高中英语书面表达集-建议信.docx

高中英语书面表达集 建议信 (Letter of suggestion)
一、简介
(1) 建议信写作注意事项, 写作目的是提出建议或忠告。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
(2) 写作方法
① 首段：说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：提出具体建议；
首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则变成投诉信；
经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为内容与议论文相似。
尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。
(3) 写作流程图
提出建议
介绍详情、说明原因
说明写信的目的

提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复

一．key words and phrases
1. some advice, some suggestions,
2.learn from
3.take sth into consideration= take sth into account
4.in addition,
5. I am sorry to hear that
6. If I were you, I would
7. I learn that you have trouble in
8. widen their eyes.
9. especially for us students.
10. A majority of students
11. What is known to us is that
12. for the reason that
二．key sentences
1. Thank you for trusting me and I’d like to give you some advice.
2. I would appreciate it if you take my suggestions into consideration.
3. I am sorry to learn about your problem and I’d like to give you some advice.

写作指导
首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。
It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on ...
I am writing to express my views concerning ...
主体：提出建议并阐述理由。
I would like to suggest that ... If I were you, I would ...
In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following measures ...
I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that ……
In my opinion ……
I would like to make a recommendation that …
I am writing to advise you to ……
If I were you, I would ……
I think it would be more beneficial if you could……
I feel that it would be beneficial if…
结尾：希望收信人接受建议。注意措辞要有礼貌，使对方容易接受。
1. In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.
2. Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions.
3. I believe you will take my advice into account / consideration.
4. I hope you will find these suggestions practical / useful / helpful.
5. I do hope you will consider my suggestions.
6. I would be more than happy if my suggestions could be considered.
7. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。
Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.
8.. 英语建议信格式-结尾常用句式
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.
I would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard.
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.
I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details.
Whatever you decide to do， good luck with your studies/work！
I am looking forward to your reply.
范文一：
假如你叫李华，最近一名手臂有残疾的美国学生Bruce和父母来中国定居，转到你们班，他很担心同学们会嘲笑他，因此他感到很沮丧。请你用英语写信给他。
1. 表达欢迎新同学的心情
2. 点出对方的问题，并给出你的建议
3. 告诉他同学们都愿意做他的朋友
Dear Bruce,
I am glad that you have become a member of our class. However, I find you are always depressed these days. I may know the reason why you are so worried .
In fact, there is no need for you to be worried. The teachers and students are all friendly , so you needn’t be afraid of being laughed at . In addition, you can communicate with others as much as possible, then you will surely find your worry is really unnecessary. Having a disability does not mean life is not satisfying. Do you think so? Comparing with many other disabled people, you may find you are not that unfortunate. Do you think so?
We are all ready to be your friends and wish you happy in our class.

据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌（lung cancer）后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会（ACS）决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：
1.自我介绍    2.得知的情况   3.表示鼓励  4.打算为她做什么   5. 祝她早日康复
注意：
1.   信的格式已为你写好
2.   信中不得出现你的真实情况。
3.   词数100左右。
4.   请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Amy, 
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. 不唯一
Dear Amy, 
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer. 
At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it. 
I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. It will give more courage to live on.

试题分析：本文是一篇应用文，首先对题目进行审清，先对自己进行自我介绍，并表达得知她的遭遇后同样感到很伤心。再对所知的情况进行描述，将表示鼓励的话语表达出来，可以使用诸如inspire sb to take the steps towards future life.鼓励某人朝着未来的生活迈进。这样的话语进行行文，并表达相信她一定能成功。最后，说出自己如何帮助她，可用上诸如try one’s best to do sth 尽某人最大的努力做某事，这样的表达来起句子，并表达对她的祝福。
点评：对于应用文写作是高考常考的文体，把握好各个应用文的写作格式也是平时学习过程中必须注意的，同时平时学习时多进行作文模板的记忆，万能句型的积累，高中作文写作，要注意在写作之前，首先对题目进行认真的审清，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的，不会错的。写的过程中，多注意灵活使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯，遇到专有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定语从句，强调唯一性。平时的英语作文就可以多尝试使用这些表达，考试时才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。
Dear Amy, 
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer. 
At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it. 
I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. It will give more courage to live on. 
May you recover soon. 
Yours, 
Li Hua

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求用英文给Amy写一封慰问信。要点都已经给出，信件要点包括：自我介绍，得知的情况，表示鼓励，打算为她做什么，祝她早日康复，审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。象范文的I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is.使用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句，还有I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you.用了非限制性定语从句。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。
Dear Amy
     I  am LiHua from XinHua Middle School,I am a boy at age of  14 years old.I learnt that you are suffering a terrible Lung cancer.It's said that you would get 3 cents from American Anti- Cancer Association if you could receive a letter of of consolation.I was quite moved When I know about your bad experience.And now I  give you my  sincere greetings and blessing ,you certainly will  be good soon,don't worry,believe that The God will bless  you .Now I have decided to write this letter to you ,and sent my best wishes to you ,give you my allowance my father gave me .
Finally,I wish you a speedy recovery.
yours ,LiHua