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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,图表类作文写作办法,基础写作,Basic writing,第1页,第1页,这类题目基本不要求考生对写作内容进行发挥，主要将所给信息用个句子完整准确连贯表示出来.事实上就是翻译，连词成句，扩句成文主要考察同窗们三方面能力:,信息处理或整理能力;如信息之间能否合并为逻辑,关系或处理先后顺序等,B.组词造句能力;如内容和语言表示准,确性和适当性,C.连句成文能力;信息内容完整性和连贯性,基础写作特点：,第2页,第2页,审题,列要点,依要点,拟草纲,组织成句.,构篇章,扩句成文.,检查润色,书写,基础写作解题环节：,第3页,第3页,人民饮食习惯改变表,Grain,49%,47%,45%,40%,Milk,10%,12%,18%,30%,Meat,17%,21%,28%,34%,vegetable,24%,22%,20%,20%,1)是以,表格,形式,将统计数据或被阐明事物直接用表格形式表达出来.,侧重于数据排序。,图表类作文形式及特点:,第4页,第4页,%,20,40,60,80,100,1995,State-owned,private,美国近年住房产权改变情况,2)表示数据大小或数量之间差别,柱状图,侧重于数据对比.,第5页,第5页,近年来看电影与看电视人数改变情况。,(a):Number of TV watchers,(b):Number of film goers,Number of People(in thousands),A,B,3)表示数据改变,曲线图,侧重数据改变过程.,第6页,第6页,A,Percentage of Average Family Expense in,B,Percentage of Average Family Expense in,Housing,25%,other,57%,Housing,32%,other,46%,Food,drink,22%,Food,drink,18%,4)表示总体内部结构改变,扇形图,。,与平均家庭开支情况改变表.,侧重内部结构数据改变.,第7页,第7页,第一、开门见山地点明本图表所反应主题(1句),第二、分析描写数据间主要差别及趋势(3句),第三、归纳总结或发表评论(1句),图表作文普通结构：,前提:结合写作内容.,第8页,第8页,1.The graph/chart/table above,the above graph/chart,it can be,seen,that.,3.,(正如),is shown in the graph,.,4.,has been shown from the table that,第一步：,shows,From,As,It,图表类阐明文写作环节,开门见山地点明本图表所反应主题,即,conclusion,.,常使用词汇有:,（图表/数据）：,table,chart,graph，figure（数据）；,动词：,describe，tell,show,represent,惯用句型：,第9页,第9页,第二步：,分析数据间,主要差别及趋势,，然后描写（在描写数据间改变及总趋势特性时，可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要理由）。注意层次。即,facts and reasons,增长/减少表示:,表示上升动词:,rise，increase，climb，go up,；,表示上升名词:,rise，increase,;,表示下降动词:,fall，decline，decrease，drop，go down,;,表示下降名词:,fall，decline，decrease，drop,；,表示平稳,:,remain steady/unchanged,第10页,第10页,惯用句型：（,Facts）,1.There was,a great/slight increase/rise,in,2.There has been,a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop,in,3.The rate,dropped slightly from,38%in,to,31%in,4.,By comparison with,it decreased/increased/fell fromto,5.Statistics show,a 20%rise/reduction,in traffic accidents,compared with,last year.,6.The population owning mobile phones,increased by 10%,in 1999,.,第11页,第11页,倍数表示:,five times as many as,doubled,four,more,1.The number/rate has nearly _,（是两倍）,as against that of last year.,2.The number is,that of.（是5倍),=The number is,times,than in(比多倍),第12页,第12页,Reasons:,1.The reason,is that,2.One may think of the change,as a,of,3.The change in largely,results,_,the fact that,.This,brings,the important fact,that,.is,the key,(原因)in,.It is because of _,result,why/for,from,out,factor,that,第13页,第13页,惯用表示：,in a,/in short,（简而言之）/,_,speaking（总来说）,2.,summary,it is important,3.From what has been discussed above,we can,(得出结论）that,4.,_,（很明显地）,if we want to,it is necessary,_(毫无疑问)attention must be paid to,I _(提议)the government take effective measures to,_,I think(就我来看)the“golden week”should remain,for,Obviously/Apparently,draw the conclusion,In,word,generally,There is no doubt that,第三步：,suggest,Personally,归纳总结或发表评论。,第14页,第14页,广东高考基础写作真题回放,偶像(idol),女生,男生,伟人,18%,18%,父母,25%,11%,影视明星,50%,14%,体育明星,6%,48%,没有偶像,1%,9%,上周,我们以“谁是你偶像”为题,在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey).