广东高考基础写作提出建议.pptx

主主题题：给给交友有困交友有困难难的同的同学学提建提建议议。Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.引出建引出建议议 Here are some tips to help you.列举建议列举建议 First,why not go and talk to people standing on their own?I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too.If you do this,I am sure you will soon have a new friend.Second，you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,(理由理由)which will make you find people with the same interests.Finally，you should try to join in a discussion,(理由理由)letting people know how friendly you are.I hope you find these ideas useful.一、篇章结构一、篇章结构引出建议引出建议 列举建议与理由列举建议与理由(希望希望)二、句式模板二、句式模板1.引出建议可以用：引出建议可以用：Here are my suggestions on how to.3.在列举的建议后常常会用起补在列举的建议后常常会用起补充说明作用的分词短语、定语充说明作用的分词短语、定语从句等说明提出此建议的理由从句等说明提出此建议的理由或原因。或原因。三、语篇模板三、语篇模板 It is known to us all that nothing is more important than to keep healthy.引出引出 The ways for us to keep fit can be suggested as follows.列举列举 Firstly,we should have a healthy diet,which means a variety of food including meat,fresh fruits and vegetables.Secondly,drink more water instead of a lot of drinks.Lastly,do some exercise every day,such as running,swimming,playing basketball and so on,for they help to relax ourselves as well as benefit our health a lot.二、基础写作二、基础写作假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你你看到一个名叫看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助：寻求帮助：写作内容写作内容请根据以上帖子内容请根据以上帖子内容,给给Grow-up回贴回贴,并包并包括以下要点：括以下要点：1.你对这一问题的看法你对这一问题的看法(已给出已给出)；2.告诉告诉Grown-up要理解而不要伤害母亲；要理解而不要伤害母亲；3.给给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议提出解决问题的具体建议:多多与母亲交流与母亲交流;行动上证明自己已成年。行动上证明自己已成年。Hi,Grown-up，.Hi,Grown-up，As a student of your age,I understand your situation and the problem you are facing is common among us teenagers.However,you should understand your mother and it is wise not to do anything that may hurt your mothers feelings.引出建议引出建议 Suggestions on how to deal with the problem can be listed as follows.列举建议列举建议 First，its advisable to talk more with your mom，(理由理由)which will help you understand each other better.Second，you should learn to do your own things well by yourself，(理由理由)proving to your mom that you are already a“grown-up”.Its even better if you could share more of the housework，(列举列举)such as cleaning，washing and cooking.假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。写作内容写作内容1.说明回信的意图；说明回信的意图；2.向小明提出建议；向小明提出建议；3.预祝小明比赛成功。预祝小明比赛成功。Dear Xiaoming，.Yours，Li Hua参考范文参考范文Dear Xiaoming,You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you.In my opinion,you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror.Besides,you had better use a brief and concise（简明的）（简明的）language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges.When you are giving the speech,remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words,dont be panic（惊慌的）（惊慌的）and just continue your speech,because no one will notice it.Wish you success in the speech!Yours，Li Hua精华点评精华点评 建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯委婉而中肯,使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建议的句型表示建议,这样这样比较生硬，因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富比较生硬，因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富,如范文中使用了如范文中使用了you should.,you had better.,remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候时候,可以用简明扼要的句型可以用简明扼要的句型,如如wish you good luck/wish you success/may you succeed,使文章使文章长短句结合得当。长短句结合得当。1.cover topics like.涵盖的主题有涵盖的主题有2.arouse ones interest 激发某人的兴趣激发某人的兴趣3.get involved in 参与，涉及参与，涉及4.be well-received 广受欢迎广受欢迎5.make some suggestions 提一些建议提一些建议相关短语相关短语6.protect our environment 保护我们的环境保护我们的环境7.the environmental pollution 环境污染环境污染8.be of great benefit to.对对大有好处大有好处9.get well-prepared(for)(为为)做好充分的准备做好充分的准备10.take responsibility to do sth.