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成考英语复习第六章书面表示陈宇龙7月10日第1页v依据成考英语复习书，我们可得知v英语作文可分为v1.信件v2.通知or启事第2页信件可分为以下七类v1.感激信v2.邀请信v3.求援信v4.安排信v5.道歉信v6.投诉信v7.祝贺信第3页信件格式v称呼，日期v (空一行)v正文v (空一行)v 落款v 署名第4页感激信v定义:感激信是表示感激信件，表示感激原因通常是取得帮助、收到礼品、受到款待等。v感激信内容主要包含:表示谢意、简述感受、问候对方、结束信件。v表示感激最好在信一开始，第一句话就点明对什么表示感激，是收到礼品、还是得到某种帮助等。v简述感受是要描述一些细节。比如对收到礼品感受，对该礼品使用；得到帮助带来结果等。第5页感激信v问候对方是指对对方表示某种关心，对对方近况表示关注。v信结尾很主要。考生在完成信写作之后一定不要忘了在写信者姓名前加上v1.sincerely1.sincerelyv2.yours sincerely2.yours sincerelyv3.warm regards3.warm regardsv等词第6页例一v 06/24/06/24/vDear Dr.Emma Hour,Dear Dr.Emma Hour,v I think you deeply for your most generous financial support for I think you deeply for your most generous financial support for my education in unversity.I am very grateful for it.Without your my education in unversity.I am very grateful for it.Without your help,I may never have been able to complete my studies.Your help,I may never have been able to complete my studies.Your generosity and help have been an inspiration to me.generosity and help have been an inspiration to me.v The graduation ceremony will be held next month.I will send you The graduation ceremony will be held next month.I will send you an invitation card when the date is settled.Please come and I hope an invitation card when the date is settled.Please come and I hope to share the important moment with you.I am sure that you must be to share the important moment with you.I am sure that you must be very happy for me.very happy for me.v My mom told me that you are really busy these days.Be sure to My mom told me that you are really busy these days.Be sure to have enough rest.Hope I can see you soon.have enough rest.Hope I can see you soon.v Again,thank you for your encouragement and financial support.Again,thank you for your encouragement and financial support.v Sincerely yours Sincerely yoursv Lihua Lihua第7页原文大意v 万分感激您在我上大学期间所给予经济支援。我非万分感激您在我上大学期间所给予经济支援。我非常感激。没有您帮助，恐怕我永远也不能完成学业。常感激。没有您帮助，恐怕我永远也不能完成学业。您慷慨帮助一直是我学习动力。您慷慨帮助一直是我学习动力。v 下个月将举行毕业仪式，一确定日期我将给您发邀下个月将举行毕业仪式，一确定日期我将给您发邀请函。请您一定来与我共度这主要时刻。您一定会为请函。请您一定来与我共度这主要时刻。您一定会为我高兴。我高兴。v 我母亲说您最近非常忙。请一定要确保休息。期望我母亲说您最近非常忙。请一定要确保休息。期望尽快见到您。尽快见到您。v 再一次对您勉励和经济上支援表示感激。再一次对您勉励和经济上支援表示感激。第8页例二v 07/14/07/14/vDear Aunt Pam,Dear Aunt Pam,v Thank you so much for your generous birthday gift.I Thank you so much for your generous birthday gift.I will deposit the check in my saving accout.It is a will deposit the check in my saving accout.It is a great help because I am planning to buy a new bike.SO great help because I am planning to buy a new bike.SO when I save enough III buy one.Thank you,Aunt.when I save enough III buy one.Thank you,Aunt.v I have good news to tell you.Ive been selected as I have good news to tell you.Ive been selected as an exchange student in a high school df New York,and I an exchange student in a high school df New York,and I am leaving for America within two months and will study am leaving for America within two months and will study there for one year.there for one year.v I hope your stomach is feeling better.III pay you I hope your stomach is feeling better.III pay you a visit as soon as I can.a visit as soon as I can.v I am looking forward to seeing you.I am looking forward to seeing you.v Yours niece Yours niecev Li yuan Li yuan第9页原文大意v 非常感激您送给我生日礼品。我会把它存入我存折。非常感激您送给我生日礼品。我会把它存入我存折。您帮了我大忙，因为我正准备买一辆自行车，等钱存够您帮了我大忙，因为我正准备买一辆自行车，等钱存够了，我一定买一辆。谢谢您，姑妈。了，我一定买一辆。谢谢您，姑妈。v 告诉您一个好消息，我被选为纽约一所高中交换学生，告诉您一个好消息，我被选为纽约一所高中交换学生，将在两个月内去美国，在那里学习一年。将在两个月内去美国，在那里学习一年。v 您胃病好些了吗您胃病好些了吗?我会尽快去探望您。我会尽快去探望您。v 盼着早日见到您。盼着早日见到您。第10页邀请信v邀请原因邀请原因主要包含聚会、就餐、会议、庆典等。v邀请信内容大致包含提出邀请、通知地点、要求回复等。v提出邀请时要说明活动性质特点、被邀请者范围等。v同时要说明详细时间、地点，依据不一样情况，有时还要说明抵达该地交通方式。v在信结尾应要求被邀请者回复是否参加该活动。第11页例一v 11/30/11/30/vDear Beckham,Dear Beckham,v First of all,please allow me to express my heartfelt First of all,please allow me to express my heartfelt invitation to you.Since the Spring Festival is coming invitation to you.Since the Spring Festival is coming shortly,I sincerely invite you to come to China and spend the shortly,I sincerely invite you to come to China and spend the holiday with me.holiday with me.v Spring Festival is of much importance to Chinese people.It Spring Festival is of much importance to Chinese people.It has a long history and Chinese have attached much importance has a long history and Chinese have attached much importance to the