高考英语读后续写高分大招:三大步八小步速成作文法.docx
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1、高考英语读后续写高分大招:三大步,八小步速成作文法【一三大步】三步的核心即:审题 构思 润色审题:审人称时态情节结构衔接构思:组织材料。围绕全文思想展开情节构思,但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。润色:本着语言形象生动的原则,把构思句子进行修改,使得行文流畅,逻辑合理,语法正确,可以使用无灵主语句。避免句式单一,可以灵活使用高级句型,非谓语短语,独立主格结构,从句。过渡词如Whats more, not only.but also,personally等。最后,务必整洁地写在答题卡上。【二八小步】l情绪:消极情绪l细节:进一步解释描写l转折:个人的努力或借助外界l转机:事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希
2、望,感到欣慰l失望:但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题l新法:突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)l结局:过了一段时间;事情有了最后的转折l总结:点题,呼应前文读后续写,大部分都是围绕conflict,solution来运转的。大部分文章都是这个模式:【三高考真题典例剖析】第1步 情绪:情绪描写第2步 细节:进一步解释描写情细节描写笑绪描写 笑smile brightly;laugh; beam; light(sth)up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing; wear a bright/broad smile; g
3、ive sb a smile看到直升飞机,Jane高兴地笑了起来。(1)At the sight of the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy.(2)Seeing the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy.(3)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter,Janes eyes/face lit up with delight.情绪描写哭cry; sob; weep; burst into tears; burst out crying;(ones eyes)brim
4、 with/be full of/be filled with tears细节描写哭(1)His eyes misted/dimmed with tears.他泪眼模糊。(2)Her eyes were red from crying.她的双眼哭得通红。(3)He is closed to tears.他快要哭了。(4)Tears rolled down/coursed/trickled/streamed her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。情绪描写 害怕frightened; panicked; scared; speechless; in (a) panic; in a cold
5、 sweat;be full of fear; be filled with terror;be rooted to the spot; freeze;run away; flee; ones knees feel weak; (hands) sweat细节描写 害怕我感到很害怕。(1)I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.(2) I was in (a) panic/was full of fear.(3)I stood rooted to the spot,brimming with fear/filled with fear.(4)I felt s
6、o scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.(5)I froze with terror, too scared to move.(6)I was seized by a strong sense of horror; my palms sweating.情绪描写 高兴激动v. dance;jump/leap with joy; feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy/excitement; whistle; be overcome with happiness/delight/joy/e
7、xcitement;(ones eyes) twinkle;(ones heart) beat/pound wildlyadj. happy; delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; wild with joy细节描写高兴激动当她知道考试结果时,她兴奋极了。(1)When she knew the result of the test, she felt excited/thrilled.(2) When she knew the result of the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.(3)When
8、 she knew the result of the test,her heart was pounding with wild joy.(4)When she knew the result of the test,a wild excitement took hold of her.(5)Knowing the result of the test, she felt a surge of excitement.(6)Knowing the result of the test,she was overcome with excitement.情绪描写伤心痛苦sad; bitter; s
9、orrowful; feel a surge of sadness; (sadness)surge within sb; ones heart ache; be overcome with sadness细节描写伤心痛苦她伤心不已。(1) Sam felt extremely sad.(2) A sadness came over her.(3) Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.(4) Numb with grief, she became speechless.(5)Feeling a surge of sadness,she
10、 couldnt help crying bitterly.(6) Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears.情绪描写 生气愤怒felt/get angry/furious; feel a surge of anger/rage/fury;eyes blaze;storm out of/into/off; storm/say angrily; sth makes sb blood boil; sth makes sb extremely angry; clasp ones fists/teeth; speechless细节描写 生气愤怒S
