2021年句雅思写作框架雅思写作真经总纲.docx

雅思写作Task 2 分析与范文精解
15句逻辑框架高档版本
A 15-Sentence Solution to IELTS Writing
15句雅思写作高档版
第一段
引出话题
表达观点
第1句 引入背景
第2句 交代辩论话题
第3句 表达写作观点
第二段
讲道理
第4句 第一论据，中心句
第5句 进一步详细阐述理由，拓展
第6句 因此，观点成立
第三段
举例子
第7句 第二论据，中心句
第8句 举例，典型个例或排比例证
第9句 例证解释阐明
第四段
让步
第10句 讨论反方观点
第11句 反方论据
第12句 驳斥反方或某些批准反方
第五段
结论
第13句 重申写作观点
第14句 不能忽视反方观点
第15句 思想立意提高

15句逻辑框架初级版本
A 15-Sentence Solution to IELTS Writing
15句雅思写作初级版
第一段
引出话题
表达观点
第1句 Nowadays，an increasing number of people are concerned about …
引入背景
第2句 However，whether … is a controversial issue.
交代辩论话题
第3句 My view is that …
表达写作观点
第二段
讲道理
第4句 First，it is obvious that …
第一论据，中心句
第5句 (This is because) …
进一步详细阐述理由，拓展
第6句 So，…
因此，观点成立
第三段
举例子
第7句 Moreover，…
第二论据，中心句
第8句 For example，…
举例，典型个例或排比例证
第9句 …
例证解释阐明
第四段
让步
第10句 That is not to say that … not …
讨论反方观点
第11句 Of course，…
反方论据
第12句 But …
驳斥反方或某些批准反方观点
第五段
结论
第13句 In sum，…
重申写作观点
第14句 Meanwhile，…
不能忽视反方观点
第15句 By doing so we can make sure that …
思想立意提高

Writing Task 2
Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake，regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What，in your opinion，should be the main function of a university?

第1句：背景简介
Nowadays，an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of university education.
当前，越来越多人关怀大学教诲目。
Explanation:
l Nowadays，an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that …
l Nowadays，an increasing number of people are concerned about the purposes that university education serves.
l Nowadays，more and more students are concerned about what they will learn in the universities.
l Universities are one of the most important institutions in modern society.
如果很难再短时间内想出第一句内容，就直接表达观点，两句话写完首段。
l I agree with the view that…Reasons are as follows.
我赞同观点是……因素如下。

第2句：交代辩论话题
A. “与否应当……”
However，whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills to graduates is a controversial issue.
但是，大学与否应当重要提供应学生工作有关技能是一种饱受争议话题。

B. “是这样……还是应当那样……”
However，whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills or pure knowledge to graduates has caused a heated debate.
但是，大学是应当重要提供应学生工作有关技能还是纯粹知识导致了激烈争议。

Explanation:
However，what kind of knowledge and skills universities should mainly provide to graduates is a controversial issue.
但是，大学应当重要提供应学生哪一种知识技能是一种饱受争议话题。

C. 某些人以为……；另某些人以为……
Some people state that…；others believe that…
Some people state that universities should focus on giving access to knowledge；others believe that the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace are more important for university graduates.
某些人以为大学应关注提供知识；另某些人以为工作所需技能对大学毕业生更重要。

第3句：交代你自己写作观点
In my view，,…
My view is that…(表语从句)
I agree with the view that… (同位语从句)，for the following reasons.
My view is that job-related knowledge and skills should be the main focus of universities.
I mainly agree with the former/latter view for the following reasons.

