英语六级作文.doc

2012年6月四六写作最后冲关

如果你的目标是写作满分，请绕行！
如果你的目标是及格，只需要背诵几句重复的话即可。
如果你的目标是高分，背诵几句话帮你长分，借鉴写作思路结合自己表达。
如果你只背诵没背写，肯定不会拿到理想分数！
如果你想考高分，还不想背写，请上优酷看看娱乐节目，然后洗洗睡吧！！
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你的一个疑虑：大家写的都一样，会不会认为是抄袭或模板？？？？？
放一百个心：你的文章放在400万考生中，根本看不出来。

考前一天，作文还能涨20分，如何做到？？
1. 背写: 记住，没有必要全部背诵以下作文，但必须背诵高度重复的表达。因此，重点背诵：一定要注意两种类型作文写作思路上的差别。
以下几篇范文中重复的部分、就是这次四、六级写作必然能够写上的句式表达。
一定要写：
一定要将所背内容写到自己作文中，一定要字迹工整。你就可以涨分了！！

2．放松心态：只要你准备背写，只要你用上了你背写的表达，你的写作也许拿不了高分，但一定不会因此丢分。
3. 对待预测，不抱有赌博的心态。仔细审读、体会范文中的思路、表达才是重点。
但不敢保证这次必考我预测的作文，但只要用了你背诵的内容，你写作不会太差！
4. 如果赌题，不要在考试后骂我！
5. 活学活用是关键。
关于作文类型是2011年12月那样的全英文要求的作文，还是传统汉语提纲+英文题目的作文类型，笔者认为两种均有可能：几率各占50%.。
但相同的话题重复可能性不大，2011年12月话题均涉及到“成功”，因此，今年2012年6月与“成功”直接相关的话题可能性不大。
有几个万能句，首先进行背诵，考试肯定能写上。
现象描述万能句：In contemporary society, it has become a trend for _____ to _______.
中间段：
As a vital quality/ awareness/ virtue/ part of life, _____ brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for life, and helps us to _____.
It is _____ that enables _____ to build up _______.
尾段：
(建议)Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates (not) to _______
（展望未来）If we try our utmost to do so, the future of _____will be promising, hopeful and rosy.
第一部分：全英文作文
1. 乐观
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Optimism is the Road to a Promising Future by commenting on the Tagore’ saying, "If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you will also miss the stars." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Optimism is the Road to a Promising Future
Our history has been filled with a variety of enlightening sayings, and the following is no exception: if you shed tears when you miss the sun, you will also miss the stars. This remark can be naturally associated with the significance of optimism: if one intends to witness a promising future, it is advisable for him to be optimistic.
历史上有很多发人深省的话语，下面这个就不例外：“如果你为错过太阳而流泪，那么你可能还会错过星星。”该评论使人很自然地联想到乐观的重要性：假如一个人想要看到光明的未来，他最好应该保持乐观。
Optimism is the key to success in all fields of activity, and it can be likened to the road to a promising future. (排比句：重点背三个动词：bring, arouse, help)First, as a vital psychological quality, optimism brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for work, and helps us overcome difficulties. (强调句式：一定能写)Second, it is optimistic attitude that enables people to build up confidence, hope and courage. （所有作文万能句）As a matter of fact, successful people in mounting numbers have come to realize the necessity of optimism in life, work and study.
乐观是各行各业成功的关键，而且它可以被比作通向光明未来的道路。首先，作为一种极其重要的心态，乐观会带给我们极大的动力，让我们对工作充满热情、帮助我们战胜困难。同时，正是一种乐观的心态使得人们积累了自信，希望和勇气。事实上，成功人士们早已经意识到乐观在生活工作和学习中的必要性。
(观点)As a college student, I am firmly convinced that optimism is the road to success. （建议：一定写上）Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to cultivate optimism.( 如果字数不够：结尾展望未来：If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our life will be hopeful, promising and rosy.) （223 words）
作为一名大学生，我坚信乐观就是成功之路。因此，我们应该鼓励、倡导和支持朋友和同学们去培养乐观精神。 （假如我们能尽最大努力这样做，未来生活一篇美好。）
第一篇作文可以写如下话题：A strong will(11年12月), confidence, cooperation or teamwork, courage, patience, practice(97年)，a good preparation(11年12月六级主题)，perseverance, modesty, diligence, unity, knowledge, sense of happiness, punctuality, a willing heart, 志愿者精神（volunteers）
第二部分：提纲式作文
一、慈善机构公信力
My View on Charity
1. 近年，部分慈善机构或个人受到批评质疑
2. 出现这种现象原因（重点背诵段）
3. 我的看法
Charity brings the society power, arouses people’s enthusiasm for life, and help others to overcome difficulties. However, after several scandals, it has become a trend for the public to criticize and doubt charity organizations or individuals. A case in point is China Red Cross, whose fame was spoiled by Guo Meimei.
It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. In the first place, the disordered charity management is the root cause of criticism. Why? Charity organizations in mounting/ large numbers have not come to realize the problems in their management, budget and raising money. In the second place, the lack of public’s trust constitutes another major cause. Based on a survey on the Internet, because of some negative cases, a majority of people admit that they are unwilling to donate or help others through charitable activities or organizations.
As a college student, I am firmly convinced that it is exceedingly necessary for the public to be involved in charity. However, we should advocate and encourage organizations to reform charitable activities. (174)
二、退休制
Should Retirement Age Be Postponed?
1. 近年来，推迟退休年龄引发人们热议
2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊
3. 我的看法
Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admit that aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.
A number of individuals favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough work-force. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view that postponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.
