九年级英语书面表达.doc

九年级上册书面表达范例
1. 如何建立良好师生关系
假设某中学生英文报组织学生开展一场如何建立良好师生关系的讨论，请你根据下
表所提示的信息，以How to build a good teacher-studentrelationship为题，用英语写一篇
稿件，向报社投稿，简述有利于建立良好师生关系的教师行为和学生行为，并就你所理解的存在的问题提出建议。
How to build a good teacher-student relationship
教师方面：关心学生，热爱学生；耐心引导，严格要求；更多交流，更多鼓励
学生方面：尊重老师，相互理解；勤奋好学，专心听讲；
存在问题及建议：请根据你的理解列出一个问题，并提出相应建议
注意：1词数90左右。开头不计总数。 2包括所示内容，句式规范，字迹工整。
3可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。

答案
How to build a good teacher-student relationship
A good teacher-student relationship will make learning enjoyable and interesting for the students and teaching important and meaningful for a teacher.
Good teachers should have good behaviour. They should care for students and love them. In teaching they should teach them carefully, and also be strict with them. They should often communicate more with their students and encourage the students more.
As students, we should be polite to our teachers and understand them. We should work hard and listen to teachers carefully in class. We can do something meaningful for teachers.
But sometimes teachers make us stay up too late. And we often feel tired and sleepy in class the next day. I think teachers should encourage us to have more after-school activities and we students should work even harder at our lessons. It needs the efforts of both teachers and students to build a good teacher-student relationship.

2.邻里关系小故事
请根据以下线索写一篇句意连贯的小故事。
1.我妈妈一直和我们的一个新邻居相处得不好。说他看起来不友好。
2.一天，妈妈回到家，发现昨天刚买的项链不见了。3.我决定立刻报警。
4.突然有人敲门，原来是我们的新邻居。5.他手里拿着项链，说昨天在门口发现的。
6.妈妈很感激他，并愿意和他成为朋友。
提示：1.请尽量使用间接引语和定语从句等复合句。2.可在现有线索上发挥想象
答案
One possible version:
My mother got along well with all our new neighbours except the man who lived next door. My mother said he didn’t look like a nice man.
One day, when my mother came home from work, she realized that she had lost her new necklace which she had bought the day before. She was very worried. She wondered where she had been just then. She thought that perhaps the man who lived next door had stolen her necklace. We planned to call the police at once. Just then, someone was knocking at the door. It was the young man, our new neighbour. I was shocked that my mother’s necklace was in his hand. He told us that he found it at the doorway. And he thought it must be my mother’s. so he came to return it.
Yes, that’s true. It is the necklace my mother lost. My mother was very thankful. She told our new neighbour that we could be good friends later.
3. 课间播放音乐是否可行？
假如你是John，你校试行在课间播放音乐．你班同学对此讲行了讨论．看法不一大多数同学赞同，而部分同学反对。请你根据表格中所提供的信息；给你们的校长写封信。介绍大家的观点。同时谈谈自己的看法。

赞同者: 1音乐给人们带来快乐。2使大脑得到放松。3能提高下一节课的学习效率。
反对者 : l课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果。2有时上课还沉浸在课间音乐中，对上课有影响。
你的观点: 自拟l一2个观点

要求： 1词数90左右。 2完整表达表规范工整。 3可适当发挥，清晰完整连贯，
4参考词汇：学习效率study efficiency；预期的expected；沉浸在……中be lost in。
【答案】Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more. music can help them improve the study efficiency.
On the other hand, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on students.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by the music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
【解析】材料作文，结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Most of us agree that……，They think……，They doubt……，I think……等句式的应用。

4. 选举学生会主席，

你校正在选举学生会主席，你打算参选。为了得到全校学生的支持，你准备一篇演讲稿。包括以下内容：
1.性格: 开朗，有活力，乐于助人 2.能力: 成绩好，与人相处融洽，勤奋，做事有条理
3.计划: ……(自己发挥，至少两点) 4.词数：不少于100

答案：
Good moming,boys and girls! My name is Li Xiang. I think I have many strong qualities to be me new chairperson.
I am open-minded, active and helpful. I always take an active part in after-school activities. When someone is in trouble, I'm ready to help him/her. I get on well with everyone around me. My classmates say I am full of energy. Also, I am so hard-working that I often do
Some extra work after class. I am good at my lessons and do things in an organized way.
If you choose me to be the chairperson, I will organize more different kinds of activities to make our school life more colourful. What's more, I will set up some clubs so that we can enjoy ourselves and learn from each other.
Please support me and vote for me. Thank you!