下列是调查数据:,第15页,第15页,依据以上数据,写一篇短文,包括下列内容;,调查时间,调查问题以及调核对象,男女生在以明星为偶像方面差别;,“父母”在男女生偶像中排序差别;,男女声在以伟人为偶像方面异同;,你偶像及理由,只能使用5个句子表示所有内容;,文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.,句子结构准确;信息内容完整;篇章结构连贯.,写作内容:,写作要求:,评分原则:,第16页,第16页,拟定类型,2.拟定体裁,3.拟定主体时态,4.拟定主体人称,一、审题:(四拟定),第三人称,普通现在时,阐明文,图表型,第17页,第17页,我偶像是,由于.(选择其中一个代表),二 列要点,调查时间,调查问题以及调核对象,2.男女生在以明星为偶像方面差别;,3.“父母”在男女生偶像中排序差别;,4.男女生在以伟人为偶像方面异同;,5.你偶像及理由,上周,“谁是你偶像”,2600名学生,48%男生以体育明星为偶像,50%女生以影视明星为偶像,“父母”在男生中排第4,在女生中排第2.,18%男生以伟人为偶像,18%女生以伟人为偶像.,第18页,第18页,三 依要点,拟草纲,组织成句.,1.,上周,我们在2600名学生中做了个关于“谁是你偶像”调查.,2.50%女生以影视明星为偶像,而48%男生以体育明星为偶像.,3.“父母”在女生偶像中排列第二,而在男生偶像中却排列倒数第二.,4.男生在选择以伟人为偶像百分比跟女生选择百分比同样.,5.我偶像是,由于.,第19页,第19页,1.上周,我们在2600名学生中做了个关于“谁是你,偶像”调查.,2.50%女生以影视明星为偶像,而48%男生以体育明星为偶像.,3.“父母”在女生偶像列表中排列第二,而在男生偶像列表中却排列倒数第二.,4.男生在选择以伟人为偶像百分比跟女生选择百分比同样.,5.我偶像是,由于.,Last week,we did a survey among 2,600 students on“Who is your idol”.,50%of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,but 48%of the boys choose sports stars.,“Parents”is the second in the girls list,but the second from the bottom in the boys list.,The percentage of the boys who choose“great figures”is the same as the percentage of the girls.,My idol is,because.,第20页,第20页,四 构篇章,扩句成文.,Last week,we did a survey among 2,600 students on“Who is your idol”.50%of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,but 48%of the boys choose sports stars.“Parents”is the second in the girls list,but the second from the bottom in the boys list.The percentage of the boys who choose“great figures”is the same as the percentage of the girls.My idol is,because.,注意:文章结构,句子连贯性.,Last week,we did a survey among 2,600 students on“Who is your idol”.,50%of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,but 48%of the boys choose sports stars.,“Parents”is the second in the girls list,but the second from the bottom in the boys list.,The percentage of the boys who choose“great figures”is the same as the percentage of the girls.,My idol is,because.,第21页,第21页,指文章语意通顺和语言形式紧密衔接并符合一定逻辑关系。,要使文章前后衔接紧密，可采用下列办法：,1.恰当使用关联词.,2.巧妙使用意思有联系词或语句,3.适当使用过渡性语句,文章连贯性,第22页,第22页,1.恰当使用关联词,如:but,when，so，if，because，so that等。,1)People have found mobile phones very convenient _they can get in touch with each other whenever and wherever they like.,2)This village used to be very small and poor,_,it has changed a lot since 1978.,3)Id like to know _we are allowed to cancel our tickets booking _we can not make the tour for our personal reason.,if/whether,if,because,but,第23页,第23页,2.巧妙使用意思有联系词或语句,如:First,Second,Third,Soon,most excitingly,Whats more,whats worse,As a result等。,All the school-age children can study here._,they enjoy free education in it.,The birds dodo were killed for food on a large number._,they died out at last.,Eating sugar is bad for our teeth._,it may make us fat.,As a result,Whats worse,Whats more,第24页,第24页,3.适当使用过渡性语句,如:The reasons are as follows.,Every coin has two sides.,All roads lead to Rome.,As the result/survey shows.,We can draw an conclusion.等,Now in the country areas,there are many children out of school._.First，most families are too poor to send their children to school.Second,some parents think there is no need for their daughters,to go to school.Third,The reasons are as follows,第25页,第25页,Television is not only a convenient source of entertainment,but also a comparatively cheap one.But_,television also has disadvantages,such as its effects on young people.,every coin has two sides,3.