全国大学生英语六级考试写作技巧.doc

第一段
1. 对比法
2. 数据法
3. 描述图画
4. 描述图表
5. 解释话语

现象句模版
1. A public debate has arisen concerning …
2. Recently, the problem of …has aroused people’s concern.
3. It should come as no surprise to learn that…
4. Nowadays, people in growing number are being to complain that …
5. One of the most serious problems many people talk about centers on…
6. One of the pressing problem facing our nation today is …
7. Never before in history has the issue of …been more evident than now.
8. …is a new and bitter truth we must learn to face.
9. There is a general discussion these days over…One of the questions under debate is whether …
10. There is a growing worldwide awareness of …
11. Whether …is a good thing or not is very popular topic, which is often talked about not only by city residents but by farmers as well.
12. For years, extensive research efforts have been focused on…
13. …is a delicate problem with which our country is confronted.
14. Recent years have been a tendency that increasing number of…
15. Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is…
16. The prevalence of …has been a big problem in our society. Almost every day newspaper carry articles pertaining to problem. Despite measures have been implemented to deal with this problem, it still remains a serious threat.
17. Not a single day passed without the report of …
18. There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards…
19. Recently, an increasing number of reports about …have appeared in the media.
20. There is no denying the fact that …is an extremely serious problem.

1- 越来越多的国企工人由于企业改革而被下岗.
2- 分析原因.
3- 该怎么办？
Recent years have been a tendency that more and more workers were laid off for a series of reforms are carried out in the state-owned enterprises.

亮点1：more and more
1. An accumulating number of
2. A gathering number of
3. A increasing number of
4. A mushrooming number of
5. …in mounting numbers
6. A surging number of
7. An amassing number of
8. the number of…is on the rise/ is accumulating/ is surging
Recent years have been a tendency that an amassing number of workers were laid off for a series of reforms are implemented in the state-owned enterprises.In the past, few workers had been laid off for this kind of reason. What brings this result?

1- (越来越多的)大学生压力越来越大
2- 分析原因
3- 如何解决？
Nowadays, one of the most serious problems many people talk about centers onthat anaccumulating number of college students are facing the increasing amount of pressure and competition.

Nowadays, one of the most serious problems many people talk about centers on accumulating number of college students areconfronted with the increasing amount of pressure and competition.
Be encumbered with
But just 10 years ago, university students hadn’t experienced this kind of pressure.

亮点2：not 的不明显原则
Hardly/ rarely/ scarcely/ barely/seldom
But just decade ago, hardly had any university students experienced this kind of tension.
What brings this result? The main reason rests with the following aspects.

Nowadays, one of the most serious problems many people talk about centers onaccumulating number of college students areencumbered with the increasing amount of pressure and competition. But just decade ago, hardly had any university students experienced this kind of tension. What brings this result? The main reason rests with the following aspects.

原因过渡模版
1. Why? There are a number of factors accounting for this phenomenon.
2. Many reasons should be responsible for this unpleasant situation.
3. The main reasons probably lie in the following points.
4. There’s no easy job to find the reasons for this tendency which involves several complicated factors.
5. What is to account for this? Now let me enumerate the reasons in the following.
6. Couple of factors gave rise to this tendency nowadays.
7. Explanation for this problem involves many factors.
8. The main reason rests with the following aspects.
9. Several factors spawned this phenomenon.
10. The deep root of this phenomenon lies in the following aspects.
11. A multitude of factors could contribute to the phenomenon.

1-去图书馆的人越来越少
2-分析原因
3-如何改善
There has been undesirable trend in recent years that adecreasing number of people go to libraries to read and to study. But just 2 decades ago, a lot of people went to libraries for knowledge. There are several reasons accounting for this phenomenon.

亮点3：people 的替换
citizen, inhabitant, dweller, resident, teenager, youngster, staff, employer, employee, teacher, instructor, trainer, student, pupil, individual, adolescence, clerk, officer, entrepreneur…

亮点4： A lot of 的替换
A considerable number of, a great deal of, enormous, a mass of, a tremendous amount of, vast quantity of, numerous, millions of, a huge crowd, a bunch of

亮点5：Go to的替换
swarm into, pour into, crowd into, flock into, pump into, flood into, step into
There has been undesirable trend in recent years that adecreasing number of citizens, esp. teenagers step into libraries to read and to study. But just 2 decades ago, numerous readers swarmed into the reading room for knowledge. There are several reasons accounting for this phenomenon.

