中考英语作文专题复习-旅游日记省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

English Writing-travel diary 第1页谈论过去事：写旅游日志第2页普通过去时普通过去时：1.过去状态：主语+was/were+2.过去动作：主语+V.ed第3页How to write a travel diary?第4页审：审题审：审题（人称、主要内容、时态）（人称、主要内容、时态）列：列出各关键点列：列出各关键点,写出关键词写出关键词/词组词组连：词连：词/词组词组-句句-段段-篇篇（开头、结尾、连接词）（开头、结尾、连接词）查：检验人称，时态，拼写，短语和关键查：检验人称，时态，拼写，短语和关键点点誊：誊写作文，书面整齐誊：誊写作文，书面整齐五五 步步 法法审、列、连、查、誊审、列、连、查、誊第5页Opening sentences开头开头1 Last Sunday,I went to with 2.On May1st,we traveled to 3.On Childrens Day,we had a chance to go to第6页Summary 结尾结尾1.To make a summary进行总结2.Eg.What a wonderful place!3.I think we had a great time there.4.Although we were a little tired,we were very happy.5.2.To show wishes表示愿望6.Eg.I wish I can go there again if I have a chance.7.For your next vacation,why not consider visiting 第7页Conjunctions润滑剂（连接词、过渡词）润滑剂（连接词、过渡词）表次序 表递进 表并列、选择表转折 表原因 first/then/next/finallyalso/besides/even/whats more and/orbut/however/althoughbecause第8页第二学月作文：请你以请你以“A Visit to the zoo”为题，依据提醒用英语写一篇短为题，依据提醒用英语写一篇短文。文。提醒内容：提醒内容：1那天天气那天天气晴朗晴朗，阳光，阳光灿烂灿烂。2动物园动物园离离我们学校我们学校有点远有点远，我们，我们乘乘公共汽公共汽车去车去那儿。那儿。3动物园动物园人多人多，很，很挤挤。4我们参观了游客中心，我们参观了游客中心，看看了海豚了海豚演出演出，海豚聪明可爱，我海豚聪明可爱，我非常喜欢非常喜欢他们。他们。5我们去礼品店买了很多礼品，我们去礼品店买了很多礼品，到到下午五点下午五点才才返校。返校。第9页 A visit to the zoo Last Sunday I went to the zoo with my classmates.The weather was fine and it was sunny all day.The zoo is far from my school,so we took a bus there.(We went there by bus.)There were many people in the zoo.It was very crowded.At frist,we visited the Visitors Center.Then we watched a dolphin show,and it was very interesting.Dolphins are very cute and I like them very much.After that,we went to the Gift Shop and bought lots of gifts.Finally,we were tired but happy.We didnt go back to school until five oclock.It was an exciting trip.I hope to go there again.第10页 1、看语法是否正确，包含单词拼写，大小写，、看语法是否正确，包含单词拼写，大小写，标点，动词时态、语态，名词单复数，形容词、标点，动词时态、语态，名词单复数，形容词、副词比较等级，主谓一致，冠词使用方法，词语副词比较等级，主谓一致，冠词使用方法，词语搭配等。搭配等。2 2、一定要数一数文章词数，标点符号不算。、一定要数一数文章词数，标点符号不算。不过，这些问题在下笔之前应先有思索，先有答不过，这些问题在下笔之前应先有思索，先有答案，省得在卷面上七涂八改，要知道案，省得在卷面上七涂八改，要知道“包装包装”也也很主要。很主要。第11页Sample依据提醒写一篇日志,统计五月一日(星期五)你和朋友一起去参观福建历史博物馆事。提醒内容：1.天气:晴朗 2.距离:离家约两公里。（2 kilometers）3.交通工具:骑自行车去。4.时间:八点出发,十点回家。5.内容:见到了许多照片,实物等.学到了很多东西。6.游人:见到许多父母和孩子,老师和学生,士兵等。要求:词数80个左右,要符合日志格式,可适当发挥。sunny/fineIt is about two kilometres away fromIt is about two kilometres fromtoset offgot back home/return homelearned a lotsoldiers第12页依据提醒写一篇日志,统计五月一日(星期五)你和朋友一起去参观福建历史博物馆事。提醒内容：1.天气:晴朗 2.距离:离家约两公里。（2 kilometers）3.交通工具:骑自行车去。4.时间:八点出发,十点回家。5.内容:见到了许多照片,实物等.学到了很多东西。6.游人:见到许多父母和孩子,老师和学生,士兵等。要求:词数80个左右,要符合日志格式,可适当发挥。sunny/fineIt is about two kilometres away fromIt is about two kilometres fromtoset offgot back home/return homelearned a lotsoldiersOral practice口头表示 第13页Friday May 1 sunny It was fine today.My friends and I went to visit Fujian History Museum.It is about two kilometres away from my home.So we decided to go there by bike.We set off at eight.At first,in the museum We saw many photos and many other things.We learned a lot.There we saw a lot of children with their parents,students with their teachers,and soldiers.At ten,we left the museum for home.We had a good time today.Sample第14页书面表示 请你以“A Visit to Guilin”为题，用英语写一篇短文。提醒语必须用上，只抄提醒语不给分提醒内容：1去年暑假，我和我父亲妈妈去了桂林。2那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江.3漓江水非常清澈（clean），能够看见小鱼在水里游来游去。4我们还去爬了山，累不过很高兴。5我们还去城里购物，城市很漂亮，人们很友好。要求：关键点齐全，表示正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写清楚、规范。可紧紧围绕主题适当发挥，80词左右。Writing practice实战演练审，列，连，查，誊审，列，连，查，誊took a boat to visit Lijiangvisited Lijiang by boatclimbed the mountain 第15页书面表示书面表示 请你以请你以“A Visit to Guilin”为题，用英语写一篇短文。为题，用英语写一篇短文。提醒语必须用上，只抄提醒语不给分提醒语必须用上，只抄提醒语不给分提醒内容：提醒内容：1去年暑假，我和我父亲妈妈去了桂林。去年暑假，我和我父亲妈妈去了桂林。2那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江3漓江水非常清澈（漓江水非常清澈（clean），），能够看见小鱼在水里游来游去。能够看见小鱼在水里游来游去。4我们还去爬了山，累不过很高兴。我们还去爬了山，累不过很高兴。5我们还去城里购物，城市很漂亮，人们很友好。我们还去城里购物，城市很漂亮，人们很友好。要求：关键点齐全，表示正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写清楚、要求：关键点齐全，表示正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写清楚、规范。可紧紧围绕主题适当发挥，规范。可紧紧围绕主题适当发挥，80词左右。词左右。Writing practice实战演练审，列，连，查，誊审，列，连，查，誊第16页Share&enjoy习作分享习作分享慧眼识别：慧眼识别：闪光点？闪光点？错误？错误？My summer holiday plans第17页Work harder now!May you succeed in June!Wish you all a good summer holiday!第18页第19页