高三英语基础写作专题五今昔对比.pptx

基础写作基础写作-今昔对比今昔对比 今昔对比类作文在高考命题中常用今昔对比类作文在高考命题中常用“少量少量文字文字+表格或图表表格或图表”的形式来命题。的形式来命题。今昔对比的写作格式是：今昔对比的写作格式是：1.开头（开门见山交代事情在什么时间发开头（开门见山交代事情在什么时间发生了变化）生了变化）1句句 2.用具体事例进行一一对比，阐述今昔变用具体事例进行一一对比，阐述今昔变化化3句句 3.结论（总结变化结果或对不利的变化结结论（总结变化结果或对不利的变化结果提出解决建议）果提出解决建议）1句句在做今昔对比时，要注意时态的变化。在做今昔对比时，要注意时态的变化。谈到过去的情况要用谈到过去的情况要用_谈到现在的情况要用谈到现在的情况要用_过去时态：一般过去时过去时态：一般过去时现在时态：一般现在时现在时态：一般现在时或现在完成时或现在完成时常用词汇常用词汇 change(vn),take place，in 2008 10 years ago in the past（用过去时）（用过去时）,in recent years in the last five years over the past twenty years since 2001（用现在完（用现在完成时）成时）,used to,once,different,take on a new look（呈现新面貌）（呈现新面貌）一：一：总述何时何地发生了变化。总述何时何地发生了变化。多以多以changes作主语作主语,用用take place的现在完成时态。的现在完成时态。句型背诵句型背诵 1.近五年来近五年来,我的家乡发生了巨变。我的家乡发生了巨变。Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last/past five year.句式仿写：句式仿写：(1)在过去约在过去约20年的时间里年的时间里,我们的生活发生了巨变。我们的生活发生了巨变。_(2)近年来，人们生活中交流的方式发生了很大的变化，近年来，人们生活中交流的方式发生了很大的变化，_ Over the past twenty years,great changes have taken place in our life.Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in peoples life in recent years.二二.通过今昔对比描述具体变化。通过今昔对比描述具体变化。1.used to,but now 过去常过去常，但是现在，但是现在2.in the past,but now 在过去在过去，但是现在，但是现在3.once,but now 曾经曾经.，但是现在，但是现在句型背诵：句型背诵：1.我以前周末也常上课并完成不计其数的作业我以前周末也常上课并完成不计其数的作业,但现在我但现在我有更多的自由支配的时间。有更多的自由支配的时间。I _ have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well,_ I have more free time.句式仿写：句式仿写：1）我父母曾经住在一个很拥挤小房子里，但现在我们搬）我父母曾经住在一个很拥挤小房子里，但现在我们搬进了一个新的公寓。进了一个新的公寓。_used tobut nowmy parents used to live in a small crowded room,but now we have moved into a new apartment.(2)从前我父母很他人联系主要是通过写信，而现在我们从前我父母很他人联系主要是通过写信，而现在我们几乎能在任何地方任何时间用自己的手机互相交流。几乎能在任何地方任何时间用自己的手机互相交流。_My parents kept in touch with others mainly by writing letters in the past,but now we can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time with our own mobile phones.三三.结尾常用句型。结尾常用句型。如果要总结，常用下列短语如果要总结，常用下列短语 In short,In a word,To sum up,All in all,in conclusion,to draw a conclusion句式仿写：句式仿写：1.总之总之,过去过去20年里我们生活的变化给我们带来了便利和年里我们生活的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。舒适。_2.总之总之,人们今天的生活比以前便利和快捷了。人们今天的生活比以前便利和快捷了。_To draw a conclusion,peoples life is much easier and quicker than before.In short,changes in our life in the past 20 years have brought us comfort and convenience.(2).如果需要表达个人的观点或感想，则用下列如果需要表达个人的观点或感想，则用下列短语短语 in my opinion,as far as I am concerned,I firmly believe that,I am totally convinced that,实战演练实战演练 Now comes your turn.过去五十年，西藏发生了翻天覆地的变化，过去五十年，西藏发生了翻天覆地的变化，请以请以“Changes in Tibet”为题，写写西藏的变为题，写写西藏的变化。化。昔（旧西藏）昔（旧西藏）今（新西藏）今（新西藏）行（交通方式）行（交通方式）没有公路没有公路可以享受便利交可以享受便利交通通住（居住条件）住（居住条件）没有自己的住没有自己的住房房住宽敞舒适的房住宽敞舒适的房子子教育教育只有只有2%的孩子的孩子能上学能上学98.2%的孩子有的孩子有机会上学机会上学【写作要求】只能使用五个句子表达全部内容 在过去，西藏没有公路。在过去，西藏没有公路。In the past,there was no road in Tibet.There used to be no roads在过去，人们没有自己的住房。在过去，人们没有自己的住房。People there didnt have their own houses.People used to have no houses_.在过去，只有在过去，只有2%的孩子能上学。的孩子能上学。In the past,there was only 2%of kids could go to school.of their ownChanges in Tibet Great changes have taken place in Tibet in the past fifty years.There was no road in the past,but now the people in Tibet can enjoy convenient transportation.Once,people there didnt have their own houses,but now they can live in spacious and comfortable houses.Whats more,only 2%of the children could go to school in the past,but now 98.2%of the children can have the opportunity to attend schools.In short,great changes in Tibet have brought a lot of convenience and comfort to the Tibetans.Great changes have taken place in Tibet in the past fifty years.In the past,the people didnt have their own houses and there used to be no roads and only 2%of the children could attend school.But now,not only can we live in spacious and comfortable houses,but also we can enjoy convenient transportation.Whats more,nearly all of us have the chance to go to school now.In short,great changes in Tibet have brought the Tibetan a more convenient life.Another sample: