2019_2020学年新教材高中英语Unit1AnewstartPeriod5Writing练习外研版必修第一册.doc

Period 5　Writing应用文写作——日记
　　技法指导
日记是一种常用记事文体，可分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。写英语日记应注意以下要点：
(1)一事一记，要选择当天感受最深刻、最有意义的事件来描述，不要写成流水账。
(2)日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写。
(3)日记多是记述当天发生过的事情，因此常使用过去时，但使用时必须灵活掌握。例如：①进行时可用于描写当时正在进行的动作，马上要发生的事件，以及在某事、某动作正在进行当中，又发生了另外一个事件或动作；②描写天气、景色等，为了描写生动，也可以使用现在时，以表现当时的情景；③文末，发表感想或评论可用现在时或将来时。
(4)日记应条理清楚，写出真实感。
(5)注意格式，英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。书端包括日期、星期和天气，左上角是日期和星期，右上角写当天的天气情况。正文写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。
(6)在日期和天气的下一行中间可以写上日记小标题，也可以不写标题。
(7)在句式上，尽量使用简单句，以防繁杂，造成句型、语法错误。
　　经典句式
1．常用开头句式：
It is sunny and very hot today.
今天天气晴朗，非常炎热。
Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sent me presents.
昨天是我的生日，所以有几位同学送我礼物。
It is the second day of our summer holiday.
今天是暑假的第二天。
2．常用主体段句式：
On this day, all the family members gather together at home to celebrate this special occasion.
在这一天，家庭成员欢聚一堂，庆祝这一特殊时刻。
In the afternoon, I watched TV at home.
下午，我在家看电视。
My classmates are all friendly and helpful. I was very impressed with ...
我的同学都很友好，对我也是很有帮助的。我对……留下了深刻印象。
When it came to the question－answer period, I couldn't wait to ask him some questions, and he answered them with great interest and patience.
当问答时间到来时，我迫不及待地问他一些问题，他带着极大的兴趣和耐心回答了它们。
3．常用结尾句式：
However, this special day left a deep impression on me.
然而，这个特别的日子却给我留下了深刻的印象。
All in all, it's a wonderful day today.
总之，今天是美好的一天。
To sum up, the above—mentioned rules are the very duties of a student.
总而言之，上述规则就是一个学生应尽的责任。
　　典例演练
假设你是李华，今天是你上高中的第一天，请你根据以下提示，写一篇日记来记录高中生活第一天的情况。内容包括：
1．学校的总体情况；
2．同学和老师的情况；
3．你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Monday September 2Fine
It's Monday today. 　____________________________
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[精彩范文]
Monday September 2Fine
It's Monday today. It is my first day at senior high. My new school is much larger than my previous one, and the classrooms are amazing with a computer in each. My classmates are all friendly and helpful. We helped each other to find the dormitories. What's more, I was very impressed by my teachers' different teaching methods. At the first lesson, I felt nervous at first, but I soon felt relaxed after our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves to each other. I like my new school very much. I think I can make great progress in this school.
总评　这是一篇记叙型的日记。结构严谨，中心突出，有选择地记录了当天的见闻(人或事)和感受，并加以分析和评论。完成了题目规定的全部任务，达到了预期的写作目的。同时，该文内容丰富，语句流畅，使用了新学的语法和句式，学以致用。
[亮点呈现]
(1)My new school is much larger than my previous one使用了比较级结构，使表达更准确、生动。
(2)过渡词What's more的使用使文章连贯自然、结构紧凑。
(3)be impressed by和make great progress短语的使用令文章增色不少。
　　跟踪演练
假设你是李华，刚上高中一周左右。请你按以下内容写一篇日记，简单记录你的学校、老师和自己的情况：
1．有60个班，3,500多名学生；
2．教室配有电脑；
3．老师友好热情，教学方法与初中截然不同，上课方式很有趣；
4．与同学相处融洽，积极参加各种课外活动。
注意：1.词数100左右(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Tuesday March 2 Fine
I've been at Senior High school for more than a week. 　
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[精彩范文]
Tuesday March 2 Fine
I've been at Senior High school for more than a week. My new school is a famous school with a long history, covering an area of three times as big as our Junior High school. There are 60 classes and over 3,500 students in my school. It's amazing that every room has a computer. Our teachers are enthusiastic and friendly. Their teaching methods are interesting and nothing like those of our previous teachers.
I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in after－school activities like football, basketball, volleyball and so on. I like my Senior High school life.
课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

Situated in the Haidian District, northwest of Beijing, the Summer Palace is 15 kilometers away from the downtown area. Being the __1__ (large) and most well－preserved royal garden in China, it __2__ (great) influences Chinese horticulture (园艺) and landscape with __3__ (it) famous natural views and the works of humankind.
Originally __4__ (name) Qingyi Yuan or the Garden of Clear Ripples, the Summer Palace was first constructed in 1750. It later __5__ (become) the main residence of royal members at the end of the Qing Dynasty. However, like most of the gardens in Beijing, the Summer Palace __6__ (destroy) by fire and was razed to the ground by the Anglo－French Allied Forces. Rebuilt in 1886, it was supposed to serve __7__ a summer resort for the Empress Dowager Cixi. In 1900, the Summer Palace suffered another hit by the Eight－Power Allied Forces. Then the government spent two years __8__ (repair) it. In 1924, it was open to __9__ public. The Summer Palace was added to the World Heritage Sites by UNESCO in 1998, and became one of the first national AAAAA tourist __10__ (spot) in China.
1．________　2.________　3.________　4.________
5．________　6.________　7.________　8.________
9．________　10.________
答案：1.largest　2.greatly　3.its　4.named　5.became
6．was destroyed　7.as　8.repairing　9.the　10.spots

The Summer Palace is the largest and the most well－preserved royal garden in the world with the richest cultural connotation, hence it is honored as the museum of royal gardens.
颐和园是世界上建筑规模最大、保存最完整、文化内涵最丰富的皇家御苑，被誉为皇家园林博物馆。

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