全国高考英语二轮突破市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptx

全国高考英语二轮突破第1页第1页celebrate the precious moment 庆庆祝祝这这珍珍贵时贵时刻刻the final examinations 期末考期末考试试be around the corner 即将到来即将到来appointment 约约会会accept sb.sincere apology 接受某人真接受某人真诚诚道歉道歉a face-to-face talk 一次面一次面谈谈for my healths sake 为为了我健康了我健康keep to sb.word 遵守承遵守承诺诺further ones studies 进进修；修；继续继续学学习习第2页第2页pick sb.up at the airport 到机到机场场接某人接某人fix another time for 安排另外一个安排另外一个时间时间much to my regret 让让我感到很我感到很遗遗憾憾miss the opportunity 错过错过机会机会wish the activity to be a great success 祝祝这这次活次活动动成功成功places of historical interest 名名胜胜古迹古迹consider my situation 考考虑虑我情况我情况forgive 原原谅谅第3页第3页1.Im terribly sorry I couldnt reply to your email in time.十十分分抱抱歉歉我我不能及不能及时时回复您回复您邮邮件。件。2.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.我十分抱歉没有及我十分抱歉没有及时时回信。回信。3.I sincerely apologize again for my mistake.我我再再次次为为我我错错误误真真诚诚地地道歉。道歉。4.It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.错错过过了在一起机会，我感到很了在一起机会，我感到很遗遗憾。憾。第4页第4页5.Once again,please accept my sincere apology.请请再再次次接接受受我我真真诚诚道道歉。歉。6.Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for.如如论论如如何，我真心希望我何，我真心希望我们们能能够够再找一个再找一个时间时间7.I have been looking forward to it.我始我始终终都在期待着。都在期待着。8.Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity.对对忽忽然然改改变变我我感感到到十十分分抱抱歉歉，对对错错过过这这个机会感到很可惜。个机会感到很可惜。第5页第5页1.I am so sorry for my mistake and I am now writing to apology for my carelessness.1.apology改为apologize2.Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday so I had to stay at home to look after my sick mother.2.so改为because3.I feel terrible sorry for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.3.terrible改为terribly第6页第6页4.I very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week.4.very前面加am5.Please forgive me for my careless and the inconvenience that I may have caused.5.careless改为carelessness6.Again,I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apologize.6.apologize改为apology 第7页第7页7.I am really sorry,but Ive lost the book that you lend me when I stayed with you in June.7.lend改为lent8.I would like to buy a new copy of that book and post them to you.8.them改为it第8页第8页9.My mobile phone ran out of battery,because I didnt get your text messages.9.because改为so10.I got the message you leave at the hotel when I got back there late on Thursday.10.leave改为left第9页第9页【山东卷改编：未及时回复而道歉山东卷改编：未及时回复而道歉】假假如如你你是是新新华华中中学学学学生生李李华华，你你美美国国朋朋友友TomTom一一周周前前给给你你发发电电子子邮邮件件，问问询询你你暑暑假假里里打打算算，但但你你因因准准备备期期末末考考试试未未能能及及时时回回复复。请请依依据下列要点给他回封邮件：据下列要点给他回封邮件：1.1.未及时回信原因；未及时回信原因；2.2.你假期打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）你假期打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）第10页第10页满分佳作（一）满分佳作（一）Dear Tom,Im terribly sorry I couldnt reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately.I was so occupied with the final exams.As for the coming summer holiday,I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant.Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it.And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan,where there are a great number of places of interest.Finally,Ill go to Yaan to work as a volunteer.There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help.I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua第11页第11页满分赏析满分赏析先先用用Im terribly sorry对对未未能能及及时时回回信信道道歉歉，terribly加加强强了了道道歉歉语调。语调。接接着着简简朴朴讲讲明明原原因因；be occupied with sth./doing sth.(忙忙于于某某事事/做做某某事事)利利用用表表达达了了作作者者语语言言功功底底，不不是是用用简简朴朴词词汇汇busy，可可给给评评卷卷老师留下好印象。老师留下好印象。Not onlybut also 连连接接并并列列句句，属属于于本本书书在在“写写作作基基础础”部部分分训训练练句句型型。注注意意：not only在在句句首首，谓谓语语动动词词要要用用倒倒装装形形式式；gain some social experience利用也表达了作者平时注意积累语言素材。利用也表达了作者平时注意积累语言素材。第12页第12页满分赏析利用了where引导定语从句修饰地点，使句式避免简朴化；places of interest(名胜古迹)也利用得当，考生需注意积累，不然只能生造出中式英语。利用了There is no doubt that(毫无疑问)这么万能句型；be badly in need of help(急需帮助)这一短语也给评卷老师眼前一亮。make a difference(起作用、产生不同)这一短语也是增分点。本篇句句高级、词词地道，怎能不拿满分？第13页第13页满分佳作（二）满分佳作（二）Dear Tom,How is everything going?I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.You know,Ive been preparing for the final exams these days.Now,I am writing to tell you my plans for the summer vacation.To start with,doing a part-time job is my dream because not only can I earn money by myself,but also it will broaden my horizons.In addition,it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots in order to enjoy some appealing scenery.What is more,I will do some voluntary work to enrich my life.I sincerely apologize again for my mistake.By the way,whats your plan to spend your summer vacation?Yours sincerely,Li Hua 第14页第14页满分赏析满分赏析第一句为朋友式日常问候，符合朋友间书信特点。第一句为朋友式日常问候，符合朋友间书信特点。I feel terribly sorry for 用来引出道歉内容，句型利用得当。用来引出道歉内容，句型利用得当。本本段段用用了了to start with,in addition,whats more等等连连接接词词，使使行行文文连连贯贯；not onlybut also也也是是必必须须学学会会利利用用高高级级句句型型；broaden my horizons也表示了作者平时勤于积累，能给阅卷老师留下良好印象。也表示了作者平时勤于积累，能给阅卷老师留下良好印象。It is a fabulous choice to(是是极极佳佳选选择择)一一句句是是难难得得高高级级表表示示；appealing(吸引人吸引人)一词也表示了语言能力。一词也表示了语言能力。最最后后一一段段，作作者者再再次次用用I sincerely apologize again for表表示示了了真真诚诚道歉；并问询了对方暑期计划，符合真实交际情境。道歉；并问询了对方暑期计划，符合真实交际情境。第15页第15页【模拟真题模拟真题1：道歉不能赴约：道歉不能赴约】作文原题作文原题 假假设设你你是是李李华华，前前天天是是你你外外国国朋朋友友Anne生生日日。你你本本答答应应要要参参与与她她生生日日聚聚会会，但但你你当当初初正正忙忙着着准准备备期期末末考考试试，忘忘了了赴赴约约。请请写写封封信信向向Anne表表示示你你歉歉意意，阐阐明明原原因因，并并提提出出补补救救办办法。法。第16页第16页作文翻译作文翻译亲爱亲爱AnneAnne，我十分抱歉我未能参与你前天生日派对。我十分抱歉我未能参与你前天生日派对。你邀请我去生日派对真是太有心了。我理应来与你庆祝这珍贵你邀请我去生日派对真是太有心了。我理应来与你庆祝这珍贵时刻。但是期末考试就在眼前，因此我忙于准备考试，以致我忘掉时刻。但是期末考试就在眼前，因此我忙于准备考试，以致我忘掉了约会。我希望你能理解我情况并原谅我。有无也许我和你在考试了约会。我希望你能理解我情况并原谅我。有无也许我和你在考试后进行一次私人见面？后进行一次私人见面？我十分遗憾错过了相聚机会。请再次接受我真诚道歉。我十分遗憾错过了相聚机会。请再次接受我真诚道歉。你真诚，你真诚，李华李华第17页第17页Dear Anne,I am indeed very sorry that I didnt attend your birthday party the day before yesterday.It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party.I should have come and celebrate the precious moment with you.But the final examinations are around the corner,so I was so busy preparing for the exams that I forgot the appointment.I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examinations?It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.Once again,please accept my sincere apology.Yours truly,Li Hua第18页第18页【模拟真题模拟真题2：道歉不能赴约：道歉不能赴约】作文原题作文原题假假如如你你是是李李华华，你你和和你你外外籍籍老老师师Mrs.Brown约约好好明明天天下下午午要要一一起起讨讨论论你你英英语语学学习习中中碰碰到到问问题题，但但是是你你暂暂时时有有其其它它事事而而不不能能赴赴约约，请请你你给给Mrs.Brown写一封道歉信。