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1、专四作文范文 一、短文写作/大作文1. 题目:Academic Dishonesty on Campus(观点表达型)写作要求Recent surveys show that a lot of college students download papers from the Internet to savethe trouble of doing the assignments. This kind of academic dishonesty does harm to the students.You are required to analyze its harmful effects
2、and suggest some ways to prevent it.Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Academic Dishonesty on CampusYou are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.(是什么)In the second part, provide reasons to support your opini
3、on with appropriate details.(为什么)In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.(怎么办)Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure tofollow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路本题是一道现象解释说明/结果预测型的题目,要求分析学术欺骗行为可能
4、会有什么样的恶果,并提出预防措施 。可以从以下几方面进行分析 :关于结果方面: 对个人能力 、诚信等方面不利 ; 对他人不公平,造成恶劣影响 ;可以单说一项 ,也可以综合起来说 。(为什么)关于建议方面: 事先说明这种做法的后果,进行教育; 采取惩罚措施 。(怎么做)范文赏析Academic Dishonesty on CampusIt is shown in the recent surveys that many college students copy papers from the Internet to save the trouble ofdoing their assignme
5、nts. In my opinion, this kind of academic dishonesty is very harmful to these students.引言部分 :作者先提出有学生从网上抄文章以完成老师布置的任务,然后提出自己的观点:这种行为对学生是不利的。(是什么从题目中获取,并提出观点)First, copying papers from the Internet makes students lazy. Copying papers from the Internet seems easy and can save some time and trouble; se
6、ldom work hard to complete their papers on their own. In other words, students will become lazier and lazier. Second, students can learn little from copying others work. Students cannot improve their abilities just by downloading papers from the Internet without their own thinking and working. Whats
7、 worse, once students get used to academic cheating, they may also cheat in other cases in the future, which will be very dangerous for them, especially when its put down in the honesty record.主体部分:作者在这里给出了三个理由:使学生变懒 ;学不到东西,破坏诚信。这里使用 了first,second,what s worse来连接这些理由。这里的一个亮点是近义词的使用,如 :copy papers fr
8、om the Internet ,academic dishonesty ,copy others work ,download papers from the internet,academic cheating 等都是表示学术舞弊行为。(给出理由)Therefore, in order to prevent academic dishonesty on campus, some punishments by the school may be necessary. But the most important thing is that teachers should talk to th
9、ose students, and make them aware of the fact that copying others work cannot bring them any knowledge and that only by working hard can they improve themselves.总结部分:作者用therefore自然引入结论部分,提出自己的建议:需要惩罚,但更要教育。2. 题目:Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards(利弊分析型)写作要求Nowadays more and more students choose
10、to go abroad after they graduate from colleges and universities. They say that they benefit a lot from it, though some people argue that there aremany hardships and difficulties. Whats your opinion about it?Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Studying Ab
11、road: Hardships and RewardsYou are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.(是什么)In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.(为什么)In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.(怎么做)Marks
12、 will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路本题是一个观点选择型的题目,就目前大学生在毕业后选择 留学的利弊孰大孰小进行分析。题目可以从以下几个方面入手:思路1:利大于弊虽然有困难 ,但整体上利大于弊,利体现在 :1. 教学软件硬件优异 ;2. 有利于将来就业等。思路2 :弊大于利虽然有好处 ,但整体上弊大于利 ,弊体现在 :1. 费用昂贵 ;2. 文化差异
13、 ,难以融入其中等。思路3 :应具体问题具体分析 ,因人而异留学有益 ,体现参考思路1;留学也有弊端 ,体现参考思路2 ;是否选择留学 ,应根据个人情况而定 。范文赏析 Studying Abroad: Hardships and RewardsThere is no denying the fact that studying abroad is a hotly debated topic today. As far as Im concerned, I believe hardships and rewards coexist and people have to consider it
14、from all sides.引言部分:作者先提出留学是个热门话题 ,然后说明留学有利有弊应全面综合来考虑 。这表明下文将既讲利又讲弊。(是什么)Obviously, studying abroad has a number of rewards. In the rst place, a student can have access to advanced science and technology as well as desirable working conditions which might not be available at home. In the second plac
15、e, he can be exposed to entirely new ideas and trends. Last but not least, by living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home. Nevertheless, as every coin has two sides, studying abroad also confronts (面对)one with a series of hardships. For one
16、 thing, learning a foreign language is far from an easy thing at the beginning for most people. For another, a completely new environment with different customs and habits mayalso be a barrier to overseas students, especially to the young. An added difficulty lies with finance: it can cost a lot to
17、study abroad.主体部分:作者先说有几个显而易见的益处是列举观点时常用的句式。然后用“In the first place, . In the second place, . Last but not least” 。nevertheless进行转折,说明留学会让人遇到很多困难。这时列举所用的句式换为“for one thing . for another.”使文章更富有变化。Therefore, studying abroad should be viewed as a two-edged sword(双刃剑), which presents us with both benefi
18、ts and troubles. The best policy, as I see it, is to take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding. Personally, Id choose to go abroad and study if I find it necessary.总结部分 :作者概述上面所列利弊,用“a two-edged sword”来概括再恰 当不过,并提出选择出国留学的标准应该是“take into consideratio
19、n his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding”。3. 题目:How to Improve Students Mental Health(解决问题型)写作要求Nowadays some college students suffer from mental diseases and even commit suicide. How to improve students mental health has now become a hot topic. Whats your suggestion?Wr
20、ite on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:How to Improve Students Mental HealthYou are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.(关于suggestion)In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea
21、.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure tofollow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路本题是一道典型的问题解决/建议型的题目,从题目到写作要求都明确说明文章要围绕如何提高学生的精神健康来写,通常可以从 以下几方面着手:1. 从
22、社会层面来看,教育体制上应该给学生更为宽松的环境,使学生能全面发展;2. 从学校层面来看,学校应关注学生的身心健康,设立心理工作室等,进行心理问题的预防和辅导;3. 从家长层面来看,家长应时常关心孩子的心理想法,而不是只注重学习成绩;4. 从学生层面来看,学生自己应该适当了解一些心理常识,开发多种兴趣,能自我纾解负面情绪 。以上这些方面并不意味着在一篇文章中都要涉及 ,只要从其中一两个方面提出建议并详细陈述理由即可。范文赏析How to Improve Students Mental HealthStudents mental health, an issue neglected for lo
23、ng, has now gained increasing public concern. As to how to improve it, heated discussions are right on their way. As far as Im concerned, the university should set up a mental health workshop to improve students psychological health. Its necessary for the following reasons.引言部分:作者先复述题干中的背景,然后直抒胸臆:大学
24、应成立心理工作室, 并以for the following reasons引出下文。For one thing, many problems of mental disorder may be nipped in the bud. Many students may find it hard to deal with pressure from study and personal relationships, and therefore pains, puzzles and frustration may arise. The workshop will be a place for the
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