形容词比较级和最高级在写作中的运用writing公开课一等奖优质课大赛微课获奖课件.pptx

unit 3 writing using comparatives and superlatives of adjectives in writing 形容词比较级和最高级在写作中形容词比较级和最高级在写作中利用利用 第1页第1页1.(small/big)a bee,a butterfly or an ant?第2页第2页2.(valuable)iron,silver or gold?第3页第3页change the sentences using comparatives and superlatives of adjectives.1.Li Ming is 1.60 meters tall,Wu Wei is 1.70 meters tall.Wu Wei is taller than Li Ming.Li Ming is shorter than Wu Wei.2.Li Ming weighs 56 kilos,Wu Weis weight is also 56 kilos.Li Ming is as heavy as Wu Wei.3.Wang Gang is 12 years old,Wu Wei is 13 years old.Wang Gang is one year younger than Wu Wei.Wu Wei is one year older than Wang Gang.第4页第4页4.Li Ming got 100 in the last maths exam,Wang Gang got 90 in the last maths exam,Wu Wei got 60 in thr=e last maths exam.Wu Weis maths is the worst of the three.Li Ming is best at maths.5.Li Ming is 11 years old,Wang Gang is 12 years old,Wu Wei is 13 years old.,Li Ming is 11 years old,Wang Gang is one year older than Li Ming，and Wu Wei is the oldest of the three.第5页第5页make the composition better修改作文修改作文第6页第6页 I have three friends,my first friend is Li Ming,he is 11years old.His weight is 56 kilos,he is 1.60 meters tall.His maths is very good.The second one is Wang Gang,he is 12 years old,he weighs 53 kilos,he is 1.63 meters tall.His maths isnt good.My third friend is Wu Wei.He is 13 years old,He weighs 56 kilos,he is 1.70 meters tall,but his maths is the worst of the three.I like them very much,we are friendly to each other.He is one year older than Li Ming,but he is thinner than him.besides,he is taller than Li Ming,and he is worse at maths.he is the oldest and tallest one,and he is as heavy as Li Ming.第7页第7页Kindergartenprimary schoolHuanggang Middle SchoolGuangzhou Branch第8页第8页Talk something about your kindergarten(幼稚园）,your primary school（小学）and Huanggang Middle School Guangzhou Branch.要求：要求：1.字数不少于字数不少于60 2.可就校园环境，学校生活，老师可就校园环境，学校生活，老师,同同窗等方面进行窗等方面进行比较比较。3.至少包括三个方面内容。至少包括三个方面内容。参考词汇：environment,as beautiful as,be kinder than,study harder than.，be busier than.,have more activites than.have more homewrok than.第9页第9页 审题主体时态：人称：要点：普通现在时普通现在时第三人称第三人称幼稚园，小学和黄冈中学广幼稚园，小学和黄冈中学广州学校三个方面州学校三个方面对比对比第10页第10页make comments评论作文评论作文第11页第11页此文章最大问题是审题不清，未抓住三所学校三个方面情况对比进行写作，而只是在写我们班级情况对比，且出现了一些语法错误，书写不工整，按中考核分原则应是第五档作文（0-3分）第12页第12页此文章重在分述三所学校情况简介，而没有重在学校情况对比，且出现了一些语法错误，书写不够工整，按中考核分原则应是第三档作文（7-9分）第13页第13页此文章包括了所有要点，且重在三所学校情况对比，应用了较丰富语言结构和词汇，用词准确，句子通顺、行文连贯，书写美丽，美观，按中考英语评分原则是属于第四档作文（12-15分）第14页第14页pair work-make your passage better小组活动小组活动-修改修改自己作文自己作文第15页第15页A sample passage I have studied in three schools-knidergarten,primary shcool and Huanggang Middle school Guangzhou Branch,let me tell you something about them.My kindergarten is near my home,my primary school is farther than kindergarten and the middle school is the fathest.so I cannt go home everyday.My primary school is very small,but it is as beautiful as my kindergarten.Huanggang Middle School Guangzhou Branch is the largest and the most beatiful of the three.There are many trees and sweet flowers.I like them very much.In middle shcool,there is a lot of homework everyday,so I am the busiest.there is less homework in primary school.and in kindergarten,we have no homework.at that time,we can play with my friends without thinking about the homework.Although I am busy in the middle school,I feel hapy everyday.I think my school ilfe will be better and better.第16页第16页What does a good passage look like?1、内容要完整（抓住关键点，注意文体）2、语句流畅。（要尽也许使用自己能够正确利用语句和表示方式。注意句子之间连贯性-连接词使用）3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范，美丽。第17页第17页英语课堂当场测试卷英语课堂当场测试卷翻译下列句子。1.李明和吴伟同样重。_2.吴伟数学最差。_3.王刚比李明大一岁。_4.幼儿园比小学美丽。_5.黄冈中学广州学校老师是最好。_第18页第18页英语课堂当场测试卷英语课堂当场测试卷翻译下列句子。1.李明和吴伟同样重。li Ming is as heavy as Wu Wei2.吴伟数学最差。Wu Weis maths is the worst/Wu Wei is worst at maths.3.王刚比李明大一岁。Wang Gang is one year old than Li Ming.4.幼儿园比小学美丽。The kindergarten is more beautiful than my primary school5.黄冈中学广州学校老师是最好。The teachers in Huanggang Middle School are the best.第19页第19页