1-邻里关系越来越不好
2-分析原因
3-如何解决
Contemporarily, a new and bitter truth we must learn to face is that the relationship between neighbors is getting worse. However, just decades ago, the neighborhood relationship in china was quite close. The deep root of this phenomenon lies in the following aspects.

亮点6：however/but的替换
1. on the contrary, reversely, by contrast
2. fortunately, unfortunately. It’s only the part of the picture.
3. ugly as it was.
4. the other side of the picture is quite opposite.

Get worse:
Indifferent, deteriorate, decline.
Close:
Harmonious, sweet, peaceful

Contemporarily, a new and bitter truth we must learn to face is that the relationship between neighbors is getting indifferent. Ugly as it was, just decades ago, the neighborhood relationship in china was quite harmonious. The deep root of this phenomenon lies in the following aspects.

数据法
1- 越来越多的人喜欢超女
2- 分析原因
3- 你的看法

Nowadays, it should come as no surprise to learn that anaccumulating number of people like “super-girl show”.

亮点7：like的替换
1. Like-love-Be interested in
2. Be fond of-Be crazy about-Interest
3. In Favor Of-Fancy-Be Keen On
4. Attract-Take great delight in
5. Appeal to-Fascinate
6. Exert a peculiar fascination on
7. Create a surge enthusiasm for
8. Find a keen relish in

亮点8：名词至上。名词可以使你的语言有别于别人，形成梯度感。
Can I help you?
Can I be of any help, sir?
Do I have to wait for a long time for a seat?
Is there too much wait to be seated?

It should come as no surprise to learn that “super-girl show” exerts a peculiar fascination on an accumulating number of people.
It should come as no surprise to learn that “super-girl show” exerts a peculiar fascination on an accumulating number of audience, esp. on young generation.
It should come as no surprise to learn that “super-girl show”, for my own part, exerts a peculiar fascination on an accumulating number of audience, esp. on young generation.

亮点9：长难句。
长难句的组成不是语法堆砌的，而是取决于你词的选择。
It should come as no surprise to learn that “super-girl show”, for my own part, exerted a peculiar fascination on an accumulating number of audience, esp. on young generation.（30）
It should come as no surprise to learn that accumulating number of people like “super-girl show”.（15）

数据模版
1. from a close study, we learned that…
2. as an observation indicated that…
3. according to a survey conducted among a group of people, …
4. a recent investigation shows that …
5. a brief inquiry demonstrates that …
6. all reliable information points to the fact that…
7. according to the figures given in a recent poll, …
8. according to a statistics, …
9. a questionnaire suggests that…

It should come as no surprise to learn that “super-girl show”, for my own part, exerted a peculiar fascination on an accumulating number of audience, esp. on young generation.According to a statistics, the audience rating is up to 47% high. What is to account for this? Now let me enumerate the reasons in the following.

1- 越来越多的中学生出国留学
2- 分析原因
3- 我们应该正确看待出国留学
Never before in history has the issue of studying abroad been more popular thannow. A brief inquiry demonstrates that more than 12% of high school students went abroad for further studies. And nearly 57% students want to study in overseas countries. Why? Couple of factors gave rise to this tendency nowadays.

亮点10 ：Want的替换：
1. Would rather
2. Tend to
3. Be tempted to
4. Be inclined to
5. Be eager to
6. Attempt to
7. Be willing to

Never before in history has the issue of studying abroad been more evident thannow. A brief inquiry demonstrates that more than 12% of high school students went abroad for further studies. And nearly 57% students are inclined to study in overseas countries. Why? Couple of factors gave rise to this tendency nowadays.

亮点11：4大黄金副词
1. Minimally
2. Approximately
3. Overwhelmingly
4. Contemporarily

Never before in history has the issue of studying abroad been more evident than now. A brief inquiry demonstrates thatminimally 12.32% of high school students poured into countries, such as US and UK, for further studies. And approximately 57.19% students are inclined to study in overseas countries. Why? Couple of factors gave rise to this tendency nowadays.

1- 越来越多的父母给孩子找家教
2- 分析坏处和影响
3- 应该如何正确对待？

Recent years have been a tendency that parents in growing numbers would rather find private tutors for their children. According to a survey conducted among a group of people,approximately 74.07% of the primary school pupils have their private tutors.