第二段
第1句：本段中心句
这一段写作目是以理服人。用it is clear that…这个主语从句写出你以为最重要、最明显论据。
Firstly，it is obvious that for most students，the purpose of receiving university education is to obtain practical knowledge and skills which will enable them to become qualified employees in the job market in the future.
一方面，很显然对大某些学生来说上大学目是学习实用知识技能，这些技能能让她们在将来职场中成为合格雇员。
Explanation:
l Firstly，it is clear/obvious/true that…
l Firstly，there is no doubt that…
l One reason for this is that …

第2句：对中心句进行拓展、解释、阐明。
A. This is because… 这是由于（想上一句话因素）
This is because most of them，after graduation，will enter the workplace，earn a living，and support their own families.
这是由于大某些学生毕业之后会进入职场，挣钱谋生，建立家庭。
B. This means that…这意味着（想上一句话成果）
This means that the courses focusing on jobs will become the most welcomed subjects which the majority of students will select.
这意味着那些专注于使用知识课程会成为大多数学生选取热门专业。
C. If …not… (反正中心句)
If universities do not pay enough attention to such skills，most graduates will not be able to find satisfactory positions in the workplace，leading to a higher unemployment rate.
如果大学不注重这种技能培养，大某些学生将会很难再职场上找到工作，导致社会失业率增高。
Explanation:
可用下面短语拓展解释中心句：
l In other words，换句话说
l More specifically，详细来说
l More precisely，精确点说

第3句
重申写作观点。其实是对第一段最后一句话，也就是你写作观点进行改写表达。
So universities，as service providers，have to give top priority to these customers’ real needs.
Explanation:
推荐一种固定句型来写本句，让写作更简化：Therefore，it is necessary/crucial/important for sb. to do sth.
l Therefore，it is crucial for universities to give top priority to the students’ real needs.

第三段
第1句
首句仍是该段中心句，是你绞尽脑汁想出第二个因素论据。
Moreover，focusing on the job-related skills can benefit the university itself.
此外，关注工作有关技能能使大学自身受益。
Explanation:
可选用Moreover，In addition，Besides等词开始。

第2句
该段第2句就是举例。
For example，the sci-fi blockbuster “Avatar” has marked a milestone in the filmmaking industry and drawn massive interest in 3D technology.
例如，科幻大片《阿凡达》已成为电影业一座里程碑，并且激发了大众对3D技术广泛兴趣。
Explanation:
如果感觉上面句子单词太难，咱们可以简化为：For example，3D technology has become a hot topic after the movie “Avatar” made the whole world crazy.
例子越详细，越国际化，越潮流流行，越好。

第3句
上一句已经举出了《阿凡达》和3D例子，为什么咱们要提这个例子呢？接下来这句话就是要写出咱们举这个例子因素，并证明本段首句对的性。
If a university can quickly respond，and consolidate teaching resources to offer courses about 3D，not only will its graduates be more competitive in the job market，but the university itself will keep pace with the technological development and move forward.
如果一所大学能迅速反映，整合教学资源提供3D有关课程，那么不但毕业生在职场上将更有竞争力，大学自身也能跟上技术发展并向前迈进。
Explanation:
这里没有固定句式要用，可随意发挥，要写出例子和中心句之间联系。
固然还可以再举一例：Another example is sth. 然后解释阐明。
如在考场上实在想不出好例子或并列例子，该段从第2句开始参照第二段写作框架，再讲一次道理。

第四段
第1句
写让步段落两大好处：①大多数考生绞尽脑汁也想不出第三个因素论据。咱们何不换一种角度，想一想支持反方一种因素或例子呢，那会容易得多。②兼顾了反方观点，不会浮现评分原则中由于partly address the task而丢分状况。
A. That is not to say that... not ... 这并不是说（反方观点完全没有道理）
That is not to say that universities should not pay any attention to developing pure science and knowledge.
B. It is also true that... (反方观点中某些方面)也是事实。
It is also true that universities should develop pure science and knowledge.
C. Those who harbour the view that... believe that... 那些持有（反方观点）人们以为......
(这个句型中包括了定语从句、同位语从句和宾语从句)
Those who harbour the view that the main function of universities should be to give access to the knowledge believe that the theoretic knowledge is the foundation of any practical skill.
Explanation:
在讨论优势和劣势文章中，咱们可以直接使用下列句型：
l This is not to say，however，that we should neglect the problems it has caused.
l But to acknowledge only the positive impact would be short sighted.

