-年全国卷英语短文改错(含答案)-共5页.pdf

12010-2015 年全国卷英语短文改错年全国卷英语短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。2010 年（全国卷年（全国卷 I）It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first prize on the Story Writing Show.All I had to do was to write a story or present it.My teachers have been telling me how great my writing was.So if they had said was true,I would have a chance of winning the prize.What were better,I had useful help.There was Uncle Chen,gentleman living near my house,who was a very much famous writer.He agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer.2010 年（全国卷年（全国卷 II）Christie was one of my best friend at high school.At that time,we often spend time together.Thank to her help,I made great progress in my study.Last year,she decided to study to abroad.In other words,we would be separated long time.Before her leaving off,I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him.She said it was the best gift she has ever had.From then on,weve kept touch with each other through e-mails.I look forward to see her again in the near future.2011 年（全国卷年（全国卷 I）One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes.I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school.The smell from it was very good.Since the lunch bell finally rang,my friends and me met under a tall tree and had our lunches.My best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me.Nang is a specially kind of cake in Xinjiang.I like them very much.Now Aigulie and I study at different colleges or we can only see each other during the summer vacation.I think over her a lot and I miss the food and the good time we had together.2011 年（全国卷年（全国卷 II）Dear George,Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals.After we said goodbye to you,we went to Washington D.C.,that we stayed for three days.My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day.However,my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.It was really a nice experience.If youd like to make trip to our city some day,I will be better than happy to be your guide.Yours,Mike2011 年全国新课标卷 My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend,he lent to me 2lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.2012 年（全国卷年（全国卷 I）Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country.To begin with,all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need.That wont easy,I know，but we have to start anywhere.Whats more,we can go to work by bike once and twice a week,and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil.Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home.For example,how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there?2012 年（全国卷年（全国卷 II）Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving.Water is important.We,as well as animal,cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it.Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water.To deal with a problem,I think,we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water.Next,no drinking water should left running.Third,we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing,especially bath water for which is quite a lot,and that will save much water.Sincerely,Li Hua【2012 全国新课标】I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,Thats it.No more toys to you.My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on2013 年新课标年新课标 1I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.2013 年新课标年新课标 2The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in BritainIt is said to have started in the early 1800sHave tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 oclock at night This custom soon becomes another meal of day Interesting,it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industry Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habitsThis made for the grow in the porcelain industry2013 年年(全国一卷）全国一卷）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.2013 年年(全国二卷）全国二卷）Two years before,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another car,3and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.I called my parents,so I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.2014 年(全国一卷）Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden,since then-for all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!2014 年(全国二卷）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didnt need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom,buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.2015 全国卷 1 When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.015 全国卷 2 One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.42010 年（全国卷年（全国卷 I）76.去掉第二个 a 77.on 改为 in 78.or 改为 and 79.have 改为 had 80.they 前加what 81.were 为 was 82.Uncle 后加 a 83.去掉 much 84.reading 为 read 85.advices 为 advice2010 年（全国卷年（全国卷 II）76.friendfriends 77.spendspent 78.ThankThanks 79.to abroad 改为 abroad 80.a long 81.去掉 off 82.himher 83.hashad 84.kept in touch 85.seeseeing2011 年（全国卷年（全国卷 I）76.把 memory 改为 memories。77.在 lunches 前面加 the。78.把 hold 改为 held。79.把 Since改为 When/After。80.me 改为 I 81.把 was 去掉。82.把 specially 改为 special。83.把 them 改为 it。84.把 or改为 and。85.把 over 改为 of。2011 年（全国卷年（全国卷 II）76.after-since 77.them-us 78.for-with 79.That 改为 Where 80.去掉 much 81.staying-stay 82.day-days 83.fly-flew 84.trip 前 a 85.better-more2011 年全国新课标卷 1.buy 改为 buying 2.here 改为 there 3.for 后面加 a 4.but 改为 and 5.on 改为 in6.was 改为 were 7.luggages 给我 luggage 8.friend 改为 friends 9.去掉 to 10.feel 改为 felt2012 年（全国卷年（全国卷 I）1.efforts 改为 effort 2.off 改为 down 3.把 to 删掉 4.wont be 5.anywhere-somewhere 6.andor 7.Other-Another 8.electricelectricity 9.and 改为 but 10 television 后加 on2012 年（全国卷年（全国卷 II）76.you 后加 my 77.animal-animals 78.or-nor 79.seemed-seems 80.we-they 81.a-the/this/that 82.though-because/since/as 83.left 改为 be left 84.using-used 85.去掉 for【2012 全国新课标】1.little-less 2.toytoys 3.didwent 或者 did 后加 go 4.itthem 5.在 parents 前加my parents bought me new toys 6.which-what 7.tear-tore 8.to-for 9.mustcould/might 10.去掉 last 前的 to 2013 年新课标年新课标 11.hold 改为 hold 2.passes 改为 passed 3.much 改为 well/clearly 4.shoulder 改为 shoulders 5.toward 改为 to/into 6.himself 改为 him 7.he was 改为 and he was 8.去 a 9.during 改为 when 10.never 改为 ever2013 年新课标年新课标 2 1.去 of 2.Have 改为 Having 3.that 改为 which 4.becomes 改为 became 5.of day 改为 of the day 6.Interesting 改为 Interestingly 7.by 改为 with/to 8.drank 改为 drunk 9.good cup 改为 good cups 10.grow 改为 growth2013 年年(全国一卷）全国一卷）1.visit 改为 visited 2.but 改为 and/so fortably 改为 comfortable 4.were 改为 was 5.for 改为 with 6.forwith 7takingtaken take 8dishdishes 9such 后加 a such 10memine 2013 年年(全国二卷）全国二卷）1.before 改成 ago;2.for 去掉；3.Unfortunate 改为 Unfortunately 4.week 改为 weeks；5.so 改为 but；6.will改为 would；7.myself 改为 me 8.farther 改为 far;9.interested 改为 interesting;10.truth 前面加 the2014 年(全国一卷）1.beforeago 2:byof 3.yearyears 4.hadhas 5.As resulta 6.somewhereeverywhere 7.tastetasty 8.muchmany 9.butyet 或去掉 but 10.wonderfullywonderful2014 年(全国二卷）1.TheyThere 2.didnt-dont 3.manymuch 6.4.withfor 5.hourhours 6.look-looks7.the flowersflowers 8.satsit 9.listening-listening to 10.helpfully-helpful2015 全国卷 1 1.think thought 2.countryside 前加 the 3.orand 4.onwith 5.been 去掉 6.seriouslyserious57.airsair 8.muchmany 9.foundfind 10.yourour2015 全国卷 2 1.parent 改为 parents 2.on 改为 in 3.very 去掉 4.looks 改为 looking 5.where 改为 that 或者去掉 where6.begun 改为 began 7.telling 改为 told 8.a 改为 the 9.saw 后加 his 10.terrible 改为 terribly