如何用英语介绍节日写作学案-2-高三英语写作专项提升.docx

如何用英语介绍节日
【写作任务】
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom发来邮件向你了解中国的传统节日一 重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请你用英语给他回—封电子邮件，要点包 括：
1. 该节日的庆祝时间、历史、意义；
2. 人们的庆祝方式。
注意：1.词数1（）（）左右（开头和结尾己给出，但不计入总词数）；2.可适当 增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I'm very pleased to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about the Double Ninth Festival.
Hope this helps. Wish you all the best!
Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】一、审题定调
本写作任务要求给美国笔友Tom回一封电子邮件，向他介绍中国的传统节 日一重阳节，属于应用文。介绍节日时应注意三个要素，即when（庆祝时间）， why （节日的意义），how （庆祝方式）。
二、谋篇布局
就本写作而言，我们可以将文章分为三部分：
第一部分：引出话题（已给出）；
第二部分：具体介绍节日（包括庆祝时间、历史、意义及庆祝方式等）；
第三部分：总结全文（已给出）。
三、组织语言介绍节日的庆祝时间、历史等。
普通表达
... is celebrated on ...
It has a long history （of about... years）.
高级表达
... which dates back to / dates from falls on ...
介绍节日的意义介绍人们庆祝节日的方式
普通表达
★People miss their relatives who are far away on the day.
★ It is also a festival for ...
*... is the most famous traditional festival in China.
高级表达
★The festival is dedicated to （作之用）the memory of relatives
living far away.
★Nowadays, it has turned into a festival for ...
★People attach great importance to this festival.
普通表达
★People will try to go back home and visit...
★... will also climb mountains to enjoy the beautiful view with family members.
★During this festival, people like to enjoy chrysanthemums （菊花）in the parks and they will cat...
高级表达
★People will try to go back home to give best wishes to ...
★... will climb mountains to have a bird's-eye view of the beautiful scenery with family members.
★During this festival, parks are good places for people to admire the beauty of chrysanthemums and the traditional food is ...
【范文展示】普通范文Dear Tom,
I'm very pleased to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about the Double Ninth Festival.
The Double Ninth Festival is celebrated on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month. And it has a long history. People miss their relatives who are far away on the day. And il is also a festival for respecting and helping elderly people. On the day, people will try to go back home and visit the elder members of their families. They will also climb mountains to enjoy the beautiful view with family members. During this festival, people like to enjoy chrysanthemums in the parks and they will eat Chong Yang Gao, a kind of Chinese cake.
Hope this helps. Wish you all the best!
Yours, Li Hua 高级范文Dear Tom,
I'm very pleased to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about the Double Ninth Festival.
The Double Ninth Festival, which dates back to the Waning States Period, falls on September 9lh in the Chinese lunar calendar. The festival is dedicated to the memory of relatives living far away. Nowadays, it has turned into a festival for respecting and caring about elderly people. On this festival, people will try to go back home to give best wishes to the elder members of their families. They will climb mountains to have a bird's-eye view of the beautiful scenery with family members. During this festival, parks are good places for people to admire the beauty of chrysanthemums and the traditional food is Chong Yang Gao, a kind of Chinese cake.
Hope this helps. Wish you all the best!
Yours, Li Hua 【实战演练】
某英文网站"Traditional Chinese Festivals,,栏目面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇 英语稿件，介绍中秋节及这个节日里的主要活动。
答案
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it enjoys great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time when we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, wc sit together and cat mooncakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.