有责任做某事有责任做某事11.the coming speech contest 即将到来的演讲比赛即将到来的演讲比赛12.leave a deep impression on 给给留下深刻的印象留下深刻的印象13.take my suggestion into consideration 考虑我的建议考虑我的建议14.have the chance to do sth.有机会做某事有机会做某事15.help students improve their English 帮助学生提高英语水平帮助学生提高英语水平1.The main reason is that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.其主要原因是父母的压力使其主要原因是父母的压力使他们几乎没有时间参加其他活动。他们几乎没有时间参加其他活动。2.The reason why Im late is that I missed the bus.我迟到的原因是没赶上公共汽车。我迟到的原因是没赶上公共汽车。相关句式相关句式3.I like it very much mainly for two reasons.我喜欢它我喜欢它,主要有两个原因。主要有两个原因。4.In my opinion,there are three reasons for this.在我看来在我看来,有三个原因。有三个原因。5.My views are based on the following reasons.我的观点是基于以下理由。我的观点是基于以下理由。6.The reasons for this are as follows.其理由如下。其理由如下。7.So I suggest that you take your friends advice.因此因此,我建议你接受你朋友的建议。我建议你接受你朋友的建议。8.Here I have some suggestions.这里我有几条建议。这里我有几条建议。8.It would be better if you could share more of the housework,such as cleaning,washing and cooking.如果你能如果你能分担更多的家务分担更多的家务,如扫地、洗衣、做饭如扫地、洗衣、做饭,那就更好了。那就更好了。1.在建议倡议的写作中在建议倡议的写作中,应开门见山指应开门见山指出写作目的出写作目的,陈述建议或倡议的内容。陈述建议或倡议的内容。如：如：I am writing to give suggestions about.(建议信建议信)或或In order to.,I am going to make the following suggestions(倡议书倡议书)。2.建议倡议类型的作文都有相关的一些建议倡议类型的作文都有相关的一些固定句型固定句型,考生需要熟练掌握使用这些考生需要熟练掌握使用这些句型和相关的语法。比如句型和相关的语法。比如,在句中使用在句中使用到到advise,suggest或或advice,suggestion等等表示建议的词时表示建议的词时,要考虑到虚拟语气的要考虑到虚拟语气的使用。使用。广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目众的英语节目,新聘任了来自英国的新聘任了来自英国的John作作为节目编辑助理。现在为节目编辑助理。现在,John就节目内容向就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。广大中学生征求意见。写作内容写作内容假如你是学生李华假如你是学生李华,建议开办建议开办“广州全接触广州全接触”(All-round Guangzhou)节目。请根据以节目。请根据以下节目设想给下节目设想给John写信：写信：Dear John，I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students.So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”.I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Hua例题导写例题导写 确定文体。建议信属于应用文信件确定文体。建议信属于应用文信件类的范畴类的范畴,写作的时候一般使用将来时写作的时候一般使用将来时或者一般现在时。建议信在于给对方合或者一般现在时。建议信在于给对方合理并且能够接受的建议理并且能够接受的建议,考生应该注意考生应该注意使用一些委婉的语气。使用一些委婉的语气。信息重组。我们可以把题中信息整合成以下信息重组。我们可以把题中信息整合成以下5个汉语句子：个汉语句子：1.节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人。饮食、名人。2.建议每周六、日举办，方便学生周末观看。建议每周六、日举办，方便学生周末观看。3.建议邀请中学生参加节目建议邀请中学生参加节目,激发学生的收激发学生的收看兴趣。看兴趣。4.这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化,还有助于提高中学生的英语水平还有助于提高中学生的英语水平,这样他们这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。就能向外国游客介绍广州。5.我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。词语翻译词语翻译 翻译或完成下列词或短语。翻译或完成下列词或短语。句句1：(1)包括包括(节目节目)_(2)历史，教育，景点历史，教育，景点，饮食，名人，饮食，名人 _History,education,scenic spots/tourist attractions,food,famous people/celebritiescover/include句句3：(3)激发某人的兴趣激发某人的兴趣 _句句4：(4)提高英语水平提高英语水平_ 句句5：(5)受到欢迎受到欢迎_ be popular among/with sb./be well-receivedby/be welcomed byspark/stimulate/arouse ones interestimprove ones English难句翻译难句翻译 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。句句2：(1)(这个节目将于这个节目将于)每周六、日每周六、日(播放播放)。(1)It would be better to broadcast it on weekends./I suggest that the program be broadcast on weekends./It is a good idea to broadcast it on weekends.(2)方便学生周末观看。方便学生周末观看。(2)We students can have the chance to watch it./It will be convenient for us students to watch it.合并：合并：It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.(因果关系因果关系,可以使用可以使用so.that.句型句型)句句3：(3)(你也可以你也可以)邀请中学生参加节目。邀请中学生参加节目。(3)You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in/take part in the program.(4)(这个节目可以这个节目可以)提高学生的收看兴趣。提高学生的收看兴趣。(4)It will surely arouse/spark/stimulate other students interest in it.合并：合并：You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in/take part in the program,which will surely arouse/spark/stimulate other students interest in it.(补充补充说明关系说明关系,可以使用可以使用which非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句)句句4：(5)(这个节目帮助这个节目帮助)中学生可以更多地了中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。