5. 介绍一个受欢迎的“学汉语”的电视节目
目前，“学汉语”的热潮在世界很多国家悄然掀起。假设你是李明，请根据下列信息，给你的美国笔友Patti 写一封推荐信，介绍一个受欢迎的“学汉语”的电视节目。
[写作内容]
电视频道：中国中央电视台第9频道 （CCTV 9）； 国际频道，方便收看
节目名称：“学汉语”
播出时间：每周二至周六： 09：15 和 15：15
主 持 人：大山，加拿大人，有丰富的汉语学习经验
节目内容：《交际汉语》、《旅游汉语》和《体育汉语》（08年“奥运”始播）
节目特点：1. 易懂，易学，生动有趣; 2. 了解、传播中国文化。
[要求] 1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。2. 信的开头和结尾不计入总数。

答案：Dear Patti,
Nowadays, Chinese is holding a very big popularity all over the world, and I am very pleased that you like to learn Chinese, too.
Here I’d like to introduce to you the TV program “Learning Chinese” on an international channel CCTV 9, which is convenient to receive in your country. The broadcasting time is at 9:15 a.m. and 15:15 p.m. from Tuesday to Saturday. The program is being hosted by Da Shan, a Canadian with rich experience in learning Chinese. It consists of three sections: Communication in Chinese, Travel in Chinese and Sports in Chinese, which has been broadcasting from the time when the Beijing Olympic Games started. I think you will benefit a lot because the language is very easy and interesting to understand and learn, and above all, it is a very good way to understand and spread our Chinese culture.
So I hope you will like the program and benefit from it !
Yours,
Li Ming

6. 介绍你最喜欢的女演员Sharon。
假设你是Kitty，请根据下表中的要点提示，用英语写一封信，向你的网友Lisa介绍你最喜欢的女演员Sharon。
出生日期：1979年5月7日
演艺生涯：很小的时候，喜欢电影和表演；梦想当一名演员 24岁，第一次露面；标志着成功职业生涯的开始
到2012为止，主演了十多部电影；获得奥斯卡最佳女演员奖
你的观点：自拟至少两点
注意：1要点齐全，可适当发挥。2词数90左右。3条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整。

【答案】Dear Lisa,
My favourite actress is Sharon. She was born on May 7th, 1979. When she was young, she liked films and she also liked acting. Her dream was to become a successful actress. When she was 24 years old, she made her first appearance in a film. This marked the beginning of her successful career. By 2012, she had played the lead roles in over ten films. She had also won an Oscar for Best Actress. After she became famous, she devoted much of her money and time to charity. I think Sharon is not only a talented and experienced actress but also a great humanitarian. I believe her acting skills will be even better in the future.
Best wishes,
【解析】图表作文，动笔前认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

7. 学生周末该不该与同学外出活动？
假如你叫李涛-你和父母就“学生周末该不该与同学外出活动”进行了讨论。请以Should teenagers go out with friends at weekends?为主题，参照表中所提供的信息，给你的
网友Sam写一封邮件，介绍讨论情况。3……
Your parents' ideas：1读书、做作业 2好好上床休息一下 3考试分数最重要 。4帮助父母做家务活
Your ideas：1和同学外出活动 2外出活动也是一种调节和放松， 3…. 5 4……

要求：1所写内容要包括表内信息：
2表中Your ideas中的3、4两个观点由你对应做出合理的说明，还可适当发挥你父母和你的其他观点。
3词数为100词左右。
【答案】Dear Sam,
How is eveL~hing going with you? I have had a discussion with my parents recently. We talked about if teenagers should go out with friends at the weekends.
My parents think we teenagers should read more books and spend enough time doing our
homework. They think marks in the exams are the most important for us. When we feel tired, we should have a better sleep in bed. So they don't want us to play out with friends. They also think ifwe have free time, we should help them do the housework at home.
But I think we teenagers should go out with our friends at the weekends. It can make us feel relaxed and give us more energy for our study. We can also learn a lot from our activities. Of course, if we have more spare time, we should help parents do the housework.
What's your idea about the problem?

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如read more books，spend enough time，the most important for us，have a better sleep，have free time，help them do the housework，at the weekends等。而My parents think we teenagers should read more books and spend enough time doing our homework./ When we feel tired, we should have a better sleep in bed./ It can make us feel relaxed and give us more energy for our study.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。
点睛：这是一篇材料作文。根据表格内容可知用一般现在时，可以把表格提供的信息翻译成英文，然后在写作中进行适当性的发挥。

8. Writing. 排忧解难求助信
　　Dear Editor:
　　I quarreled with a friend but I knew deep down that it was my fault. So I tried to talk to him, but he paid no attention to me. Maybe I hurt him too much. I tried talking to him again and he did the same thing. Is our friendship over?
　　Gao Yang, Shananxi
　　这是一位同学写给编辑的一封信。要求为他排忧解难。假设你就是这位编辑，给他写封回信。字数在100词左右。

答案：
Dear Gao Yang,
　　I think it is too early to say whether or not your friendship is over. I don’t know what you said to your friend, but if he does not want to talk to you, I think you must have upset him a great deal. You need to give him more time to forgive you. People often say things they don’t mean but a few words in anger do not last for ever.
　　At least you have tried to say you are sorry. Even though he doesn’t want to talk yet, your friend knows that you want to make up. And if he is a true friend, he will realize that friendship is more importasnt than being angry. Of course, maybe he doesn’t want to talk to you again. This means he doesn’t value your friendship very highly. If so, have you lost anything worth worrying about?
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