高中英语短文改错解题技巧.ppt

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,.,*,Proof Reading,短文改错,1,.,Learning Objectives,After this period,youll be able to:,know the steps of correcting a composition.,know the common types of mistakes appeared in proofreading.,be sensitive to these kinds of mistakes while correcting a composition.,2,.,How to correct a passage,增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（,），并在,其下面,写上该加的词。,删除 把多余的词用斜线（,）划掉。,修改 在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词,下面,写上修改后的词。,注意：,1,、每处错误及其修改均,仅限一词,。,2,、只允许修改,10,处，多者（丛第,11,处起）不计分,The rules,3,.,I like playing piano.,I can return to,home,now.,I major at accounting.,the,in,4,.,Our English teacher begin to teach us last year.She have been teaching English for more than twenty year.She likes we,and she is very strict in all of us.Although she is a bit old and not so beautifully,but we consider her as our mother.She is really good teacher.We are love her very much.We,re sure we,ll get in well with each other.,example,5,.,Steps of correcting a composition:,1.,g,o through,.,a general idea,.,2.sentence by sentence,.obvious,3.check,.,difficult.,6,.,1.,通读全文，把握大意,2.,细读全文，仔细斟酌,3.,再读全文,复核审查,The method of correcting,改明显错误,对照,考点,，排除法,Note,:,7,.,Our English teacher begin to teach us,last year.She have been teaching,English for more than twenty year.,She likes we,and she is very,strict in all of us.Although she is,a bit old and not so beautifully,but we consider her as our mother.,She is really good teacher.,We are love her very much.We,re,sure we,ll get in well with each other,began,has,years,us,with,beautiful,a,on,cooperation,8,.,例题,错误点归纳,动词时态,主谓一致,名词,代词,介词,形、副,连词,冠词,动词,习惯用法,9,.,词法,句法,行文逻辑,名词,冠词,代词的指代一致,形容词、副词,动词语态时态、主谓一致,非谓语动词,惯用法与固定搭配,命,题,考,点,10,.,动词形，名词数，,还要注意形和副；,非谓语，细辨别，,代词格，细领悟；,介词短语常常考，,习惯用法要记住；,句子成分多分析，,逻辑错误须关注，,冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错口诀：,11,.,group work,group 1,一、动词形,group2,二、名词数,group 3,三、形和副,group 4,四、非谓语,group 5,五、代词,group 6,六、介词,group 7,七、冠词、连词,12,.,一、动词形,1.When he gets home,he saw the animal waiting at the door,still wearing his jacket with the wallet in the pocket.,2.In Grade Eight I took physics.In one test I get only 36 percent of the answers correct.,got,got,13,.,Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.,You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers,magazines and the other books,but you are not permit to take them out .,wishes,permitted,Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.,likes,14,.,动词形,主要包括两类错误：动词的,时态,和,语态,错误，以及,主、谓不一致,的错误。,15,.,二、名词数,2007,陕西卷：,Personally,I found most,lesson rather uninteresting.,2008,浙江卷：,A nearby company was looking after students with good handwriting to write addresses on evenlope.The pay were 10 cents per envelope.,lessons,evenlopes,16,.,名词考察的是,名词单、复数形式,17,.,三、还要注意形和副,I got to the finishing line first.I won the race.I felt very proudly of myself.,We can hear birds singing happy all around.,proud,happily,18,.,There have been reports in America about people trying to steal personally information for bad purposes.,So what I learned from the job was much important than,what I earned.,19,.,命题特点及改正方法：,主要考查形容词和副词的误用、形容词及副词的,比较级,等。,1,）根据,adj.,或,adv.,的基本用法确定错误；,2,）修饰连系动词或名词用形容词；,3,）修饰行为动词、形容词、过去分词及整个句子用副词。,还要注意形和副,20,.,四、非谓语，细辨别,I could not to run very fast and fell behind.,Li Meng came see me every day.,to,We all enjoyed this precious day greatly,remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with.,remembering,21,.,My parents will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.,Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English.,22,.,非谓语有三种形式，分别是 1)_,表示_2)_,表示_3)_,表示_,命题特点改正方法：,1,）谓语动词和非谓语动词的错用；,2,）动词不定式和动名词的错用；,3,）现在分词和过去分词的错用等,23,.,五,、,代词,格，,细领悟,24,.,I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievement,.,Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!,our,myself,25,.,For me,what we enjoy most is painting.,A woman got on the bus,but there was no empty seat and he had to stand.,26,.,代词常见错误：,1.,女性代词指代男性或相反；,2.,单数指代复数；,3.,代词词性误用。,改正方法：联系上下文的逻辑关系,。