高一英语必修一Unit1Writing专题名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,人教课标,高一 必修,1,Unit 1,第1页,第2页,第3页,Miss Wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong.He is also asking for some advice.Read the letter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.,第4页,Dear Miss Wang,Im a student from Huzhou Senior High School.I have a problem,Im not very good at communicating with people.,第5页,Although I try to talk to my classmates,I still find it hard to make good friends with them.So I feel quite lonely sometimes.I do want to change this situation,but I dont know how.I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.,第6页,Before writing the letter,youd better find out what is the problem with Xiao Dong.,He is not good at communicating with people and find it hard to make friends with them.,第7页,第8页,开门见山，表明写作意图。在本段中，写信人应该先简单介绍对方问题。并表示给出提议。,第9页,Dear Xiao Dong,Im sorry you are_,_ However this situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some _ to help you.,having trouble making,friends,tips,第10页,委婉地提出提议及改进办法，或提出忠言，并给出理由。,第11页,Find out the ways to change the situation.Make a list of your ideas and give your reasons.,Ideas(Suggestion),to ask people their likes and dislikes.,To join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas.,If you have different opinions,you can discuss with them rather than quarrel with them.,第12页,Why(Reasons)(,补充细节）,To find classmates with the same interests,To get to know different people and let them see you are friendly.,To respect others and make them find it easy,to get along with you.,第13页,用适当连词和句型，把它们连成段落。,表示提提议句型,Why not/You should(can)/Youd better/It would be a good idea if,适当连词,First/secondly/Thirdly,First of all/besides/in addition/whats more/last but not least,and/then.,第14页,表示原因句式（拓展部分）,If you do this/That way,/By doing this,Only in this way can you,Because/since./as,第15页,First,Why not,ask people their likes and dislikes.,If you do this,youll find classmates with the same interests.(By doing this,youll make friends with classmates who has the same interests),Secondly,youd better,join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas.,Then,youll get to know different people and let them see you are friendly.,Thirdly,If you have different opinions,you can discuss with them rather than quarrel with them.,By doing this,第16页,You can show respect to others and make them find it easy to get along with you.,第17页,礼貌地总结。,第18页,I hope youll find these ideas/suggestions/tips/proposals useful.,第19页,英文提议信属于应用文写作范围，是向咨询提议者就某事提出写信人提议和忠言。,第20页,高考中这类信件多属于半开放性作文，要求考生依据所给材料,(,多为征求提议信,),，提出合理化提议，或者给出有针对性处理方法。,第21页,提议信除了遵照书信格式之外，还要求在信中针对他人问题，给出你观点及处理方法，惯用于提议句式有：,第22页,注意格式（书信格式）；,客观地提出提议；,针对对方问题，给出你观点；,语言要委婉、精炼，同时要简练，表示清楚。,第23页,巧列提要，详略得当,:,针对问题需要提出什么样提议，要讲哪些内容，应该先列出,提要,，并要做到内容重点突出、详略得当、井然有序，到达提要挈领作用。,第24页,翻译关键点，勾勒脉络,:,列出提要后，能够尝试着将文章中包括到提议关键点或忠言翻译成对应英语句子，这么全文骨架就已经形成了。在此基础上，可增加合理想象以及适当扩展。,第25页,Li Hong is poor in English though he has spent a lot of time on it.He wants to improve his English but doesnt know how.He asks you for advice.Please give him a letter.,第26页,第27页,