第2句
想反方观点论据，或在特殊、极端状况下某些合理性。进一步阐明该段第一句话。
There are，of course，students interested in knowledge for its own sake，and they will later become scientists and scholars who will make greater contributions to our society.
Explanation:
可选用Of course或 Indeed开始本句。

第3句
让步后最后转折。表达“即便如此，反方观点在大多数状况下还是不可行”或“虽然存在上面提到负面，正面影响仍是不不大于负面”。
But unfortunately these people are few and far between.
Explanation:
可选用But，However，Yet等词开始本句。
该段为文章次要信息，可点到为止，不可耗费过多时间和笔墨纠缠。
实在不知如何辩驳了，可用无赖写法：“（虽然反方观点也有道理）但正方观点依然更有道理。”
l But still，job-related skills are more important for most students.
l But still，the cos are far greater.
其实本句还可以不用辩驳，再写反方第二论据，或针对第一论据拓展、支持、举例。但是这样解决后在结论段要表达相对中立观点态度。

第五段
第1句
结论段。重申写作观点。这句话其实是针对首段最后一句话改写。
l In summary，总之
l In conclusion，总之
In summary，the major function of universities should be providing most students job-related skills，guaranteeing a high rate of employment，and thus helping the society function better.
Explanation:
普通，考官读完一篇作文后印象最深会是文章中例子和结尾段。因此该句不是简朴改写，而应是递进或强调。可用强调句型：It is sth. that...

第2句
照顾反方观点。表达“同步，咱们不能忽视反方观点价值，或低低估某事负面影响”。
l Meanwhile，同步
Meanwhile，we should not ignore the other important roles universities are undertaking.
Explanation:
模板句式
Meanwhile，we should not ignore/neglect/overlook/underestimate sth.’s negative effects.

第3句
其实末段有了上面两句话已经完整了。如果要冲刺高分，咱们要再加一句话，给文章画一种有力句号，或提高文章思想境界，立意升华。
l By doing so we can ensure that...
l Only by doing so can we make sure that... (only在句首注意倒装)

15句高档作文写作分析
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think watching TV is bad for children，while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Write at least 250 words.

Model Essay
Watching TV is one of the most important children’s leisure activities. However，discussion now centres on whether it brings more harm than good. My view is that too much time spent on it surely has negative impacts on kids and parents should filter out the inappropriate programs and channels for them.

首段
第1句
背景引入
第2句
交代辩论话题
第3句
作者观点，中立

With the rapid development of science and technology，TV shows are designed so vivid and attractive that not only kids but eve adults are much easier to get addicted to them. When children spend more time sitting in front of a screen，they are isolated from the real world. They do not have enough time to socialize，or to engage in outdoor activities which are crucial for their physical growth. Also，their eyesight will be weakened by staring at the screen for too long.

第2段
第1句
第一论据：看电视易上瘾（形式问题，对小朋友身体发育不好）
第2句
展开支持。其实写是：看电视上瘾成果是什么。省掉了This means that...
第3句
继续展开。其实是不良成果并列
第4句
继续并列。由于思想充分，想说太多，代替了so,... 重申观点这个句子

Moreover，questionable contents on TV will have negative effects on children since their minds are impressionable. The fact that many developing countries including China lack a TV programme rating system means that children are more easily exposed to indecent TV scenes. So，TV is not always a good one in the sense that parents really cannot control what comes on the screen.

第3段
第1句
第二论据：有不良电视内容（内容问题，对小朋友心理发展不好）
第2句
展开支持，事实例证
第3句
继续展开。其实是不良成果并列

Of course，there are many educational and inspirational TV shows，such as Disney cartoons which enable kids to have fun in the learning process，facilitate their intellectual development and help them learn caring，sharing，courage，honesty and other virtues from an early age. These benefits of TV on a child’s education cannot be denied.
第4段
第1句
反方观点。注意这一句话里包括了反方观点和论据。用复杂句、举例、并列等手法列举了看电视对小朋友诸多好处
第2句
重申反方有道理

In sum，spending a long time watching TV is harmful and parents should either follow TV rating guidelines or carefully choose the programs for children.
末段
第一句
一句话高度总结全文。由于感到字数已够，就不在累述

