大学英语四级范文(超详细讲解!).doc

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1. 娱乐活动多种多样
2. 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性
3. 作为大学生，我的看法
Recreational Activities
第一段引入现象并举例：现在娱乐活动多种多样。
The twenty-first century has brought with it an unprecedented variety of recreational activities. They range from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of online ones.
第二段从正反两面说明娱乐生活的弊益。
Some people think those various recreational activities brought by modern technology are great and necessary because they can help people relax from hard work and study and broaden people’ horizon. However, some people think that too many recreational activities may have a bad effect on people’s lives. Some people may not resist some temptations and indulge themselves in those activities, such as the online games. At last they are lured away from their studies, work and interpersonal relationships.
第三段表明自己的观点态度：择优律己。
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge. When it comes to those time-consuming and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the
topic of Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写
2. 出现这种现象的原因是……
3. 为改变这种状况，我认为……
第一段：指出不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，举例说明。

Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling
Quite a few students now neglect spelling in English study. Take the simple word “trouble” for example. Only a few students can spell “trouble” without trouble—others may spell it as truble, touble or something else.
第二段：从学生、电脑的使用和老师三个方面分析原因。
For various reasons, spelling is now becoming a neglected art. First of all, many students don’t care about spelling. Some say they’re going to have a secretary when they get a job, and he or she will correct their spelling. Second, most word processors and email programs come with a built-in spell checker, which discourages students to spell well. Last but not least, teachers don’t appear to be overly concerned about students’ spelling errors.
第三段：结合原因，给出两个改变这一现象的办法。
To change this situation, I think both students and teachers should make effort. On one hand, students should give spelling due attention. It’s necessary that they change the way they see spelling and avoid relying too much on computers or somebody else. On the other hand, to make better spellers of the students, every teacher, especially the one who teaches English, should be concerned about students’ poor spelling.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该……
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
第一段说明现象：父母因为爱为孩子包办一切，指出这样无法使孩子学会独立。
Nowadays some parents tend to take on everything concerned with their children. Most of them do this out of love, hoping they can craft the perfect childhood for their kids and give their children the best possible shot at success in life. Unfortunately, it doesn’t help children to become self-reliant.
第三段总结：
让孩子独立的方法很多，让孩子变得独立并不难。
第二段给出三个建议：
1. 给孩子更多责任。
2. 鼓励孩子自己尝试完成任务。
3. 教孩子自己解决他们之间的指端。
To help their children develop independence, here are some tips for parents. First, give children increasing responsibility. Teach children that they are important contributors to the family, and give them age-appropriate chores. Second, encourage kids to try things themselves first. If they try, and don’t know how to complete a task, offer them help, but teach them how to do the task rather than doing it for them. Third, teach kids to solve their own disputes. Encourage children to work out issues themselves, and to approach parents only if someone is in danger or the problem is very difficult to deal with.
There is no single way to help children become independent. However, as long as parents follow the advice mentioned above, it’s not hard to raise children to become independent adults.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3. 我的建议
第一段：介绍目前很流行网上购物。大学生和白领尤其喜欢网上购物。
Online Shopping
Shopping on the Internet is becoming a fashion in many cities due to the rapid development of the Internet technology. It is especially popular among college students and white-collars.
第二段：分析网上购物的利弊。利：节省时间，不用出门就可以买到想买的东西。弊：没有面对面购物那么可靠；提供不了砍价的乐趣。
The advantage of shopping online is obvious: it can save some time for those busy with their work or study. Within a few clicks, they can get whatever they want without stepping out of the room. Still, online shopping has some disadvantages. First, it is less reliable and trustworthy compared with face-to-face shopping. Second, it fails to offer the fun of bargaining.
第三段：针对网上购物的弊端，提出建议：健全相关法律。
There is no doubt that outline shopping is a very convenient way and has become an irresistible trend in our society. It’s urgent that the relative laws should be regulated in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can people enjoy the fun and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being cheated.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 miutes to write a short essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. Your should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2. 出现这一现象的原因
3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议
第一段先总述现象：现在许多商品都存在过度包装现象，然后举出典型例子“月饼包装”进行说明；最后总结：过度包装在我们的日常生活中非常普遍。
On Excessive Packaging
Nowadays many commodities are packaged excessively. It is very common that a very small item is wrapped in a very big and luxury box. Take the moon cake as an example. Every Mid-Autumn Day, we can see various delicate packaging boxes in which there are only a few small moon cakes. Obviously, excessive packaging has become very popular in our daily life.

第二段先承上启下引出过度包装的原因，然后具体说明两点原因：1.生产商将商品包装得尽可能高档、漂亮以抬高价格；2.消费者认为精美包装的商品要比普通包装的商品质量好。
Then what are responsible for this phenomenon? Firstly, many manufactures package the goods as luxuriously and beautifully as possible to raise the prices of some common goods. Secondly, many customers think that delicately packaged goods are superior to those with plain packaging, which further boosts excessive packaging.
第三段先表达个人观点：精美包装某种程度上意味着好的质量，但果断包装既浪费又不环保；然后从立法和消费者两方面提出建议：最后总结：相信这些措施能够抵制过度包装的 进一步扩展。
From my point of view, delicate packaging, to some extent, means good quality, but excessive packaging is not only wasteful but also unfriendly to the environment. Therefore, on the one hand, I suggest the laws on packaging be perfected to restrict excessive packaging. On the other hand, as responsible customers, we should first consider the quality, not the packaging. This, I believe, can combat the further expansion of excessive packaging.