适当使用过渡性语句,如:The reasons are as follows.,Every coin has two sides.,All roads lea to Rome.,As the result/survey shows.,We can draw an conclusion.等,第26页,第26页,四 构篇章,扩句成文.,Last week,we did a survey among 2,600 students on“Who is your idol”._50%of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,but 48%of the boys choose sports stars._“Parents”is the second in the girls list,but the second from the bottom in the boys list._the percentage of the boys who choose“great figures”is the same as the percentage of the girls._My idol is,because.,The result shows that,Furthermore,However,As for myself,第27页,第27页,五 检查润色,Last week,we did a survey among 2,600 students on“Who is your idol”._50%of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,but 48%of the boys choose sports stars._“parents”is the second in the girls list,but the second from the bottom in the boys list._the percentage of the boys who choose“great figures”is the same as the percentage of the girls._my idol is,because.,prefer/favor,The result shows that,Whats more,while,However,As for myself,that,第28页,第28页,Last week,we did a survey among 2,600 students on“Who is your idol”.,The result shows that,50%of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,while 48%of the boys favor sports stars.Whats,more,“,parents”is the second in the girls list,but the second from the bottom in the boys list.,However,the percentage of the boys who choose“great figures”is the same as that of the girls.,As for myself,my idol is,because.,六 书写,第29页,第29页,Last week,we did a survey among 2,600 students on“Who is your idol”.,The survey shows that,50%of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,while 48%of the boys favor sports stars.,As the data shows,“,parents”ranks the second for the girls,but the fourth for the bys.,However,the percentage of the boys choosing“great figures”is the same as that of the girls.,As for myself,My idol is Thomas Edison,because his inventions has greatly changed our life.,Possible version:,第30页,第30页,基础写作,星期一,我们开了个班会讨论“上大学是高中生唯一出路吗?”以下图表是讨论结果.,Percentage,实战演练,Is it the only way out to go to college?,第31页,第31页,写作内容:,写作要求:,评分原则:,只能使用5个句子表示所有内容;,文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.,句子结构准确;信息内容完整;篇章结构连贯.,依据以上图表数据,写一篇短文,包括下列内容;,1.增长知识,提升素养(quality),利于择业,2.成功路不只一条.,3.学费(tuition)高,就业难.,4.你观点及原因.,第32页,第32页,拟定类型,2.拟定体裁,3.拟定主体时态,4.拟定主体人称,一、审题:(四拟定),第一人称/第三人称,普通现在时,阐明文,图表型,第33页,第33页,二 列要点,讨论时间,讨论问题以及讨论地点.,星期一,上大学是否是高中生唯一出路,班会课上.,2.增长知识,提升素养(qualities),利于择业,60%同窗认为要上大学,3.成功路不只一条.,30%同窗认为上不上大学无所谓,4.学费(tuition)高,就业难.,10%同窗不上大学,5.你观点及原因.,就我来说,由于,第34页,第34页,三 依要点,拟草纲,组织成句.,四 构篇章,扩句成文.,五 检查润色,六 书写,第35页,第35页,星期一我们在班会课上就“上大学是不是高中生唯一出路”展开了讨论.,2.60%同窗认为高中生毕业后应上大学,由于上大学不但能够增长我们知识,提升我们素养,尚有助于我们选择职业.,3.30%同窗认为,成功路不只一条,我们不一定要上大学.,4.10%同窗认为,大学学费高,毕业后就业难度大,不想要上大学.,5.