高三英语二轮复习公开课求助信.pptx

高考高考备考备考书面书面表达表达应用文专题应用文专题 求助信求助信之之丰顺中学丰顺中学 高三高三19班班 李洪庆李洪庆Step 1 analyze the requirements(认真审题认真审题)Step 2 draw up an outline(谋篇布局谋篇布局)Step 3 organize the sentences(联句成篇联句成篇)Step 4 get the article polished up(锦上添花锦上添花)Step 5 check the mistakes(查漏补缺查漏补缺)Five steps to write an English essayFive steps to write an English essay：求助信的文章框架：求助信的文章框架：1.1.直言直言目的目的2.2.描述描述困难困难3.3.表达表达希望得到的帮助希望得到的帮助（自我介绍）（自我介绍）（联系方式）（联系方式）1.ask for help/seek for help_2.encounter some problems_3.be faced with difficulties _4.offer some constructive guidance _5.be grateful to sb.for sth _ _ _6.offer sb.a hand _7.(做)某事有困难 _8.给某人留下深刻印象_9.设法成功做某事 _10.进一步的消息_11.请某人帮忙_12.一次难忘的经历_ 寻求帮助遇到一些问题面临困难提供一些有建设性的指导have trouble in（doing）sth.给某人帮助 leave sb.a deep impression manage to do sth.further information ask sb.a favor an unforgettable experience 因某事感激某人 提出请求帮助提出请求帮助 1.我想知道您是否能够 2.如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。阐明自己的问题阐明自己的问题 3.And Ive found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects.For one thing,.For another thing,.4 .Therefore,its my hope that you can give us some practical tips on how to.表达谢意表达谢意 5.谢谢您一切的好意。Usefulpatterns1.Iamwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeafavor/givemeahand.2.Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichtroublesmealot.Tobeginwith,Whatsworse,Whattroublesmemostis3.Unfortunately,Ifinditquitedifficulttodo.4.Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iameagertogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceon?5.Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.1.The whole thing is getting very difficult and I real need your good advice!real改为really2.The main reason Im writing is that I have litte favour to ask.little前面加a3.I thank you in the advance for your prompt attention to these matters.删掉the4.I would like to bring your attention to some problems what are occurring in this block.what改为that/which5.The people in the apartment below mine often play loudly music late at night,making it very difficult for me to sleep.loudly改为loud6.Also,there is often rubbish leaving in the stairway.leaving改为left7.I would appreciate you if you would help me solve these problems.第一个you改为it8.Were trying to find someone to look after the cats while we away.away前加are9.There are hundreds of people go to work in cars and buses.go改为going10.I look forward to hear from you about the action that the council will take on this matter.hear改为hearingDear Mr.Brown,Im now safely back to home.Thanks you very much for all the kind I got from you during my stay.Hope everything are fine with you there.Now I wonder whether I could ask you favor.When I come back,I suddenly realized that I have left my English dictionary behind at your place.Thankkindnessis_a_came_had It is an precious gift from my American teacher.Would you please be so kindly as to send it back to me?Ill pay for the postage.The dictionary must on the bookshelf in my bedroom.It is the one with a red cover.Thanks and all the best.Yours,Li Huaakind_be【2013新课标新课标卷：请求帮助接机】卷：请求帮助接机】假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30Dear Peter,How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to have a meeting in your city.Do you remember the Chinese painting I promised you last year?My uncle will bring it to you soon.I hope you will like it.I wonder if you could do me a favour.This is the first time that my uncle visits the US,so I hope you can meet him at the airport.He arrives at 11:30 a.m.on August 6th and his flight number is CA 985.I would appreciate it if you could take him to his hotel.My uncle is tall.He will be wearing dark glasses and a blue jacket.Thank you very much in advance.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua写信目的写信目的困难；问题困难；问题具体细节具体细节感谢及回复感谢及回复【2011山东卷改编：演讲比赛写稿求助】山东卷改编：演讲比赛写稿求助】作文原题假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。亲爱的Tom，你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。我等不及再次和你见面了。你的，李华Its been a month since you studied in Beijing.How is everything going with you?1.你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。2.今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July.To have a very good performance,I am making preparations for it.However,I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials.Meanwhile,I find it hard to use English properly.3.然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。4.如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand./I would be very grateful if you could do me a favor.You know,I have been missing you since you left,so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.5.你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。6.我等不及再次和你见面了。I cant wait to see you again!【模仿翻译】【模仿翻译】Dear Tom,Its been a month since you studied in Beijing.How is everything going with you?I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July.To have a very good performance,I am making preparations for it.However,I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials.Meanwhile,I find it hard to use English properly.I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.You know,I have been missing you since you left,so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.I cant wait to see you again!Yours,Li Hua求助信求助信写写作作三步走三步走：介绍自己、提出请求-说明原因及其它事项-表达谢意、期盼答复Tips:在许多情况下，求助信是写给不太认识的人或者机构，所以在信的开头可以做一下简单的自我介绍。同时，由于提出的请求往往都是需要麻烦别人的事情，所以要注意语气的礼貌程度，不要吝啬你的感谢。1正确把握时态正确把握时态,保证语言准确性保证语言准确性-目前某方面存在困难目前某方面存在困难一般现在时一般现在时-描绘得到帮助后的进步描绘得到帮助后的进步一般将来时一般将来时2.熟悉常用句型熟悉常用句型,提高文章整体美感提高文章整体美感-首先做自我介绍，简要交待自己的困难首先做自我介绍，简要交待自己的困难,展望获得帮助后自己的进步展望获得帮助后自己的进步Attention3.贴切使用过渡性词汇贴切使用过渡性词汇,提高文章逻辑性提高文章逻辑性-first,besides,whats more-in the meanwhile,at the same time,in addition,also4.适当使用高级表达方式适当使用高级表达方式,提高表达档次提高表达档次-“很难与朋友相处很难与朋友相处”1).Its hard to get along with my friends.2).I find it difficult to get along.Sample 1：Dear_,Mynameis_.Im_.Ihavemetmuchdifficultyin_.First,_.Whatsworse/Worsestill,_.Whatsworst,_.Facedwith/Facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.Wouldyouliketo_sothat/inorderthat_?Inthemeanwhile/Meanwhile,_.Also,Iwouldlikeyouto_to_.ImsurethatIcan_withyourhelp./Iwillbemuchappreciatedifyouhelpmeto_.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours_,_Dear_,I am_(介介绍绍自自己己的的身身份份).I will/am_(与与请请求求有有关关的的自自身身现现状状)。Id like to_(阐阐明明自自己己的的请请求求).I will appreciate your_(有有关关该该请请求求的的详详细细信信息息).Im going to _(对对方方如如能能帮帮助助实实现现请请求求，自自己己将将要要做做些些什什么么)。Here are the reasons why_(承上启下，开始承上启下，开始解释原因解释原因).For one thing,_(请求的原因一请求的原因一)；For another,_(原因二原因二).Therefore,_(总结写信的目的总结写信的目的)。I shall be much obliged to you if you _(对对收信人的期望收信人的期望).Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.Yours sincerely Li MingSample 2：Assignment Level 1:假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。Level 2:假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Centre）的帮助。根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简介；2.求助内容；3.约定时间；4.你的联系方式（Email:;Phone:[phone]）Level 3:你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）；2.象征意义；3.价格。Thank you!Thank you!