11、am感到非常生气。(1) Sam felt very angry.(2) Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.(3) Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room,slamming the doorfuriously behind him.(4) Boiling with rage,Sam shook his fist at me.(5)Filled with fury,Sam was unable to utter a single word.第3步转折:个人
12、努力或借助外界(由“负”变“正”)鼓起勇气; 他人的鼓励Pluck up/take/gather ones courage(to do.) 毫不犹豫(1)sb could hardly wait to do sth(2) without a second thought(3) without even thinking(4) without delay(5) without hesitation_典例分析_费尔法克斯先生深夜开车回家,途中又累又困,于是违章停车,想休息一下,结果被警察逮住,接下来怎么写呢?Mr. Fairfax lowered his head with a sigh, rea
13、dy for a ticket.(费尔法克斯先生叹了口气,低下头,准备接受罚款。) Unexpectedly, the police added,“But Ill figure out some place for you have a good rest though.”(出乎意料的是,警方补充说,“不过我想给你找个地方好好休息。”) Wild with joy, Fairfax accepted his offer without hesitation,following him to drive his car to somewhere warm(费尔法克斯毫不犹豫地接受了他的提议,跟着
14、他开车到温暖的地方。)这个例子属于“负”变“正”的模式。主人公由开始的“焦虑”,原以为会被警察罚款,最后变“感动”:警察帮他找到温暖的地方。第4步转机:事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰似乎(1) It was like doing sth(2) It seemed as if/that希望(1) hoping that.(2) see/feel a glimmer of hope(3) trying hard to do sth欣慰(1).breathed a sigh of relief-sighed with relief 松了口气(2) (a wave of relief floo
15、ded through/washed over sb(3) to ones relief 使人欣慰的/放心的是第5步失望:但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题(由“正”变“负”)不幸的是 (1)but bad luck for sb,.(2), but in vain(3),but without success (4),but no use不知道做什么 (1)sb did sth, wondering what to do next.(2)sb did sth,not knowing what to do next.(3)sb did sth,unsure of what to do next.(
16、4)sb was at a loss what to do.(5)sb was in a dilemma about whether to do or not._典例分析_感谢好心人:故事中,主人公的戒指被清洁工捡到后,物归原主,想要感谢这位好心人。你怎么继续描写。I expressed my gratitude and promised him a well-prepared gift for thanks.(我表达了感激之情,并答应给他一份精心准备的礼物,以表示感谢。) However, he immediately refused and hung up the phone.(然而,他立
17、刻拒绝了,挂断了电话。) 这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。想要感谢清洁工,属于“正向”,但是对方拒绝了,变成了“负向”。这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。想要感谢清洁工,属于“正向”,但是对方拒绝了,变成了“负向”。第6步想法:突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法) 某人想到 /明白/有了主意(1)It suddenly occurred to sb that+从句(2)It hit sb that+从句(3)It struck sb that+从句(4)It dawned on sb that+从句(5)(idea,thought.)occurred/came to sb(6).came/
18、flashed into ones mind-.crowded in ones mind(7)ones mind began to race第7步 结局:过段时间,事情有了最后的转折过了一段时间(1)not long after that,.=shortly afterwards,.before long,.=Itdidnt take long before+从句=It took some time before+从句(2) for an instant/moment事情有了转折(1)To ones surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned o
19、ut that+从句(2) But on second thoughts,.(3)But what happened next was pure magic.第8步总结:点题,呼应前文主旨升华直到才意识到 (1)倒装句Not until+时间状语+did sb realize/notice that+从句(2)强调句It was only+时间状语+that sb realized that+从句还记得某人的话;还在某人的脑海中 (1) Ones words(echoed/rang out) in ones ears.(2) Ones words/voice/song lingered/whi
20、spered in ones mind/ head.(3) Ones head was still full of.经历与教训 (1)What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lesson sb taughtme/sb learned from sb!(2)What a/an enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable experience sb had!(3) Down deep in ones heat.在某人的内心深处第二部分“八步法”实战应用:高
21、考真题讲解_典例分析1_故事梗概:父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活,见父亲和叔叔骑马,儿子也很想骑,于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路(Dont be late for supper, Uncle Paul cried, and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!)。一路上,风景优美,让人陶醉。阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He de
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