,代词的错误特点：,1.,人称代词的偷换错误,2.,缺少人称代词的错误,3.,人称代词数的一致问题,4.,人称代词格的一致问题,27,.,in Sunday afternoon,catch a sight of,lose my heart,in hurry,a,on,六、介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,1)I was so tired that I fell asleep in the moment my head touched the pillow.,2)The main problem was,in that I always thought with Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.,28,.,1)I was so tired that I fell asleep in the moment my head touched the pillow.,2)The main problem was,in that I always thought with Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.,29,.,命题特点及改正方法：,介词涉及搭配错误，因此可从以下方面确定错误：,1,）介词的,基本用法,；,2,）,习惯,搭配。,介词短语常常考，,固定搭配要记牢,介词后边跟宾语,结合语境细推敲,。,30,.,七、句子成分多分析,She looked at me and started to laugh.,“,How are you laughing?,”,I asked.,I was lucky enough to have a teacher which didn,t take my bad grades as a judgement of my abilities,but,who/that,Why,31,.,不同的,句子成分要用,不同的词类,；,不同的语境要选择不同的词语,。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。,32,.,八、逻辑错误须关注,与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的,张冠李戴,。,Some students may also save up for our college or future use.,their,for example,when he bought a chocolate cake,he put them in a secret place that I couldn t find.,it,33,.,常考的错误形式有：,连词,but,however,and,or,because,so,when,before,after,的用法错误，以及,冠词,的用法错误等。,I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things Im doing at the school,An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms.,a,a,九、冠词、连词常光顾,34,.,冠词：特指用_,泛指用_.,连词：连词but,however,and,or,because,so,when,before,after等的用法错误,35,.,She always made sure that our homework was finished on time,but she marked strictly on our actual performance.,and,36,.,改错命题,统计,语篇的测试包括：,1,上下文中的,时态,是否一致；,2,上下文中的,代词,是否一致；,3,上下文中的,逻辑,是否一致；,4,上下文中的,词、词组、从句的替代,是否正确。,37,.,consolidation,At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!They put them in the corner of the sitting.room.Kate was covered it with a lot of Christmas light.The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment.There was a fire burning in the fire place,but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly.Jim and her parents singing and dancing happily.,38,.,At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his,father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose,a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!,They put them in the corner of the sitting,_,on,_,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,代词格，细领悟,consolidation,39,.,room.Kate was covered it with a lot of,Christmas light.The sitting room looked,really beautifully at the moment.There was,a fire burning in the fire place,but the Christmas,tree lights were shinning brightly.Jim and h,er,parents singing and dancing happily.,was,_,lights,_,_,beautiful,_,and,his,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,冠词连词须关注,consolidation,逻辑错误须关注,_,40,.,短文改错口诀：,动词形，名词数，,还要注意形和副；,非谓语，细辨别，,代词格，细领悟；,介词短语常常考，,习惯用法要记住；,句子成分多分析，,逻辑错误须关注，,冠词连词常光顾。,41,.,短文改错应注意的问题,四不改,:,标点符号不改。,大小写不改。,词序错误不改。,单词拼写不改。,Dont forget!,42,.,practice,43,.,When I was in high school,most of my friend had bicycles.I hoped I could also have it.One day I saw a second-hand bicycle,that was only one hundred yuan.I asked my father with the money.But he said he could only give me half of the money.He should find other half myself.So I went to sell newspapers after the school.My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after.He gives me the other fifty.You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.,friends,one,which,for,I,when,later,gave,the,44,.,Now here are the weather report for our city.,1._,Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature,2._,3 in the daytime.In the evenings,the temperature,3._,will fell down below zero.The temperature,4._,will be,8.The day before tomorrow,there,5._,is,a,evening,fall,after,2009,高考英语短文改错模拟训练,45,.,will be the strong wind and the temperature will,6._,be low.It will fall down to,10.You had,7._,better to wear your warm clothes.If you are a,8._,driver,youd better be more carefully when,9._,you are driving because the strong wind.,10._,a,to,careful,of,2009,高考英语短文改错模拟训练,46,.,