五段式转换四段式
什么状况下写四段式
同步满足下面条件，可选取写四段式：
① 题目规定“Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.”
② 关于该题目你立场完全中立，不偏向任何一方。或双方观点你都不批准，结论段提出个人新观点。（此时四段式显得更加中立平衡）
③ 正方反方你都能同步找出两个论据支持或驳斥。（如果正方写了两个论据，反方只写一种论据，其实质上还是五段式）
④ 你写作功力足够。（思路清晰，逻辑强大，语法夯实，论据丰富）

15句四段式逻辑构造
五段式
四段式

首段
第1句
引入背景

首段
第1句
引入背景
第2句
辩论话题
第2句
辩论话题
第3句
写作观点
第3句
写作观点

第二段
第1句
第一论据

第二段
第1句
正方观点及第一论据
第2句
说理
第2句
说理
第3句
重申观点
第3句
第二论据

第三段
第1句
第二论据
第4句
例证
第2句
举例
第5句
重申观点
第3句
例证解释

第三段
第1句
反方观点及第一论据

第四段
第1句
反方观点
第2句
说理
第2句
反方论据
第3句
第二论据
第3句
驳斥
第4句
例证

末段
第1句
总结正方

末段
第1句
中立总结或个人新观点
第2句
提及反方
第2句
进一步解释
第3句
立意升华
第3句
立意升华

剑桥雅思8考官四段式9分范文及行文逻辑
Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others，however，believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

考官范文
Some countries have single-sex education models，while in others both single sex and mixed schools coexist and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable.
首段
第1句
背景引入，作者观点（通过and合并为一句）

Some educationalists think it is more effective to educate boys and girls in single-sex schools because they believe this environment reduces distractions and encourages pupils to concentrate on their studies. This is probably true to some extent. It also allows more equality among pupils and gives more opportunity to all those at the school to choose subjects more freely without gender prejudice. For example，a much higher proportion of girls study science to a high level when they attend girls’ schools than their counterparts in mixed schools do. Similarly，boys in single-sex schools are more likely to take cookery classes and to study languages，which are often thought of as traditional subjects for girls.

第二段
第1句
正方观点及第一论据
第2句
拓展解释（稍作必定）
第3句
第二论据（以also为标志）
第4句
举例1（支持第二论据）
第5句
举例2（支持第二论据）

On the other hand，some experts would argue that mixed schools prepare their pupils better for their future lives. Girls and boys learn to live and work together from an early age and are consequently not emotionally underdeveloped in their relations with the opposite sex. They are also able to learn from each other，and to experience different types of skill and talent then might be evident in a single gender environment.

第三段
第1句
反方观点
第2句
第一论据
第3句
第二论据（以also为标志）

Personally，I think that there are advantages to both systems. I went to a mixed school，but feel that I myself missed the opportunity to specialize in science because it was seen as the natural domain and career path for boys when I was a girl. So because of that，I would have preferred to go to a girls’ school. But hopefully times have changed，and both genders of students can have equal chances to study what they want to in whichever type of school they attend.

末段
第1句
个人观点
第2句
解释阐明
第3句
重申
第4句
立意升华
五段式变四段式
Some people think watching TV is bad for children，while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
【四段式】
Watching TV is one of the most important children’s leisure activities. However，whether it brings more harm than good has caused heated debate. My view is that parents have an essential role to play regarding to this.

Some educationists think watching TV is potentially harmful to children because when they spend more time sitting in front of a screen，their eyesight will be weakened and ids do not have enough time to engage in outdoor activities which are crucial for their physical growth. This is definitely true. The questionable content on TV can also cause negative implications. The fact that many developing countries including China lack a TV program rating system means that children are more easily exposed to indecent TV scenes.

On the other hand，some experts would argue that educational and inspirational TV shows enable kids to have fun in the learning process and facilitate their intellectual development. For example，many children have learnt caring，courage，honesty and other virtues from the characters n classic Disney cartoons. Moreover，watching TV can be an important parent-child activity. Accompanying kids to watch their favourite shows is a great opportunity for adults to take part in their child’s interes