2019_2020学年新教材高中英语Unit4FriendsforeverPeriod5Writing练习外研版必修第一册.doc

Period 5　Writing
看图写故事——友谊
　　技法指导
看图作文是先仔细观察图画，然后根据图画的内容来写一篇作文。写作时应遵循以下四点：
第一：认真观察图片，确定文章主题。
第二：围绕主题，提炼出文章所需要点。
第三：通过合理想象，补充出其他合适文章主题的要点。
第四：确定文章的时态。
　　经典句式
1．开头常用句式：
There is a person who plays an important role in my life, which is beyond my description.
有一个人在我生命中起了重要作用，这是我无法用语言形容的。
In the widest sense, all people are friends.
在广泛意义上说，所有的人都是朋友。
What is friendship? It is not food that we eat when we are hungry, but it can help fill up our empty mind when we feel lonely.
友谊是什么？友谊不是当我们饿的时候所吃的食物，友谊是当我们感到孤单时充满心间的美好。
Love is a lamp, while friendship is the shadow. When the lamp is off, you will find the shadow everywhere. Friend is who can give you strength at last.
爱就像灯火，而友谊则像影子。当把灯关上的时候，你会发现到处都是影子。朋友是在最后可以给你力量的人。
There are several important elements necessary to maintain a good friendship.
要想维持友谊，有一些重要元素是必不可少的。
2．主体段落常用句式：
That is to say, in hard times, it is easy for us to test whether the friendship is true or not.
也就是说，在困难的时候我们才容易测试出友情的真假。
The ability to really listen to another is basic to good friendship.
倾听的能力，是保持良好友谊的基础。
Whatever your social faults may be, look at them honestly and try your best to correct them.
无论你有什么样的社交错误，诚实面对然后努力改正它们。
You know your own shortcomings, so don't expect perfection from others.
你知道自己的缺点，那就不要期待别人是完美的。
Only in this way can we develop real friendship and keep the lamp of friendship burning all our life.
只有这样做，我们才可以拥有真正的友谊并且让这友谊之光照亮我们的生活。
To conclude, friendship is a mutual spiritual assist.
总而言之，友谊是相互间的精神支持。
3．结尾常用句式：
Remember I won't be far away whenever you need any help!
记住：无论你何时需要任何帮助，我随叫随到。
No matter what happens, a true friend will never leave you alone and will always be with you.
无论发生什么事情，一个真正的朋友决不会离你而去，而是会永远在你身边。
　　典例演练
仔细观察下面的漫画，以“朋友”为题，写一篇短文。
注意：1.所写短文的词数应在120左右；
2．所写文章主题要围绕“朋友”展开；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

[精彩范文]
The best friend
All of us will meet different friends in our life, but who will be our best friend?
Let me introduce my best friend Lingling. We have become friends for 9 years. What a long time it is! She is a seventeen－year－old girl like me. We had an unforgettable experience. One day, it's time to go home but the weather became terrible suddenly. I felt upset because I forgot taking my raincoat with me. At this moment a girl called Lingling appeared, and she gave me a hand, inviting me to go with her. From then on, we formed a deep and lasting friendship.
As the old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
总评　本范文覆盖所有要点，文章结构合理清晰，语言连贯平实，句式丰富多样。开头点明文章主题“朋友”，主体部分联系自己的真实生活展开，使读者更容易产生共鸣。结尾再次扣题。达到了预期的写作目的。
[亮点呈现]
(1)What a long time it is！感叹句的运用，丰富了文章的句式。
(2)a girl called ... , inviting等非谓语动词的使用，使文章表达更精炼，结构更紧凑。
(3)文章结尾谚语的引用恰到好处，既总结全文，又凸显了英语的原汁原味。
　　跟踪演练
仔细观察图片，以“朋友”为题，写作一篇短文。

注意：1.词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。

[精彩范文]
The two pictures describe a common phenomenon that some people always say “My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.” I don't think it a reasonable practice for them to behave that way in our society.
For one thing, more and more studies have reported that mobile phone addiction causes selfishness, unawareness of the needs of others and disconnection from reality. Secondly, friends are more important than phones in our daily life. As is known to us all, if we are in trouble, it is not our phones but our friends that can really help us out.
All in all, good interpersonal skills are a must for our future social life, so put your phone away and make some good friends, which is a really wise move.

课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

A teahouse is a special house which primarily serves tea and other light refreshments (茶点). Its function varies widely __1__ (depend) on the culture. In China, a teahouse is a place __2__ people gather to enjoy tea, chat and socialize. It __3__ (consider) as a symbol of Chinese tea culture and people's leisure lives.
Chinese teahouses enjoy a long－standing history. They __4__ (originate) in the Western Jin Dynasty, took shape in the Tang Dynasty, developed __5__ (gradual) in the Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties and became booming in modern times.
In the Song Dynasty, teahouses spread all over the cities and villages, at a rate comparable with that of restaurants. The owners preferred to decorate their teahouses __6__ paintings of celebrities or rare and precious plants __7__ (attract) customers. In the Ming and Qing dynasties, the number of teahouses went beyond that of restaurants, gaining much __8__ (wide) popularity and becoming more famous. Later, the acculturation (文化植入) of western culture forced traditional Chinese teahouses to take on __9__ new look. After reform and opening－up, with the rapid development of the economy and __10__ (evidence) improvement of people's living standards, teahouses flowered in China.
1．________　2.________　3.________　4.________
5．________　6.________　7.________　8.________
9．________　10.________
答案：1.depending　2.where　3.is considered　4.originated　5.gradually　6.with　7.to attract　8.wider　9.a
10．evident

In Chinese society, the younger generation always show their respect for the older generation by offering a cup of tea.
在中国社会，晚辈经常通过敬茶来表示对长辈的尊敬。

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