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1、托福写作教程第第1页页托福写作介绍F综合写作F形式:读+听+写F内容:说明观点相互联络性F分数权重:1/2F时间要求:20分钟F字数要求:150-225词F独立写作F形式:议论文F内容:对议题发表看法F分数权重:1/2F时间要求:30分钟F字数要求:最少300词第第2页页托福写作分数换算F30F28F25F22F20F17F14F10F9F8F7F6F5F4第第3页页应试写作三个层次F写得出F写得对F写得炫第第4页页应试写作难点F写作本身难度大,是驾驭一门语言最高境界,属于信息输出,是逻辑、语法、词汇、文化等综合统一第第5页页应试写作难点F大脑一片空白 基本无话可说F绿叶对根情意 FDo yo
2、u agree or disagree that progress is always good?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.第第6页页应试写作难点F表示漏洞百出 可读性相当差FIn China,because its tradition,the old is most raised by their children.FIn China,because of its tradition,the old are mostly supported by their children.第第7页页应试写作难点F中式
3、英语泛滥 考官哭笑不得FPollution makes us cannot breathe fresh air.FPollution makes us unable to breathe fresh air.第第8页页应试写作难点F口语痕迹显著 好似娓娓道来FI say its a good thing.FNow Ill tell you a story about myself.第第9页页应试写作难点F表示捉襟见肘 词句鲜有亮点第第10页页F越来越多刚才毕业大学生发觉找到好工作是越来越难。FMore and more college graduates who have just gradu
4、ated from university find that finding a good job is more and more difficult.第第11页页F越来越多刚才毕业大学生发觉找到好工作是越来越难FA growing number of fresh graduates find that obtaining a decent job is increasingly difficult.第第12页页F越来越多刚才毕业大学生发觉找到好工作是越来越难。FA growing number of fresh graduates find that being employed by a
5、 decent employer is increasingly difficult.第第13页页F越来越多刚才毕业大学生发觉找到好工作是越来越难。FThe difficulty of being employed by a decent employer is on the rise,as the number of fresh graduates grows.第第14页页托福独立写作评分标准F5分:文章切题,阐说充分,文章有说服力;段落组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有很强逻辑性;段落内句与句连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活,成熟;用词确切,得体.文章中有个别语法拼写错误,但不影响内容表示.F4
6、分:文章切题,阐说基本充分,在一些细节上有缺点.段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,逻辑性强;句间连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活;用词基本得体.文章中有少许用词不妥和语法拼写错误.F3分:文章切题,阐说尚可,展开不够.段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有逻辑性;句间连接基本顺畅;有部分句法错误;用词普通,有时不得体.词性区分和拼写等有若干错误.F2分:文章切题,段落组织基本合理,有逻辑性,但只存在于语义层次上,语言表示上未能表示;句子框架结构基本成立,但有许多语法错误,句间联络不顺畅,往往是不善于使用逻辑连词,显得幼稚,生硬.词汇方面拼写错误多,常有用词不得表示象.F1分:文章切题.阐说没
7、有展开,只限于三言两语地回答下列问题;没有段落组织,很乱,长度很短,只有一段;句子排列有一定逻辑关系,能看出各句基本框架,但结构或语法错误较多;用词不得题,拼写错误多.F0分:文章各方面都有严重错误,句子不像句子.总体印象是根本没有写作能力,英语水平太低,够不上1分标准,只能打最低分.第第15页页托福独立写作要求F谋篇:观点突出 结构合理F谋段:论证充分 言之有物F谋句:正确 多变 关联F谋词:准确 多变 第第16页页托福独立写作题目分类F对比选择型F支持反对型F自选叙述型F问题分析型 第第17页页托福独立写作步骤F审题 内容?形式?F构思 头脑风暴 OutlineF行文 F检验 The fi
8、rst draft of anything is SHIT.-By Hemmingway 第第18页页对比选择型FSome people think that the automobile has improved modern life.Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems.What is your opinion?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.第第19页页OutlineFForF方便高效 convenient&efficie
9、nt F丰富生活 enrich lifestyle F推进相关产业 boost related industries FAgainstF耗尽石油资源 deplete fuel resources worldwideF空气污染 air pollutionF交通阻塞和事故 traffic jam and accidents第第20页页Structure 结构FIntroduction 总起段FBody 主体段 FConclusion 总结段第第21页页Introduction 总起段FBackground 背景 FControversy (2 different/opposite ideas)争议
10、FStatement 观点FTransition 过渡第第22页页Background 背景FBeing a controversial issue,the great popularity of automobile has aroused a great deal of attention in society during the past decades.FNowadays,the issue on the great popularity of automobile is highly debatable,and ideas vary from person to person.第第
11、23页页Controversy 争议FSome people think that it is good,other people think that it is bad.FSome people think that the automobile has improved modern life.Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems.第第24页页Controversy 争议FSome would claim daily life has been upgraded due to automobile,whi
12、le some others may suggest that severe problems are the results(which are)brought by automobile.FSome would claim daily life has been upgraded due to automobile,while the idea that severe problems are the results brought by automobile is still held by some others.第第25页页Controversy 争议FThink claim/sug