I am convinced that we should balance old people’ interest and this aging society. Thus, if those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’ life will be promising, hopeful and rosy. (187 words)
三、 幸福感
How to Enhance the Sense of Happiness
1. 人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法
2. 幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面，也指。。。
The sense of happiness is of great significance. As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future. However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.
In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects. Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love. Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness. It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.
As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness. To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability. (168 words)
四、 大学生电子设备
Are Advanced Electronic Products Necessary for College Students?
1. 如今，大学生谱表拥有较高级电子设备，如智能手机，电子词典等
2. 对此人们看法不一
3. 我的看法
On many campuses, it has become a prevalent trend for college students to use various advanced electronic products. Taking a look around, we can find a great many products like this: smart cell phones, E-dictionaries and so on.
A number of individuals favor college students’ using these pieces of equipment. To begin with, as necessary products, they can bring college students more convenience, arouses their awareness of keeping up with IT development. In addition, it is these advanced products that enable students to build up their speed and efficiency. Even so, others hold a different view. First, according to a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of students admit that an iPhone is exceedingly expensive for them. Second, students in mounting numbers have come to realize that advanced products are based on their parents' hard work.
As a college student, I am convinced that not all students should purchase these high-tech and expensive products. However, we should advocate and encourage friends and classmates to buy, if they earn money by themselves . (175 words)
北京新东方模考题：“爱心重要性”解析
很多同学参加了2012年6月份新东方备考四六级的模考班，模考题作文效仿2011年12月四、六级出题形式，采用全英文的命题形式对写作内容提出要求。
下面是考题：
Part I Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Significance of Love by explaining the following metaphor with an exact example, “Love is light, being brighter in darker places .” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 200 words.
解析：按照四、六级考试委员会所给内部资料中的评论标准，此类考题考查两方面的内容：即理解和表达能力。
高分作文必须按照题目要求展开，需包含以下内容：1）题目，即爱心的重要性（题目要求需有例子支撑）；2）评论：对于所给名言或警句的评论。
如果只写其中一部分，作文最高得分不超过9分。（注：阅卷时采用原始赋分满分15分。之后经过标准分转化成710分制，写作部分满分106.5分）
从六种功能段落备考角度看，该类作文其实和以前考题没有本质性区别。原来是汉语提纲提出写作内容上要求，如今是英文形式提出写作内容上的要求。
既然都是命题要求，英汉要求只是形式上的变化，本质还是：按照题目要求去写相应的功能段落。
如果写模板作文，本篇作文建议写作思路如下：
首段：现象（该警句所对应现象）+评论
A host of people find it beneficial and rewarding to take part in various activities of love. Meanwhile, there is a metaphor/saying describing the significance of love: Love is light, being brighter in darker places. From my point of view, people in darker places need more love and even a little help can give them hope.
很多人发现参加爱心活动颇为有益。而且，有一句比喻/话可以描述爱心的重要性：爱心就是一盏灯，越是黑暗的地方越明亮。在我看来，身处黑暗中的人需要更多爱心，即便是一点帮助也能给他们带来光明。
二段：意义阐述：阐述爱心的重要意义。
（意义主题句）Love is the key to building a harmonious society, and it can be likened to light in dark places. （具体意义1：词汇排比）To begin with, as a vital quality, it bring people power, arouses their enthusiasm for life, and helps them to create a promising future. （具体意义2：强调句式）In addition, it is love or others’ help that enables people in difficulties to build up confidence, courage and hope. （万能表达：）As a matter of fact, individuals in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of love: love from friends, classmates and family.
爱心是建设和谐社会的关键，而且爱心可以被必做黑暗中的一盏灯。首先，作为一种重要素质，爱心带给人们力量，唤醒人们的生活热情，帮助人们创造光明的未来。此外，也正是爱心是的人们积累起信心，勇气和希望。事实上，越来越多的人们已经意识到爱的重要性：朋友之爱、同学之爱、家人之爱。
尾段：举例说明爱心（即现象）+建议
（举例）A case in point is Hope Project. （调查法描述）According to a survey, a majority of people in China admit that they are willing to help those children, who can not afford tuition. （建议）Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage more people to be involved in activities of love. （展望未来）If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our nation will be promising and rosy.
爱心的典型例子就是希望工程。根据一项调查，绝大部分中国人都认可帮助那些交不起学费的童鞋完成学业。因此，我们应教育、倡导和鼓励更多人参加爱心活动。假如我们进全力这么做，我们国家未来将更美好和光明。
黑体部分是模版句式表达，建议考生在明确其功能的前提下进行背诵。这个模版可以帮助童鞋完成如下主题作文的写作：
A strong will(11年12月), confidence, optimism, cooperation or teamwork, courage, patience, practice(97年)，a good preparation(11年12月六级主题)，perseverance, modesty, diligence, unity, knowledge, sense of happiness.
笔者建议：四六级考试中所考段落中频率最高的两种段落是现象和建议。可以说2012年6月四、六级现象段写作必考，建议句必写。

