写人作文教学设计.doc

写人作文教学设计

写人作文教学设计
学习目标：
1．练习写人，通过具体事例表现人物品质。
2．内容要具体，语句要通顺，感情要真实。
3．交流、讲评作文，学生修改自己的习作。
学习重难点：
通过人物的外貌、动作、语言、神态，表现人物的特点；指导学生练习修改自己的习作。
学习准备：多媒体课件
学习过程：
一、创设情景，激发兴趣
1、谈话引入
师：走进第二单元，我们认识了很多名人，有（尊重和爱护儿童的）的列宁，（ 关爱儿童 ） 的高尔基，（善于思考）的李四光，（诚实守信）的宋庆龄，感受到了伟人的优秀品质。这一个个个性鲜明的人物在我们的脑海中久久回荡，那么作者为什么能写的那么令人印象深刻的人物呢？
2、学生交流反馈。
3、教师总结。
不错，作者他抓住人物特点来写。那么你能不能也向作者一样，使你笔下的人物个性鲜明、传神呢？那么让我们一起翻开31页的习作二。
二、明确要求，指导审题
小黑板出示习作要求：
（1）选择身边的一个人来写。
（2）通过具体事例表现人物品质或特点。
（3）自己拟题，内容要具体，语句要通顺。
三、开启思路，指导选材
（一）说自己熟悉的人
1、学生交流自己知道的熟悉的人有哪些人，什么样的人是熟悉的人？
2、引导学生思考：自己准备写谁？你要写他的一件什么事？你要表现他的什么品质？你要写他哪一方面的特点？（学生思考三、四分钟）
3、学生在学习小组内交流，围绕老师提出的三个问题自由畅谈。
4、全班交流介绍自己熟悉的人
（二）指导写熟悉的人
1、师：同学们可真是有心人哪！别看你们年纪小，可真懂得欣赏别人！那么，我们怎样才能把我们熟悉的人的特点在文章中表现出来呢？你能教同学们一招或几招方法吗？（生思考、讨论）
2、指导学文
师：这样吧，让我们再到老师准备好的两篇文章里去找找答案吧。（出示事先准备好的两篇范文）。请同学们认真阅读文章，这里有我们无声的良师益友。
3、学生认真阅读两篇有关写人作文，教师巡视课堂，并相机指点学生有效地自学。
4、师：如何才能把人物的特点写出来？同学们找到答案了吗？谁来给大家说说？
（1）指导学生进行外貌描写
①生：我懂得了写人要描写人物外貌。
师：写人物外貌特点，要抓住人物的哪些方面？
（学生交流，此时教师针对学生的回答有针对性的板书。）
②教师指导学生写一写自己熟悉的人的外貌。（学生动笔写，教师巡视指导。） ③指生读习作，师生评议。
（2）指导进行语言描写、动作描写。
①生：应当注意刻画人物的语言和动作。
师：可我们怎样才能刻画好人物的语言和动作呢？（学生交流怎样写人物的语言）
教师总结：写人物的语言，不能只写某某说，要辅以恰当的动作、神态、姿势、语气或情绪，这样写语言会更生动形象，要符合人物的身份和个性特点。
②可我们怎样才能刻画好人物的动作呢？（学生交流怎样写人物的动作） 教师总结：准确的动作描写，能体现出人物的思想感情和个性特征。描写人物的动作，既要写出做了什么，更要写出怎么做的。首先，要精选动词，把动作写准确具体；其次，要写出人物的连续动作，活现出人物的动态情景；然后，尽力写出人物的动作细节，反映出个性风采。
（3）指导学生写事
①生：写人，没有典型事例可不行。
②师小结：人物的思想品质、个性特点，必须用事实说话，必须借助一两件典型、新颖的事例来表现。“典型”，就是要有代表性，鲜明而突出，不能太平淡、一般：“新颖”，就是不落俗套，时尚而前卫，不能总写那些老掉了牙的事。
③师：下面就请同学们按本次习作要求，写一写自己熟悉的人一具体事情。 学生动笔习作，教师巡视指导。
④指名读自己的习作，师生共同评议。
四、课堂总结：
要想写出人物的特点，必须选择一件突出的事例；要描写人物的语言、动作、神态和心里活动；要表现人物的思想感情。
同学们，我们写完作文以后认真修改是写好作文的必要条件。有位作家说过：“好文章是改出来的，不是写出来的。”我们写好作文以后，也要反复阅读，仔细推敲，养成认真修改作文的好习惯。
七、布置作业 将修改后的作文抄正。
板书设计：
外貌：容貌 身材 穿戴
我熟悉的一个人 语言 典型事例 人物品质
动作
荐炸不死的“陶瑞鑫”(350字)作文 荐唉，这个人(700字)作文 荐文静“猫”(600字)作文 荐我们班的淘气包(800字)作文 荐令我惦记的人(500字)作文
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Do a good job in municipal Party committee assistant committee leadership and leading cadres of the annual assessment work, adhere to and improve the assistant secretary of the Communist Youth League talk system group To weave individual conversation and collective conversation, to strengthen the committees of all levels, the Standing Committee of the Standing Committee, the establishment of a sound system of central group learning, the system of investigation and study, the system of important issues and the reporting system.(two) to strengthen the work of education and training of cadres to conscientiously implement the Central Committee. "On the implementation of grassroots cadres training project and opinions on carrying out the" mission municipal CYL Cadres training project implementation opinions, full implementation of the project of the City Youth League cadres training education. Focus on the county grassroots cadres and workers focused on training, the new school system vocational training League cadres, for the Municipal Organization Department jointly held the third session of the Communist Youth League system training cadres in party. Focusing on the construction of new socialist countryside, strengthening village cadres and rural construction team group member of the young team, the county organizations at various levels throughout the year is expected to train 100 00 rural grassroots cadres, plans to train 1000 village secretary of the village Party branch.(three) actively promote grassroots cadres election work. Under the unified leadership of the party organization, to strengthen grassroots organizations direct work, standardize the election work rules and procedures, in the designated candidate, open competition to democratically elected branch secretary at the same time, actively and steadily the development of Township, streets and other grassroots organizations in the direct election of the pilot work, on the basis of summarizing the experience and gradually expand the scope of the pilot, and gradually formed a set of measures and cadres election system.