高三英语写作申请信.pptx

书信复习之书信复习之 申请信申请信 2015年高考作文复习：年高考作文复习：How to write a better Application Letter 近五年全国卷作文近五年全国卷作文年份年份体裁体裁题材题材形式形式2015书信书信约美国朋友写稿约美国朋友写稿提纲提纲2014书信书信询问英语学习课询问英语学习课程程图表图表2013书信书信带去中国画，请带去中国画，请求接机求接机提纲提纲2012电子邮件电子邮件申请参加夏令营申请参加夏令营提纲提纲2011书信书信预约学校辅导中预约学校辅导中心帮助心帮助提纲提纲书书信信私人信件等私人信件等感谢信感谢信申请信申请信邀请信邀请信道歉信道歉信祝贺信祝贺信推荐信推荐信_Useful phrases 1向某人申请某物向某人申请某物2 n.申请申请3 职位职位/4 对对合格合格5 n.资格资格6 有责任心做有责任心做7 向某人推荐某人向某人推荐某人8 与某人面试与某人面试9 与某人联系与某人联系10 训练有素的训练有素的11学生会学生会12考虑做某事考虑做某事1 apply to sb for sth.2 application 3 position/the right person for the position 4 be qualified for/be suitable for/be fit for5 qualification6 have/take/shoulder great responsibility to do sth 7 recommend sb to sb/that sb(should)do sth 8 have an interview with sb/sb on sth 9 contact sb/call sb 10 well-trained 11 the Students Union 12 consider doing sth./take sth into consideration13 有利条件有利条件14 工作经历工作经历15 良好的身体条件良好的身体条件16 回复某人回复某人17 擅长于擅长于18 得第一名得第一名19对生活有积极的对生活有积极的态度态度20 对某物有热情对某物有热情21 顶尖的学生顶尖的学生22 尽力做某事尽力做某事 23 有机会做某事有机会做某事 24 对对有兴趣有兴趣25 自荐某人为志愿自荐某人为志愿者者13 favorable condition/advantage14 work experience15 good health condition/be in good health 16 reply to sb/give sb a reply17 do well in/be good at18 get the first prize/rank the first 19 have/hold a positive/active attitude towards life20 be enthusiastic/passionate about sth 21 a top student 22 try ones best/do ones utmost 23 have the opportunity/chance to do 24 show great interest in/be interested in 25 promote oneself as a volunteer.Form of an Application Letter Dear Sir/Madam,Im Lihua from class one,senior two.I am writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxin Hope School with their English.Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation.Meanwhile,I can learn how to get along well with the students and benefit the whole school.Im kind,easy-going and always ready to help others.I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence.English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests.So I think that I am qualified for the position.I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need.Besides,Ill try to get them more interested in English by telling stories,singing songs and so on.Ill appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.Yours Sincerely,Li hua观摩领悟观摩领悟read and tell:self-introduction/writing purpose/reasons for applyingyour ability/qualification/strong points/confidenceyour promise/ways of contact/appreciationUseful Sentence structures To show your writing purpose:我写信来申请我写信来申请I am writing to apply forI am writing in response to(your advertisement for)I feel honored to write to you and promote myself asBeginningBody part:To show your interest in the job:Im quite interested in it and I think I am fit for it.我觉得我是你招聘的这个工作的合适人选。我觉得我是你招聘的这个工作的合适人选。I think I am the right person for the job you advertised.To show your strengths:我不仅理科好，而且文科也好。我不仅理科好，而且文科也好。Not only do I do well in science,but also I am good at arts as well.Useful Sentence structures Ending:To show your promise:如果我有机会在贵公司工作，我将竭尽全力做一名优秀员工。如果我有机会在贵公司工作，我将竭尽全力做一名优秀员工。If I have a chance to work in your company，I will try my best to be a good employee.To show your appreciation:如果您能给我面试的机会，我将不胜感激。如果您能给我面试的机会，我将不胜感激。If you should grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful.如果您能尽早回复我，我将不胜感激。如果您能尽早回复我，我将不胜感激。I would appreciate it if you can give me an early reply.apply for the assistant to MaggiePromise what You will do Self-introductionYour strengths Reasons for your applyingWriting purposeYour appreciation假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报社招聘兼假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报社招聘兼职记者，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。内容要点职记者，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。内容要点如下：如下：1）表示感兴趣；）表示感兴趣；2）说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经）说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历；历；3）希望得到回复。）希望得到回复。注意：注意：1）100词左右词左右 2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Practice writing Oral practice 1Draft 2Polish&Refine3 OutputThe Rule of writingDear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School.Im quite interested in the news that you want some part-time reporters.I think I am the right person for the job.As a student,Ive read different books.Furthermore,I am good at English and do well in speaking.Besides,Im easy to get along with and like working together with others.Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting.So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.I am looking forward to your reply soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(94 words)Possible writing How to make it better?words better words better phrases?add good adj/adv?sentences better sentence structures?Dear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School.Im quite interested in the news that you want some part-time reporters.I think I am the right person for the job.As a student,Ive read different books.Furthermore,I am good at English and do well in speaking.Besides,Im easy to get along with and like working together with others.Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting.So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.I am looking forward to your reply soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(94words)Possible writing version 1 _Refine by using good phrasesDear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School.I show great interest in the news that you want some part-time reporters.I think I am qualified for the job.As a student,Ive read varieties of books.Furthermore,I have a good command of English and do well in speaking.Besides,Im easy to get along with and have a strong sense of coorperation.Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting.So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.I am looking forward to your reply soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(98 words)version2Refine by adding good adj./adv.Dear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School.I show great interest in the news that you want some part-time reporters.I think I am _ qualified for the job.As a student,Ive read varieties of books and know a lot.Furthermore,I have a good command of English and do _ well in speaking.Besides,Im easy to get along with and have a strong sense of coorperation.Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting.So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.I am looking forward to your _ reply soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua version3surely/definitelyparticularly/especiallyfavorable/earliest(101 words)Refine by enriching sentence structures 五种基本句型五种基本句型复合句：定语从句；状语从句；同位语从句复合句：定语从句；状语从句；同位语从句等等倒装句倒装句非谓语非谓语强调句强调句 it 形式主语或形式宾语句型形式主语或形式宾语句型 with 结构结构.；so.that.;such.that.Refine by enriching sentence structures 1）As a student,Ive read varieties of books.（用非谓语扩用非谓语扩展信息展信息)作为一个学生作为一个学生,我看过各种书籍，这使得我很容易去处理各种意我看过各种书籍，这使得我很容易去处理各种意外情况。外情况。As a student,Ive read varieties of books,making it easy for me to cope with different unexpected situations.2）Im easy to get along with and have a strong sense of coorperation.(变为倒装句）变为倒装句）Not only am I easy to get along with but also I have a strong sense of coorperation.3）Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting.（用复合句扩展信息用复合句扩展信息)更重要的是，我曾经参加过关于播报技巧的课程，在那课程里更重要的是，我曾经参加过关于播报技巧的课程，在那课程里我接受到了专业的训练。我接受到了专业的训练。Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting where I have received some professional training.Final version Dear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School.I show great interest in the news that you want some part-time reporters.I think I am surely qualified for the job.As a student,Ive read varieties of books,making it easy for me to cope with different unexpected situations.Furthermore,I have a good command of English and do particularly well in speaking.Besides,not only am I out-going but also I have a strong sense of coorperation.Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting,where Ive received some professional training.So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.I am looking forward to your favorable reply soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(119 words)version4Look back uForm of an Application Letter Form of an Application Letter 申请信模式申请信模式uUseful phrases and sentence structuresUseful phrases and sentence structuresuHow to make your writing better:How to make your writing better:good good words/good phrases/good sentence words/good phrases/good sentence structuresstructures