13、gest/believe/advocate/maintain/argue/supposeFGood beneficial/profitable/helpful/sound/decentFBad harmful/detrimental/hazardous FAdvantage merit/virtue/benefit/profit/proFDisadvantage demerit/drawback/flaw/shortcoming/con/cost第第26页页Statement 观点F简练明了 concrete&conciseFAs for me,I side with the former/l
14、atter.FAs far as I am concerned,I believe automobile is indispensable in everyday life.FIn my view,it is much better to have everyday life without automobile.第第27页页Transition 过渡FIn the following paragraphs,I would present some reasons.FA few explanations/examples would be presented as follows.FThus
15、essential and persuasive evidences would be provided in the subsequent paragraphs to verify my perspective.第第28页页Conclusion 总结段FStatement 观点 rewrite,not copyFAll in all/To conclude/In conclusion/In general/To sum upFWhen all the above-mentioned factors are taken into consideration,a conclusion could
16、 be drawn that 第第29页页Conclusion 总结段FFrom my point of view,it is advisable to take advantage of automobile while eliminate its drawbacks.FFrom where I stand,automobile can not be an essential factor in pursuing a perfect life.第第30页页Body 主体段FTo begin with/Firstly/First and foremostFSecondly/In additio
17、n/MoreoverFIn the third place/Furthermore/Last but not least第第31页页OutlineFForF方便高效 convenient&efficient F丰富生活 enrich lifestyle F推进相关产业 boost related industries FAgainstF耗尽石油资源 deplete fuel resources worldwideF空气污染 air pollutionF交通阻塞和事故 traffic jam and accidents第第32页页ForFIntroductionFTo begin with,au
18、tomobile makes some work convenient and efficient FIn addition,automobile enriches lifestyle FFurthermore,automobile boosts related industries F让步段FConclusion第第33页页ForFIntroductionFTo begin with,it is convenient and efficient to travel by automobile FIn addition,lifestyle can be enriched via automob
19、ile FFurthermore,automobile boosts related industries F让步段FConclusion第第34页页方便高效 convenient&efficientFTo begin with,it is convenient and efficient to travel by automobile.FFor example,from downtown to suburb,by car,it costs a few hours.FOtherwise,by bicycle or on foot,nearly one day is needed.FAnywhe
20、re around the city could be reached within one day.FIt is the automobile that brings about urbanization.第第35页页丰富生活 enrich lifestyleFIn addition,lifestyle can be enriched via automobile.FWith automobile,lifestyle could be more colorful and entertaining and life radius may be enlarged.FTraveling widen
21、s horizon and visualizes what is learnt in books.FBesides,shopping enables one to relieve the pressure of work and study.FOnly by his own car can one go anywhere at any time.第第36页页推进相关产业 boost related industriesFFurthermore,automobile boosts related industries.FNow it is possible to develop tourism
22、and logistics.FFast speed saves time,and long distance is no longer a barrier to the tourist attractions far away.FBesides,fresh fruit and vegetable could be delivered across the nation within a few days,and the express industry may be booming.第第37页页让步段FAlthough automobile may sometimes seem to have
23、 some demerits,such as leading to depletion of fuel resources worldwide,air pollution and traffic jam and accidents,its overall profits far outweigh its drawbacks.第第38页页让步段FDespite the fact that there are still some flaws existing,such as leading to depletion of fuel resources worldwide,air pollutio
24、n and traffic jam and accidents,automobile is profitable on the whole.第第39页页一边倒 AgainstFIntroductionFTo begin with,automobile depletes fuel resources worldwide FIn addition,automobile leads to air pollution FFurthermore,automobile leads to traffic jam and accidents F让步段FConclusion第第40页页一边倒 AgainstFI
25、ntroductionFTo begin with,fuel resources worldwide are depleted due to automobile FIn addition,air pollution results from automobile FFurthermore,traffic jam and accidents are problems brought by automobile F让步段FConclusion第第41页页耗尽石油资源 deplete fuel resources worldwideFTo begin with,fuel resources wor
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