(four) to strengthen the cadres testing exercise. To study the development of <XX city from 2006 to 2008 cadres testing exercise planning. To select outstanding cadres to the central mission in Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou and other central organs and sending work in developed areas. With the Central Committee the implementation of the western region and ethnic minorities cadres training plan "". To carry out the eighth batch of municipal organs attachment cadre management, selection, training work. The outstanding cadres to start the National Development Bank XX branch testing exercise.(five) to strengthen the group construction. The main position to play the role of Youth League cadre education and training as the city, in accordance with the requirements of post training, further curriculum scientifically and rationally, adopt "arrangement menu" course, basic theory includes group work, focus, hot and difficult issues, to enhance the content and practice; to strengthen the construction of teaching staff, the integration of teachers, establish a quality teacher training team, establish and implement course evaluation system; take delivery of training to the countryside, on-site training, and increase the rural grassroots cadres training efforts.Four, efforts to strengthen the work of young talent(a) to tenth XX young 54 medal in recognition of the publicity, and actively explore the XX youth service. 54 Medal of institutionalization, standardization and socialization mechanism. 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In accordance with the "feasible, effective, classification management, implement step by step" principle, the establishment of municipal Party committee of youth talent database; guiding organizations at various levels generally established the young talent database, construction of city, county (directly under the Communist Youth League), grassroots organizations three young talent information database the relevant information collection system, and gradually establish the city's young people, the Communist Youth League youth talent information network, provide information platform for young talent resource development.Five, take effective measures to strengthen the mission management(a) to strengthen the mission management work. Strengthen the dues collection and management, continue to adhere to the dues collection regularly reporting system, the annual comprehensive award in recognition of the tour and the tour one vote veto system audit system. Do statistical work in the group. The group service award in recognition of the advanced units, standardization, promoting group management work institutionalized.(two) to strengthen the organization of research and information exchange efforts. Grassroots carry out research, efforts to form a number of theoretical results. Make full use of the network carrier, to explore the establishment of electronic group service system, promote the work of Communist Youth League information.Attachment 4:XX municipal Party Committee Propaganda Department of the Communist Youth League work pointsIn 2006, the Communist Youth League propaganda ideological work XX to Deng Xiaoping theory and the important thought of "Three Represents" as guidance, study and implement the party's sixteen and the spirit of the the fifth Plenary Session of the 16th CPC Central Committee implementation of the eight plenary session of the two committee, the city's cultural work conference, the Propaganda Department of the meeting and the the fourth Plenary Session of the 15th CPC Central Committee permanent mission spirit, closely around "11th Five-Year XX" the goal of full implementation of Scientific Outlook on Development, emancipating the mind, seeking truth from facts, keep pace with the times, close to reality, close to life, close to the young, persevere grasp orientation, grasping deepening, grasping construction innovation, further improve the group's propaganda and ideological work ability, unity To guide the majority of members of the youth to achieve the "11th Five-Year" planning tasks, the overall construction of a well-off society, building a socialist harmonious society to make new contributions.One, adhere to the "Three Represents" important thought and Scientific Outlook on Development education to guide the youth, to further strengthen the ideological and political education of youth(a) armed with youth science theory. 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