网络课堂
For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, classroom has been a very popular way to learn something. However, people hold different views on the relatively new learning tool.
Some people think it quite possible for network classrooms to take the place of traditional classrooms. First, network classroom need't have face-to-face communication and are not limited by time and place, which facilitates both teachers and students. Secondly, network classrooms release teachers from repeating the same contents since the video or audio material can be played time and again. However, many people have opposite standpoints. They say that with online courses, students lack direct communications with teachers and their confusion cannot be solved instantly. In addition, the computer system cannot be guaranteed to work stably all the time.
Personally, I agree that both network classrooms and traditional classrooms are necessary for students. If traditional teaching patterns and the modern ones like network classrooms can be combined together, more fruitful education is sure to be realized.

志愿者精神
前情回顾：
2011年12月4级作文：
Directions: You're allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, "Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of time. "You'd write at least 120 words
but no more than 180 words.
2011年12月6级作文：
Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
初看到这个题目的时候，同学会感觉的不适应，但是仔细分析和之前的考试区别不大，并且这种形式在以前就是已经遇见过的了：2003年1月四级作文题
Directions： For this part， you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest。You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese。
1 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象
2 诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实
出题的形式在变，但是不变的是文章的结构，内容的安排以及语言的要求；所以在最后的几天中重点依然是把握之前所背过的句子，至于内容可以重点关注下面的一些话题：
预测一：创新的重要
预测二：环境相关问题
预测三：诚信
预测四：志愿者精神（助人为乐）
第一段：
The volunteer spirit has spread among the Chinese people in recent years, especially among young people. Volunteer is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and society .
第二段：
In the past years, the extraordinary contributions of Chinese volunteers have been seen everywhere, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to other big international events.
（Take the WenChuan Earthquake as an example. After the devastating earthquake hit southwest China's Sichuan Province, more than one million volunteers plunged into relief work within days. They went all out to save the victims, provide psychological counseling and donate money and materials.）可以省略
Besides, volunteering would be beneficial to the volunteers themselves. Getting involved in volunteering, volunteers will be exposed to a new environment, and they can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve their interpersonal skills and organizational skills, all of which are critical for their professional growth.
第三段：
A sound social volunteer service system with frequent activities and full participation should be established and "Learn from Lei Feng" activities should be held on a regular basis to create a social atmosphere of altruism.
The volunteer service system will also help to build a harmonious environment for our society. As a college student, I sincerely hope that everyone would join the volunteer work.
心理健康
How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?
1. 心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因
2. 分析人们产生心理健康问题的原因(可从失业、压力过重、缺乏支持、缺乏人际交往能力等方面分析)
3. 你认为人们应如何保持心理健康
可参考[问题解决型模板]
※划线句子也可作为模板
How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?
One in four people will experience some kind of mentalproblem in the course of a year. When you fail to manage these problems, theyare likely to cause various mental illnesses。(描述问题段)
The causes of mental health problems often vary a lotfrom one case to another. In today’s society, a good number of people aresuffering from heavy pressure. Others lack communication skills. In addition,