成都七中实验学校(初中部)书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析.doc

成都七中实验学校（初中部）书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·广州市第十六中学中考模拟）书面表达
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你的计划。
活动
毕业晚会
时间
6月28日晚上七点
地点
学校礼堂school hall
参与者
全体初三学生和老师
活动内容
1.
邀请校长作演讲；

2.
互赠礼物送祝福；

3.
各班表演精彩节目

4.

要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整洁。 3.80词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
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Best wishes,
Yours Lihua
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

2．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
校园安全问题越来越受到重视，为了确保学生的安全，学校制订了一些规章制度。请根据提示内容，以“School safety”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
提示：
1. 遵守校规，按时到校、离校；
2. 不接受陌生人的物品；
3. 结伴同行，天黑前到家；
4. 遇到麻烦及时告知家长和老师。
School safety
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】School safety
More and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.
First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.
I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下校园安全。所提供的材料中列举了为了确保学生的安全，学校制订了一些规章制度。主要从1. 遵守校规，按时到校、离校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 结伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻烦及时告知家长和老师。这四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。本文是提建议，因此用shouldn’t或should来写。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我们不应该和陌生人一起去，也不应该接受陌生人的东西。
本句话是由and连接的并列句。
【高分句型二】
I think these rules are good for us. 我认为这些规则对我们有好处。
句子these rules are good for us.是一个宾语从句。

3．（·湖南中考模拟）书面表达
假如你校英语社团即将举办为“My hobby” 的征文活动， 请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇短文介绍你的爱好，然后参加此活动。
提示问题：
1. What’s your hobby?
2. Why do you like it?
3. When did you start it?
4. How do you benefit from（得益于） it?
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2. 不少于80词。
My hobby
【答案】My  Hobby
I have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it's always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇作文按照要求可分为4块儿内容，首先指出我的爱好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接着说明为什么喜欢这个爱好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old.我开始这个爱好的时间，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.自己的收获以及期望. 中间用到短语such as…,以及连词because…., when….and…等，使文章表达清晰，也具有连贯性，时态运用正确，是一篇不错的文章。

4．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇题为"Thank you，my teacher!"的短文参加此次活动．要点如下：
（1）严格要求
（2）耐心指导
（3）热情鼓励；
注意：（1）词数80～100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称．
（4）…
注意：（1）词数80-100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称
【答案】Thank you，my teacher!
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（严格要求）【高分句型一】
During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指导）
Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（热情鼓励）
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!（表示感谢）
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇抒情记叙文。
【详解】
英语作文一般分为三个部分
第一部分：开篇点题，交代写作目的——感谢老师为我做的一切。
第二部分：交代感谢英语老师的原因
老师是一个认真工作的人。
老师对我严格要求。
在我考试失利时鼓励我。
第三部分：再次点题，对老师表示由衷的谢意。
高分句型一：
It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因为你的课非常生动有趣，对我们来说学好英语很简单有趣．
句中"because your class is very interesting and lively"为原因状语从句，主句为"itis+形容词+for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事…"结构．
高分句型二：
When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．当我考试失败的时候，你鼓励我不断努力．
句中"When I failed in an exam"为条件状语从句，主句"you encouraged me to keep trying"中有短语"encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事"、"keep doing sth一直做某事"．
提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．

5．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
三年初中生活即将结束，在你学习和成长的路上一定得到了不少人的鼓励，支持和帮助。虽然你就要和一些人说再见了，但总有些人是你一生都难以忘记的。请以I’ll never forget _______为题，谈谈你最难忘的人。老师、好友，家人，同桌还是……
基本信息：（1）Who is he/she?
（2）What kind of person is he/she?
（3）What did he/she do for you ?
（4）Why is he/she unforgettable?
参考词汇：loving, strict, understanding, patient, friendly, generous, reliable, intelligent, optimistic, humorous, confident, honest, helpful…
要求：1.补全标题；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名
3. 介绍他/她的具体情况以及对你的影响；
4. 词数不少于70词。
I’ll never forget _______
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【答案】I’ll never forget my English teacher
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacher-Ms Lee.
Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈你最难忘的人。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如help sb with, be in trouble, encourage sb to do, with one’s help, make great progress, become interested in, once以及cheer up。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

6．（·重庆一中中考模拟）书面表达。
“开心的是暑假如期而至；盼望的是我们独自旅行；烦恼的是父母不予支持。我们，可以独自出游么？”这是本月我校英语“烦恼墙”上最令人关注的内容，并引发了大家的热烈讨论。同为青少年的你觉得在没有父母的陪伴下出游可行吗？请你按要求写一篇英语作文。
参考要点：
1. 解读“烦恼墙”内容；
2. 陈述你的观点及理由；
3. 提出合理的相关建议。
要求：
1. 词数80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校名称。
Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?
Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.
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【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?
Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is coming, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.
Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to accompany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our self-care capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important self-help knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇话题议论文。
【详解】
英语作文一般分为三部分：
第一部分：阐明论点。解读“烦恼墙”内容并陈述自己的观点——青少年应该被允许独自旅行。
第二部分：主体部分。分条逐一阐明理由并提出合理的相关建议。
第三部分：再次重申论点。

7．（·广西中考模拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（interest classes）或特色课（special classes）, 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网的英语论坛上。

观点
理由
一些学生
有必要
1. 培养兴趣, 并获得更多的知识；2. 提高生活技能
另一些学生
没有必要
1. 浪费时间，对学习没有帮助； 2. 给学生带来很多压力
你
…
…

提示语：develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste
of time; cause a lot of stress
要求：1. 短文应包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
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Thank you!
【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.
However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.
In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.
Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，并且已给出了内容提示，所以我们在写作时要围绕所给内容提示展开。
根据作文要求，可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时; 在表达观点时通常会用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出观点的词语。另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出观点，使文章更有条理，次序。
【点睛】
这是一篇比较优秀的作文。首先内容完整，第一段摆出事实，第二段说明别人的的观点，最后说出自己的观点，在表达观点时有条理有次序。 短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有连贯性，及好的句型表达，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。

8．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达。
同学们，从小到大，会有很多不同的人物伴随着你成长，他们可能是你的家人、老师、朋友、同学……甚至是路人。他们或许对你产生了重要影响，进而给你留下深刻印象。请以 “A person who impressed me a lot” 为题写一篇英语作文，描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。
要求：1. 结构清晰，内容完整，语言流利。
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校，姓名等个人信息。
3. 80词左右。
A person who impressed me a lot

【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.
Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of my father’s work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life.
I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如because of，be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now以及spend with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。
内容如下：
1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；
2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；
3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。
参考词汇：雾霾haze
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. __________________________________________________________________________