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1、专四写作讲座之作文闪光点作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板,和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后,如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点,必定会使你的作文如虎添翼!高分作文标志 1、是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项: 1.适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention
2、should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /f
3、or example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge替换enhance o
4、nes competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。 Computer and IBy Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged m
5、yself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. google
6、 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals. It is no exaggeration to
7、 say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular Coincident with 非常地道的句型,表达“与一致”的意思,替换 With Advancement 替换 development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into Current ( curr
8、ently )替换 now Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth. Growing numbers of individuals 替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型, 说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons
9、 will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally 替换 In ad
10、dition / BesidesDeliver 替换 send There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence , obscene, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying tha
11、t , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有however作为插入语, function in the disservice of 替换 do harm toEmerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing ) Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词 As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. C
12、omputers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should , therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play ,do 强调 Positive 替换 important / good 等 A s
13、lice of 替换 a part of Unfavorable 替换 bad Impacts 替换 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语 Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象, merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect各位同学,上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点,作文怎么会不得高分呢! 以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下。1.individuals,characters,
14、 folks替换(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换 eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enj
15、oying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many。, if not most)替换many. 注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要
16、有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语,所以要加that) 7,affair ,bu
17、siness ,matter 替换thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits 10for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increa
18、singly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly13.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替换very16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals
19、to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in 18.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换
20、cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sth23.desire 替换want.24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换remember26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)27. interaction替换communication28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as
21、 an example替换 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点!常用连接词To Add:and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, whats more, moreover, in addition, first (second,
22、 etc.),To Compare:whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, but, although, conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be trueTo Prove:because, for, since, for
23、 the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that isTo Show Exception:yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, sometimesTo Show Time:immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, fin
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