亮点12：危害性的过渡句，名言警句。
1- There is no doubt that it had exerted a great detriment on us.
2- It’s known to all that ___ are dangerous harmful to both the society and the individual.
3- All rose have thorns/ No garden is without weeds
4- Every sword has 2 edges/ Every coin has 2 sides.
5- Every advantage has its disadvantages

亮点13：表明观点：替换think
Assume- argue- hold- claim- suggest- declare- assert-
state- believe- insist- maintain- reckon- in my opinion

利弊衔接句
1. …is more disadvantage.
2. The disadvantage far outweigh the advantage
3. Its disadvantages carry more weight than its advantages
4. As far as I am concerned, I trust the disadvantages exceed the advantages.
5. It does more harm than good to…

Recent years have been a tendency that parents in growing numberswould rather find private tutors for their children. According to a survey conducted among a group of people,approximately 74.07% of the primary school pupils have their private instructors. Every coin has 2 sides. Yet in my opinion, it does more harm than good to school pupils.

1- 网瘾问题越来越严重
2- 危害性
3- 如何解决？

There is no denying the fact that internet addiction is an extremely serious problem. All reliable information points to the fact thatapproximately 58.13% of netizens spent minimally 30hours a week on internet. There is no doubt that it had exerted a great detriment on us.

1- 越来越多人觉得英语教育失败,学生根本无法和外国人交流
2- 分析原因
3- 如何解决？

Nowadays, people in growing number are being to complain that college English education is quite a failure in China. A recent investigation shows thatapproximately 65.97% of graduates can’t communicate with foreigners, let alone write in English. Several factors spawned this phenomenon.

A recent investigation shows thathardly can any, approximately 65.97% of graduates, communicate with foreigners, let alone write in English.

Let alone do = not to mention doing

Nowadays, people in growing number are being to complain that college English education is quite a failure in China. a recent investigation shows thathardly can any, approximately 65.97% of graduates, communicate with foreigners, let alone write in English. Several factors spawned this phenomenon.

解释话语
2011/12
Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe. "is quite provoking. The saying aims at informing us of a truth that hardly can anyone get things perfectly done without adequate preparation. There are sufficient reasons and evidence to testify the righteousness of my understanding.

2013/12
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying “Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

It is quite provoking to hear an old saying “Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” The saying aims at informing us of a truth that hardly can anyone gain their happiness without striving. There are sufficient reasons and evidence to testify the righteousness of my understanding.

描述图表
2012/6
We can see from the illustrationthere is a father talking to his daughter. In the conversation,the dad asks his daughter “how was school today?”， his daughter would rather tell her father to read all about it on her blog than inform him face to face. This phenomenon demonstrates thatinternet communication has changed the traditional face to face communication.

2002/6
Reading this chart, we can find thatthe average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week has increased sharply. According to the statistic of the chart,in 1990, it was less than 2 hours; and in 1995, it increased to almost 4 hours; while in 2000, the number soared to 20 hours. Obviously,students tend to use computers more and more nowadays. The reasons are listed as follows.

第二段
1-原因分析
2-利弊分析

分析原因
1. 自身的原因
2. 对方的原因
3. 社会的大原因或者外界因素

1. The first reason for their choice is, they maintain, that... Besides, … They go on to point out ... What’s more important, they also claim that…
2. One of the most common factors is…/…is also responsible for the problem. Another contributing factor is…Perhaps the primary factor is …
3. On the one side, ... On the other side, .... Furthermore, ...
4. Initially, ... What’s worse, ... What’s worst, ....
5. For one thing, ... For another, ... Still, ...
6. For the simple reason that...

图书馆人越来越少原因分析：
1. 工作压力大，忙于工作，没时间去。
2. 书跟不上时代，人们找不到自己的书就不会去了。
3. 科技发展，电脑走进千家万户，人们可以上网轻松找到自己所有自己需要的信息。

For one thing, city people are busy to cope with the quick pace and stress of their lives and works. They can’t spend too much time reading in the libraries.
For one thing, city residents are busy coping with the quick pace and heavy pressure of their lives and work. Hardly can they spend a great deal of time reading in the libraries.

For another thing, you wouldn't come again if you di