内容包括：写一封道歉信。内容包括：1.对对她表示歉意；她表示歉意；2.阐阐明明原原因因：你你医医生生打打电电话话给给你你，告告知知你你明明天天下下午午去去医医院院谈谈体体检结检结果；果；3.你想与你想与Mrs.Brown另另约约在本周六。在本周六。第19页第19页作文翻译作文翻译亲爱亲爱BrownBrown夫人，夫人，我非常遗憾地告诉您我非常遗憾地告诉您明天下午我将无法和您见面讨论我英语学明天下午我将无法和您见面讨论我英语学习问题，由于我要在同一天看医生。习问题，由于我要在同一天看医生。今天早上，我医生打电话给我，希望和我面对面讨论我前些天今天早上，我医生打电话给我，希望和我面对面讨论我前些天进行健康检查结果。为了我健康，我必须说我也许会失言了。您能进行健康检查结果。为了我健康，我必须说我也许会失言了。您能够考虑我情况并理解我吗？够考虑我情况并理解我吗？我确实希望和您进行讨论，因此假如我们能够在星期六见面，我确实希望和您进行讨论，因此假如我们能够在星期六见面，我将无尽感谢。我确保会按时到达。我将无尽感谢。我确保会按时到达。你，你，李华李华第20页第20页Dear Mrs.Brown,I am terriblely sorry to tell you that tomorrow afternoon I will be unable to meet you to talk about the problem about my English study because I have to see the doctor on the same day.This morning,my doctor called me,hoping to have a face-to-face talk with me about the result of my health examination on the other day.For my healths sake,I have to say that I may fail to keep to my word.Would you please consider my situation and try to understand?I do hope to have a discussion with you,so I would be very grateful to you if we could meet on Saturday.I promise to be there on time.Yours,Li Hua第21页第21页【山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉】假假设设你你是是新新华华中中学学学学生生李李华华，你你和和在在上上海海上上学学英英国国朋朋友友Tom约约好好下下周周末末去去北北京京旅旅游游，但但你你因因故故不不能能赴赴约约。请请依依据据下下列列要要点点用用英英语语给给他他写一封电子邮件：写一封电子邮件：1.表示歉意；表示歉意；2.解释原因；解释原因；3.另约时间。另约时间。Dear Tom,Nice to hear from you.Sincerely yours,Li Hua第22页第22页【山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉】Dear Tom,Nice to hear from you.But Im sorry to tell you that I cant make it to Beijing with you next weekend as we planned beforehand.You see,a couple of days ago,my cousin Li Ming,who has been to Australia to further his studies,called and said that he would be coming back next weekend,and I will have to pick him up at the airport.After all,its been more than one year since we saw each other.Im terribly sorry for that.Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for a trip to Beijing,when I will show you around the places of historical interest there.Looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours,Li Hua第23页第23页【模拟真题：道歉不能参与活动模拟真题：道歉不能参与活动】假假如如你你是是李李华华，国国际际学学校校教教师师PaulPaul邀邀请请你你星星期期六六参参与与该该校校举举办办“中中国国文文化化日日”活活动动。但但你你爷爷爷爷忽忽然然生生病病住住院院，你你要要和和父父母母一一起起去去医医院院探探视视，不不得得不不回回绝绝他他邀邀请请。请请依依据据下下列列要点用英语给要点用英语给PaulPaul写一封电子邮件。写一封电子邮件。要点：要点：1.1.谢绝邀请；谢绝邀请；2.2.阐明理由；阐明理由；3.3.预祝活动成功。预祝活动成功。Dear Paul,Dear Paul,Yours,Yours,Li HuaLi Hua第24页第24页【模拟真题：道歉不能参与活动模拟真题：道歉不能参与活动】Dear Paul,Thank you very much for inviting me to attend the“Chinese Culture Day”to be held at your school this Saturday.I have been looking forward to it.I believe it will give your students more ideas about Chinese culture.However,much to my regret,I shall not be able to make it now.My grandpa suddenly felt ill and is in hospital.I will visit him with my parents on Saturday.Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity to be with your students.I wish the activity to be a great success and hope I will have another chance to join you in the future.Yours,Li Hua第25页第25页 全国高考英语二轮突破第26页第26页