解广州文化。(5)This program can get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou.(6)(中学生可以中学生可以)向外国游客介绍广州。向外国游客介绍广州。(6)The students can introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(7)(这个节目这个节目)有助于提高中学生的英语水平。有助于提高中学生的英语水平。(7)This program helps students improve their English.合并：合并：Not only will this program help students improve their English,but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(第第5个句子和第个句子和第7个句子是并列关系个句子是并列关系,因此我们可以用因此我们可以用not only.but also.这组连词这组连词把它们连接起来把它们连接起来,并且注意统一主语并且注意统一主语,第第6句句是作者提出建议的原因是作者提出建议的原因,可以用可以用so as to 引导引导出目的状语。出目的状语。)参考范文参考范文 Dear John，I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students.So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”.This program will cover topics like the history,education,famous scenic spots,food and famous people of Guangzhou.It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.Besides,you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program,which will surely arouse other students interest in it.Not only will this program help students improve their English,but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students.I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Hua 连句成篇。连句成篇。考生把句子合并成篇章的时候考生把句子合并成篇章的时候,需要注需要注意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表示来信的目的示来信的目的,如：如：You have asked me for my advice on.and I will try to make suggestions./Thanks for trusting me./Regarding.,Id like to make some suggestions等句型。在表示建议的时候等句型。在表示建议的时候,考生可以使用考生可以使用I feel that it would be beneficial if./I would like to suggest that.等句型。另外等句型。另外,考考生若是使用虚拟语气的句子生若是使用虚拟语气的句子If I were you,I would.,也会让文章增色不少。也会让文章增色不少。能力提高能力提高To Whom It May Concern As 1 _ student of this university,I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation 2 _ your kind assistance as always.Meanwhile,I feel that 3 _would be 4 _(benefit)to express my views 5 _(concern)the quality of the library service.concerning aforitbeneficialIn the first place,I find that most keyboards of the library computers are in poor operation,6 _ brings much inconvenience to the users.I would also recommend the library 7 _(improve)the efficiency of buying new books and academic journals.Last 8 _not least,the study rooms need to be furnished 9 _a better lighting system.I hope that you take my suggestions into serious 10 _(consider).Yours sincerely,Johnwhichto improve but withconsideration假设你是李华，你的美国笔友假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda来信来信说她家搬到了一个新城市，她几乎没有朋说她家搬到了一个新城市，她几乎没有朋友，每天除了上课就是在家上网，感觉很友，每天除了上课就是在家上网，感觉很孤独。请你给她写一封信，劝她多结交朋孤独。请你给她写一封信，劝她多结交朋友，参加社会活动。友，参加社会活动。Dear Linda,I know its hard to start a new life in a strange city.However,just staying at home doing nothing but surf the Internet is not good for you.Youd better go out and join in some social activities.By doing this,you can get to know more people around,and it would be a good idea to help others if possible and show them you are open and friendly as well.With time going on,people will know you better and like to make friends with you.Best wishes!读写任务读写任务 阅读下面的短文阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写然后按照要求写一篇一篇150个词左右的英语短文。个词左右的英语短文。Shi Fang spends more than 4,000 yuan a month shopping,but she rarely goes to the shopping mall.“Why need a shopping mall if you have Taobao?I am a Taobaoer,”says Shi,28,a freelance writer(自由作家自由作家)in Beijing.Taobao,Chinas largest online shopping site has become an essential part of Shi Fangs life.She spends half of her monthly salary to Taobao,logging onto the website every day,even when she doesnt need anything,simply to“stay updated to the latest items”.A growing number of Chinese Internet users like Shi have discovered the joys of online shopping.The China Internet Network Information Center(CNNIC)announced in December that more than 87million Chinese made purchases on the Internet in the first half year,which means one out of four Chinese netizens(网民网民)have online shopping experience.It is estimated that the annual consumption from online shopping will reach more than 250 billion yuan this year,and 80 percent of this is carried out through T,Chinas fast-growing e-commerce hub(电子商务中心电子商务中心)established in 2003.