在我看来,三 依要点,拟草纲,组织成句.,We had a discussion on“is it the only way out for senior students to go to college?”at our class meeting on Monday.,There are 30%of the students think that“All roads lead to Rome”,and think it is not important whether they go to college or not.,10%students think that they dont go to college for its high tuition and the difficulty of finding jobs after graduated.,60%of us consider it very necessary to go to college because it can help us to improve our knowledge as well as our quality,which will be an advantage to find a good job.,第36页,第36页,On Monday,we had a discussion about whether it is the only way out for senior students to go to college at the class meeting.,60%of us consider it very necessary to go to college because it can help us to improve our knowledge as well as our quality,which will be an advantage to find a good job.,30%of the students hold the view of“all roads lead to Rome”,thinking it doesnt make any difference whether they will go to college or not.,However,the others confirm they dont go to college for its high tuition and it is hard for college graduates to find jobs.,In my opinion,we can receive a better education at college so that we can make greater contributions in the future.,第37页,第37页,现在越来越多人们开始意识到受到好教育是很主要.,Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that,Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that its important to be well educated.,2)With the rapid growth of,have become increasingly important in our daily life.,With the rapid growth of intelligence technology,computer has become increasingly important in our daily life.,3)One of the hottest topics many people talk about now is,One of the hottest topics many people talk about now is the Olympic Games to be held in Beijing.,2),伴随信息技术快速发展,电脑在我们日常生活中已经变得越来越主要了.,3)现在人们热烈讨论话题之一是将在北京举办奥运.,第38页,第38页,4)至于说到我，我赞成前一个观点。因此，我结论是，只要我们坚持正确东西，更正错误东西，我们就一定能成功。,As far as Im concerned,Im in favour of the former view.Therefore,my conclusion is that we are certain to succeed as long as we stick to what is right and correct what is wrong.,5)毫无疑问我们应当马上关注人口快速增长问题.,There is no doubt that immediate attention must be paid to the problem of the rapid increase in the population,4)As far as Im concerned,.Therefore,my conclusion is that,5)There is no doubt that immediate attention must be paid to the problem of,第39页,第39页,依据所给图表,用5句话写一篇题为“电影与电视”短文。,短文须包括下列要求:,A.电影观众人数呈逐年下降趋势;,B.电视观众人数越来越多(原因:以便、经济、选择范围);,C.然而还是有些人喜欢看电影(原因:气氛、娱乐)。,参考词汇:decrease v.下降 atmosphere n.气氛,entertainment n.娱乐 film goer/TV watcher电影/电视观众,(a):Number of TV watchers,(b):Number of film goers,Number of People(in thousands),A,B,Homework,第40页,第40页,参考范文:,1,From the table,we can see that film is giving way to TV in our city.,2,For example,in 1992,there were less than 10 thousand TV watchers,more than 80 thousand film goers,while in,we had about 1 million TV watchers but only about 10 thousand film goers.,3,The number of film goers is decreasing and that of TV watchers is increasing.,4,Televisions are quite common nowadays and so more and more people turn to TV because it is convenient and cheap and watchers have a wide range of programs for them to choose from.,5,At the same time,there are still some people who prefer films because they like the atmosphere in the cinema as well as the entertainment,第41页,第41页,Thank you!,第42页,第42页,