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衡阳市第23中学2013-2014学年第 二 学期
题目：Writing
主备课人：周雪梅 审核人：
一、学法指导：
1．认真审题，明确要求
在提笔写作之前，花几分钟时间审题，并确定人称与时态。
2. 分析要点，拟定提纲
根据题目提示或说明，选择易于表达的材料作为自己写作的重点，列出提纲，避免在卷面上出现涂改现象。
3. 依纲据点，拓展成文，表达准确
(1)尽量使用自己熟悉的，有把握的句型
(2)几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板
(3)注意人称代词的主宾格，形容词性和名词性物主代词
(4)注意冠词、介词的用法
(5)注意英语中表时间和地点的短语通常放在句末
(6)上下文要连贯，适当运用过渡词
4. 书写工整，卷面整洁，勿忘检查
在写好作文后，从题目要求上对全文进行检查和修改，力求句子流畅，布局严谨。
二、写作中常见的错误
1.格式、拼写错误
英语作文格式与汉语作文格式不同之处在书信方面尤为明显。如中文书信收信人之后打冒号，而在英文书信中收信人之后应打逗号。其次，英文书信在结尾时习惯写上你的某某某，而汉语则无此习惯。拼写错误是写作中最不该犯的错误，学生如果粗心或基础知识不扎实因单词拼写错误（包括大小写）而丢分实在是太可惜。
2.单复数错误，不一致
单复数错误体现在可数名词由单数变复数时忘记改变形式，或者单数变复数的规则弄错，主要体现在加es，改f或fe为v再加es以及改y为i再加es等。
不一致现象则体现在主谓不一致，时态不一致和代词不一致等，尤其是第三人称单数be动词、助动词和动词的一般现在时形式以及某些句型的就近原则容易出错。
3.标点错误
英语中无顿号，顿号应当改为逗号。
英语中的句号为实心小圆点，“。”应改为“.”。
英语中的省略号为三点，中文中的省略号是六点。
英语中如果两个陈述句结构、意思完整则通常以“句号”结尾。
Unit7 & Unit8
一、教学目标：
1．掌握这两个单元写作中所学的重要单词，短语和句型
2．掌握本两个单元的重要介词及介词短语
3. 记住英语写作的基本要求，培养先列提纲理清思路，构建写作框架的习惯
4. 学生能根据提供的信息，按照要求写出60-80字的作文来。
二、教学重难点：
1. 围绕话题列出所需的单词、短语及有用的句型
2. 先列提纲搜集信息，再筛选组织信息
三、范文示例，巩固练习
作文主题1 ：
请以“My Mother’s Birthday”为题写一篇作文
写作提示：
1. November 2nd 2.celebrate
3. make a present 4.by myself(亲自）
5. a big dinner
作文模板：
思路点拨： 这是一篇给妈妈过生日的记叙文。首先要点明妈妈生日的具体时间，然后具体描写大家怎样给她过生日；根据提示，具体描写可以分两个部分：我的活动和爸爸的活动；结尾要表达自己对妈妈的爱及妈妈的感受。
My Mother’s Birthday
It’s November the second today. It’s my mother’s birthday. I want to celebrate it. I want to buy a beautiful dress for her, but I don’t have any money. So I think I can make a present by myself for her. The gift is a card with some words on it.My father cooks a big dinner.When I give my gift to her,she is very happy.I love my mother very much!

作文主题2 ：
假设你叫小明，请给你的同学Kate写一封信，向她介绍你家乡一年四季的情况。要求词数60左右。
写作提示:（短语、句型帮手）spring,warm, summer, hot, fall,cool,winter,make snowmen
作文模板：(思路点拨)
1. 要按照春夏秋冬四季顺序进行描写；
2. 每个季节可以从天气状况，气温高低，人的服饰及每个季节所适宜的活动等方面进行描写；
3. 写出自己最喜欢的季节及原因。
Dear Kate:
They are four seasons in my hometown. They are spring, summer, fall and winter. I like spring best,It’s warm in spring.Many things come back to life.It’s a good season to fly kites. I like flying kite very much.
Summer is very hot. People can go swimming in the water. It’s cool in fall.And it’s a good time to climb hills.Winter is cold. It sometimes snows.We can make snowman.
Yours,
Xiao Ming

作文主题3： My Trip in Beijing
请根据下列表格提示写一篇不少于60字的短文。
Traveler
Lin Tao and his mother
When
Last week
How
By train
Where
Beijing

Activity
Visited Kunming Lake
Watched the national flag go up
Enjoyed Beijing food
Climbed the Great Wall
作文模板：(思路点拨)
1. 首先认真看题，理解表格内容，确定短文应包括哪几个方面（who, when, how, where, activities);
2. 短文主要时态应是一般过去时；
3. 结尾要表达这次出游的感受。
My Trip in Beijing
My mom and I went to Beijing last week. I’m very happy to tell you something about my trip. We went there by train. We visited Kunming Lake and watched the national flag go up. We took a lot of photos when we climbed the Great Wall.Beijing food is very delicious. We had a good time in Beijing.

作文主题4 ：请以“The Spring Festive ”为题写一篇作文
写作提示:（短语、句型帮手）the most important，lunar January 1st
Prepare for,eve,decorate their homes,get together,dumplings ,On the morning of , put on, greet,lucky money
The Spring Festive
The Spring Festive is the most important festival in China. It’s on the lunar January 1st.Before the Spring Festive, people start preparing for it. They prepare delicious food, buy some new clothes and decorate their homes. On the Spring Festive eve, people usually get together for a big dinner, eat dumplings for good luck. On the morning of the Spring Festive, children often put on their new clothes and greet their family”Happy New Year”. Of course, They’re happy to get a lot of lucky money from their parents.

作文主题5 ：请以“My Summer Holiday’s Plan”为题写一篇作文
写作提示:（短语、句型帮手）
从天气，地点（参观的名胜），交通工具及携带的物品来写。
作文模板：(思路点拨)
请采用表示意愿和打算的句型来组织语言：
例如： plan to do.../ want to do.../ would like to do.../wish to do.../hope to do...
My Summer Holiday’s Plan
The summer holidays are coming. I plan to go to Yunnan with my parents for holiday.The weather in Yunnan is fine all year round. We can go there anytime.I wish to go there by plane. I want to visit Dali and Lijiang, because they are very beautiful. We want to go there by plane and we will take lots of photos there.I think I should wear a pair of glasses and a raincoat. I hope we will have a good time there.

自主练习：
假如你是李悦，Tina是你们班的外籍同学，本周末你们班安排一次郊游，请你写个留言告诉她以下情况；
1 时间，地点：本周六，海边(beach)。
2 注意事项：带照相机，帐篷，太阳镜。
3 活动内容：到海边后，做饭，讲故事，唱歌，做游戏等。
要求：可以适当地增加情节。词数60字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tina:
This Saturday we plan to have a trip to the beach.

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Yours,
Li Yue