写作内容写作内容1.以约以约30个词概括短文的内容要点；个词概括短文的内容要点；2.然后以约然后以约120个词就个词就“网购网购”为主题发为主题发表你的看法表你的看法,内容包括内容包括:(1)叙述你自己或身边朋友的一次网购叙述你自己或身边朋友的一次网购经历。经历。(2)分析现实购物与网购的各自的好处。分析现实购物与网购的各自的好处。(3)对于购物你有何建议对于购物你有何建议?The passage mainly tells us that more and more netizens in China like Shi Fang buy goods on the Internet,among which Taobao is the largest online shopping site.Almost two months ago,I wanted to buy my mother a birthday present,but I didnt have much time to go shopping.I surfed the Internet and found a pink handbag which I thought would fit my mother perfectly.I paid and received it seven days later.To my delight,my mother liked it very much.There is no doubt that shopping online has some advantages.First of all,its quite convenient to shop online for we neednt go from one shop to another,so we can save lots of time.In addition,shopping online is also cheaper and more colorful to us and the Internet provides us with the goods coming in all shapes,sizes and colors,which can meet our demands.However,traditional shopping also has its own benefits.For one thing,our personal information may be let out when shopping online.For another,when going shopping in person,you can experience the color,shape,and quality of goods and enjoy discussing your choices with friends.In my opinion,shopping on the Internet and buying in stores are both important to us in our daily life.We should consider carefully and choose what we want to buy according our own situations.由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存及到人类的健康与生存,为鼓励大家节能环为鼓励大家节能环保保,你们学校将举办一次你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动低碳行动”的环的环保活动保活动,假设你是高三假设你是高三6班的一名学生班的一名学生,将要将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活低碳生活”的倡议的倡议,以下是倡议的内容：以下是倡议的内容：1.尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式;2.少喝一次瓶装水；少喝一次瓶装水；3.尽量不用一次性制品尽量不用一次性制品,如一次性木筷子和塑如一次性木筷子和塑料袋；料袋；4.每周至少手洗衣服一次；每周至少手洗衣服一次；5.每周少开手机、电视一天。每周少开手机、电视一天。写作内容写作内容1.活动背景活动背景;2.倡议目的倡议目的;3.倡议内容。倡议内容。Hello everyone,I am Li Hua from Class Six,Senior Three.I believe everyone,as a member of this global village,should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign!参考范文参考范文 I am Li Hua from Class Six,Senior Three.We human beings are seriously threatened by the environmental pollution,such as waste gases,dirty water and white pollution.In order to encourage all of us to save energy and protect our environment,I am going to make the following suggestions.It is suggested that we should walk or take bikes if we go out.To avoid white pollution，we can reduce the use of bottled water and unrecyclable items such as disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.Whats more,if we can wash clothes by ourselves at least once a week as well as turn off our TVs and mobile phones for one day every week,it will be of great benefit to saving energy.I believe everyone,as a member of this global village,should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign!Li Hua精华点评精华点评 本文的难度在于如何合并信息点本文的难度在于如何合并信息点,考生需要考生需要用三个句子覆盖五个倡议。这时通过分析用三个句子覆盖五个倡议。这时通过分析,可以可以发现发现,绿色出行是减少废气排放绿色出行是减少废气排放;减少使用瓶装减少使用瓶装水和一次性物品是为了减少白色污染水和一次性物品是为了减少白色污染;手洗衣服手洗衣服和减少使用手机、电视机是节能和减少使用手机、电视机是节能,因此考生可以因此考生可以把信息点按照这个逻辑分成三句把信息点按照这个逻辑分成三句,并且做出适当并且做出适当的补充的补充,如如to avoid white pollution.,.it will be of great benefit to saving energy等。等。考生可以使用不同的词组表达同一个概念考生可以使用不同的词组表达同一个概念,使文章语言更丰富使文章语言更丰富,如表示建议