联想新东方课堂所讲：三段或四段式结构，且每段只写一项内容。
　　以“三段式”为例：
　　后表达：(三方面：句、词、衔接)关键词罗列
　　1. 联想开篇句式：when it comes to …, people’ opinions differ/vary. 或者it is a common phenomenon for … to do sth, 或者 it can be noticed that an increasing number of …
　　将这些表达以关键词的形式列出：如： when… 或者 it is …
　　2. 转化主题句：
　　1) 有些人持反对意见- Others hold the opposite view.
　　理由：1. main task- academic study, 2. society complex- cheated
　　2) 有些人赞成大学生做兼职- hold the positive view
　　理由：1. ease financial burden 2. enrich experience
　　3) 我的看法- both right …….
　　3. 扩展成文
　　例文如下：
　　It can be noticed that an increasing number of college students are doing part-time jobs in their free time. However, people’ opinions on this issue vary greatly. Some hold the opposite view. Firstly, they claim that it is academic pursuit that is college students’ primary task. Secondly, owing to the complexity of the society, students may be easily cheated
　　Others, on the contrary, are of students’ part-time jobs. They argue that by doing part-time jobs, students can earn a little money to ease their parents’ financial burden. Besides, they believe that part-time jobs enable them to enrich their personal experience and broaden their horizons. Thus, they can acquire the knowledge which can not be obtained in campus.
　　Who is right? I think both sides have something right. Actually, part-time jobs can be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us both benefits and troubles. But we should not give up for fear of choking. The best policy, as I see it, is to maximize their advantages and minimize their unhealthy influences, so that they can benefit us in a better way. (最后一段属四、六级模板套用)。(182词)