成都七中初中学校书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析.doc

成都七中初中学校书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：
（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。
（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）……
（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥2—3句）……
注意：
（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。
（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【答案】例文Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.
My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.
My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

2．（·北京中考模拟）“友善”是一种美德，它犹如阳光和雨露照耀并滋润着美德的形成。同学们，请奉献你的友善，为创建和谐社会做出贡献。
某英文网站正在开展以“友善待人、快乐生活”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。主要内容包括:你对友善行为的认识和理解，你平时做哪些友善的事情，以及你这样做的美好愿望。
提示词语:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society
提示问题:What do you think of showing kindness to others?
How do you help them kindly in your daily life?
What do you dream about being kind to them?
It's our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________
【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our community, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.
I believe our society will become better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

3．（·河南中考模拟）亲爱的同学，三年的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，请你谈一谈，这三年以来，你学习英语的心得体会。
要求：
1.你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟。
2.词数80左右。
3.行文连贯通顺。条理清晰，表达准确。
4.文中不允许出现真实校名和人名。否则，试卷按零分处理。
【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.开门见山回忆学习英语的记忆。接下来叙述自己遇到的各种学习英语的困难：听不懂老师的英语，记忆词汇短语有困难等等。分别列出，行文流畅。用短语give up放弃，表示困难太大，难倒了自己。后来在老师的帮助下，克服了困难。逐步地Step by step，不断取得进步。
最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.对学习英语兴趣的重要进行总结，结束全文。

4．（·江西中考模拟）健康的体魄离不开好的生活习惯。同样，对于学生来说优异成绩的取得也需要好的学习习惯。请根据以下要点提示，以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”为题写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法。
提示：1. 养成好的学习习惯的好处；2. 学生中不良学习习惯的表现；3. 对养成好的学习习惯的建议（至少提三条建议）。
要求：1. 内容必须包括以上提示要点可以，适当发挥；2. 90词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Develop Good Study Habits
Every student wants to study well, but it′s not easy.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】How to Develop Good Study Habits
Every student wants to study well, but it s not easy. Good study habits help us learn better and more quickly. However, not all students have developed good study habits. Some are too lazy to finish their homework on time. Some always want to play instead of studying. So how can we develop good study habits?
First, you should pay attention to the study time. The best time to study is when you aren't feeling sleepy. Second, find a comfortable place to study, but not too comfortable or you may go to sleep! Third, you'd better ask for help when having trouble studying.
Always remember these suggestions and follow them. Then you’ll find it not so hard to study well.
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达要求学生写出如何培养良好的学习习惯。
【详解】
考生要根据提示的3点进行发挥。在内容方面，首先要写出好的学习习惯的好处，也就是为什么要培养好的学习习惯；其次是在学习中发现的不好的学习习惯；最后提出自己对养成好的学习习惯的建议；在语言方面，使用考生自己熟悉的句型，简洁无错；在规范方面，注意单词拼写，标点防护好的正确使用。

5．（·山东中考模拟）写作
现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活（low-carbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。
提示词语：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we'd better not spend much money on expensive
clothes.
If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，针对“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

6．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
三年初中生活即将结束，在你学习和成长的路上一定得到了不少人的鼓励，支持和帮助。虽然你就要和一些人说再见了，但总有些人是你一生都难以忘记的。请以I’ll never forget _______为题，谈谈你最难忘的人。老师、好友，家人，同桌还是……
基本信息：（1）Who is he/she?
（2）What kind of person is he/she?
（3）What did he/she do for you ?
（4）Why is he/she unforgettable?
参考词汇：loving, strict, understanding, patient, friendly, generous, reliable, intelligent, optimistic, humorous, confident, honest, helpful…
要求：1.补全标题；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名
3. 介绍他/她的具体情况以及对你的影响；
4. 词数不少于70词。
I’ll never forget _______
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】I’ll never forget my English teacher
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacher-Ms Lee.
Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈你最难忘的人。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如help sb with, be in trouble, encourage sb to do, with one’s help, make great progress, become interested in, once以及cheer up。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．（·浙江中考模拟）今年我国首次将高考作弊列入刑事处罚，称为史上最严高考．此事引起社会广泛关注．作为一名中学生，请你根据以下提示，就"学生考试作弊"这一话题，谈谈自己的看法．
作弊行为
携带纸条或电子产品
作弊原因
努力不够，想考好；…
你的观点
…

要求：
1．词数80-100；开头已给出，但不计入总词数．
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．
3．参考词汇：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考试作弊 electronic products 电子产品 micro-earphones 微型耳机 competing environment竞争环境
It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that …_______
【答案】It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others' answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．
There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．
In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．
【解析】
【详解】
高分句型一：Some students are too lazy to work hard．一些学生太懒了而不努力学习．
句中使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"结构。
高分句型二：In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．为了营造公平的竞争环境，我们应该对考试作弊说不．
高分句型三：it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams．学生考试作弊是不诚实的

句中使用短语有：“in order to do sth 为了做某事”，“say No to…拒绝…”，“copy others' answers抄袭他人的答案”，“get good grades取得好成绩”。

8．（·北京初三）题目1：
假如你是李华，你们班打算去“希望之家（Hope House）”孤儿院做志愿服务，你打算邀请你们学校的留学生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，你们将在孤儿院做什么，以及他可以做什么准备。
提示词语：gate，play，tell stories，gift
提示问题：
．When and where will you meet?
．What will you do there?
．What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity

【答案】例文How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity at the Hope House. We will meet at the school gate at eight this Sunday morning. We will play games with the children and tell them some interesting stories.
We will also give them some gifts. Would you like to tell the children something about your hometown? You can prepare some photos and videos to show.
I am sure we will have an unforgettable time at the Hope House.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇邀请信，注意邀请信的格式，开头问候，中间部分说正事，最后询问他的回答。本材料给的提示比较多，学生可以按照提示，进行问题的回答即可。注意把相关内容用连接词连接起来，使文章通顺。
【详解】
文章为邀请信，开头问候，点明写信内容，写信是为了邀请你和我们一起参加希望之家的志愿活动。我们将会在周日8点在校门口集合，主要活动有和孩子们玩耍，讲故事，赠送礼物等。同时，建议对方做一些事情，可以向孩子们展示一下你的家乡。希望你能和我们一起参加。
【点睛】
本书面表达：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，文章具有条理性，思维缜密。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

9．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达
提示：转眼间三年的初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习与生活中一定有些让你难忘的人或事物。请以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。
要求：1. 请先将题目补充完整后再作答；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 将短文写在答题卡上。写在本试题卷上无效。
【答案】Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.
when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job