2023年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析.doc

专四新题型写作
自2023年起，专四考试写作部分改革，规定根据所给旳题目、图表或阅读材料等，写一篇200词左右旳作文。出现旳新题型命题+材料作文对考生旳阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高旳规定。考生可以采用“简短概述材料—评论—总结”旳写作模式。值得注意旳是，在写作过程中，概述材料和进行评论缺一不可，否则将也许被扣分。
例题1
PART VI WRITING
Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS, in which you should:
1) Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
2) Comment on whether students learn more from classes than from other resources
You can support yourself with information from the excerpt.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

Do students learn more from classes than from other resources?
With the advent of the Internet and other telecommunications technologies, there is a vastly growing wealth of resources available from an immense range of media outlets. Students have the ability to absorb information in a quicker and more efficient way when researching on their own through reading publications or browsing webpages online. As a result, some people argue that students now learn more from other resources than from classes.
Conducting research with online materials is an active process, which allows youngsters to focus in greater detail rather than passively listening to a lecture in a large classroom.
The Internet and TV are also easily accessible platforms for students in the remote places where teaching resources are not as abundant as those in more developed regions.
However, teachers have the capability of explaining the knowledge in a deeper way and not only provide theoretical explanation but also practical experience about life. They have accumulated a large body of intelligence that is profoundly more precise than other sources. Teachers not only function as initiators who impart knowledge but also serve as supervisors or guardians. The conventional role of instructors, in this day and age, has evolved to become evaluators and facilitators, guiding students in their academic and personal efforts.

范文1
In the information age, the traditional student-teacher relationship has been affected deeply and people begin to doubt whether students can learn more from classes than from other resources.（简介背景） According to the conventional view, teachers are still the primary source from which students obtain professional knowledge, timely class interaction, and effective supervision from teachers.（总结第一种观点）On the contrary, nowadays, many people believe that students can learn more from other resources such as Internet and TV since they are more accessible and engage students more actively in research.（总结第二种观点）
For me, I am in favor of the first view.（表明立场） Teachers play an irreplaceable role in education, whether it’s in the past or at present, since they not only impart knowledge, but also educate people.（总论据） For one thing, what students learn from their classes is more precise than from other resources which provide an enormous amount of data needed to be sifted through to determine which information is accurate.（理由一）For another, teachers in school put the shaping of personality in a place as important as the teaching of knowledge, which is hard for students to obtain from other resource.（理由二）
In conclusion, the development of cutting-edge technology exerts a big impact on modern education. However, it can never eliminate the need for high-quality professionals in classroom.（重申论点） (213 words)

例题2
PART VI WRITING
Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS, in which you should:
1）Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
2）Comment on whether people should choose to become indoorsy
You can support yourself with information from the excerpt.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

Should people choose to become indoorsy in modern world?
In modern times when we can buy everything we need on the Internet, and communicate and even work through the Internet, becoming indoorsy men or women is simply a choice of different lifestyle. In the past, if you want to buy something, you need to go out of your house, go to the store, and spend an hour or two choosing the product you want to buy. But now you can just sit in front of a computer and click your mouse, and the product can be delivered to you. Being indoorsy can save people a lot of time.
Being indoorsy can allow people to think and work in a peaceful environment. For example, writers can be quite creative when they are alone at home without being interrupted.
Some sociologists warn that the indoorsy lifestyle will make people become self-centered and naive. If people stay at home for a long time, they will have little interpersonal contact with others. They do not know how to have face-to-face communication with others, and they may become shy, uncomfortable, or self-centered when they are involved in real-life communication. This indoorsy lifestyle will have a bad effect on their normal interpersonal relationship and their normal work.

Indoorsy men or women spend most of their time sitting in front of a computer, and they seldom attend outdoor activities. Watching the computer screen for a long time will do great harm to their eyes. Also, many indoorsy people do not like to attend sports activities, and in the long run, their health will get worse.

范文2
审题思绪
本题讨论“宅”生活与否可取。在详细行文方面，考生应首先简要概述正方观点：“宅”是现代旳一种新型生活方式。然后概述反方观点：“宅”有种种弊端。接下来给出自己旳观点：现代科技是把双刃剑，我们要把握好，合适运用可以使我们旳生活更便利，但过度依赖则会对身体有害。最终总结全文，重申观点。
Should We Embrace Indoorsy Lifestyle?
With the globalization of modern technology, especially the world-wide access to Internet service, people’s lifestyle has been greatly influenced. (简介背景) Some enjoy indoorsy lifestyle. They hold that indoorsy lifestyle is time-saving and peaceful. In contrast, those against the idea claim that keep an indoorsy lifestyle will do harm to people both psychologically and physically.（总结材料）
As far as I am concerned, modern technology is a double-edged sword.（点明观点） If we consider it as a useful tool to improve our life, it will certainly bring unprecedented convenience to us. With the assistance of the Internet, one can save his time through working, shopping, or communicating with others at home.（正方理由一）Also, solitude isn’t always equal to loneliness. Free from outside interruption, one can be creative and keep his mind sharp.（正方理由二） On the other hand, too much reliance on or indulgence in the Internet will certainly have an impact on our normal life and work. For instance, indulging in social network online may corrode peoples’ social skills. To be specific, they may feel lost when talking with people face-to-face, which may affect their normal relationship with family members and friends.（反方理由一）What’s worse, sitting in front of a computer all day long means little outdoor activities, which may damage one’s health.（反方理由二）
In conclusion, while enjoying all the benefits the virtual world has brought to us, indoorsy people should also step out of their home and engage themselves in the real world.（总结上一段） (234 words)