holiday.To be exact,the Spring Festival has been the to the holiday.To be exact,the Spring Festival has been the most significant holiday.The Spring Festival has been the most significant holiday.The Spring Festival has been the most significant holiday.The spring Festival is to Chinese most significant holiday.The spring Festival is to Chinese what Christmas is to the Westerners.what Christmas is to the Westerners.v If you come,I am going to accompany you to fairgrouds,If you come,I am going to accompany you to fairgrouds,where you can close look at some df the Chinese traditions.where you can close look at some df the Chinese traditions.v I am looking forward to your reply.I am looking forward to your reply.v Sincerely yours Sincerely yoursv Li Yua Li Yuan n第12页原文大意v 首先允许我向您表示真挚邀请。春节就要到了，我真诚地欢迎您到中国来与我共度这一节日。v 春节对中国人来说非常主要。它有着悠久历史，中国人赋予这个节日很主要内容。确切地说，春节是最有意义节日。春节对中国人就如同圣诞节对西方人一样。v 您来话，我会陪您逛庙会。在那里您会近距离地感受中国传统。v 期待着您回复。第13页例二vInvitation Letter of ShangHai International Forum for ChildrenInvitation Letter of ShangHai International Forum for Childrenv September 19-21,September 19-21,vDear Sir/MadamDear Sir/MadamvOn behalf of the Secretar of forum for children,I would like to extend a On behalf of the Secretar of forum for children,I would like to extend a special invitation to you and your organization to participate in the upcoming special invitation to you and your organization to participate in the upcoming ShangHai International Forum for Children held in ShangHai,China,19-21 ShangHai International Forum for Children held in ShangHai,China,19-21 September,the theme of which is Child Rights Protection and Social September,the theme of which is Child Rights Protection and Social Responsibilities.Responsibilities.vThe years forum will discuss the issues of legal protection of children in The years forum will discuss the issues of legal protection of children in modern society and responsibilities our society shall bear.modern society and responsibilities our society shall bear.vWe sincerely hope you will join us in the forum to share your perspectives and We sincerely hope you will join us in the forum to share your perspectives and experiences.Lets work together to protect childrens rights and interests experiences.Lets work together to protect childrens rights and interests and create a just and fair legal environment.We eagerly look forward to your and create a just and fair legal environment.We eagerly look forward to your kind reply.kind reply.vDetail information is attached afterwards.Detail information is attached afterwards.vBest regards.Best regards.vBest regards.Best regards.vSecretariatSecretariatvLi yuanLi yuanvShangHai International Forum for ChildrenShangHai International Forum for Children第14页原文大意上海儿童国际论坛邀请信v 我谨代表儿童论坛秘书处向您和您团体发出尤其邀请，请您参加即将在上海举行上海儿童国际论坛。会议日期定于9月19日至21日。主题是:儿童权益保护和社会责任。v 今年论坛讨论议题是当代社会儿童法律保护和社会责任。v 我们真切希望您能来参加这次会议，分享您观点与经验。让我们为了保护儿童权益和志趣、为了给儿童创造一个公正正当环境而共同努力吧。我们热切期望您回复。v 会议细节随附件附上。第15页求援信v定义定义:求援信是寻求他人帮助信件求援信是寻求他人帮助信件v它通常指请他人写推荐信，请他人做些修理性工作，或者要求帮它通常指请他人写推荐信，请他人做些修理性工作，或者要求帮助做某种安排等。助做某种安排等。v内容包含内容包含:求援原因、帮助方式、写信者联络方式等。求援原因、帮助方式、写信者联络方式等。v在求援原因中要简单说明事件背景，使帮助者明白所提供帮助性在求援原因中要简单说明事件背景，使帮助者明白所提供帮助性质和特点。质和特点。v帮助方式是指写信者对所需帮助要求。帮助方式是指写信者对所需帮助要求。v最终不要忘记将自己联络方式附上。最终不要忘记将自己联络方式附上。第16页例一v 09/05/09/05/vDear Mr.Doe,Dear Mr.Doe,v I am writing to ask whether it would be possible for I am writing to ask whether it would be possible for you to provide a reference for me?you to provide a reference for me?v If you were able to attest to my qualifications for If you were able to attest to my qualifications for employment,and the skills I attained during my tenure at employment,and the skills I attained during my tenure at ABC Company,I would sincerely appreciate it.ABC Company,I would sincerely appreciate it.v I am in the prospects of seeking employment and a I am in the prospects of seeking employment and a positive regarding my experience to assist you in giving positive regarding my experience to assist you in giving me a reference.me a reference.v I can be reached at jsmith or(111)111-111.I can be reached at jsmith or(111)111-111.v Thank you for your consideration.Thank you for your consideration.v Sincerely Sincerelyv Li Yuan Li Yuan第17页原文大意v此信是为了咨询您是否能为我写一封推荐信。此信是为了咨询您是否能为我写一封推荐信。v假如您能证实我在此工作所表现出能力，以及假如您能证实我在此工作所表现出能力，以及我在我在ABCABC企业工作时所具备技术，我将不胜感激。企业工作时所具备技术，我将不胜感激。v我正在找工作，您对我能力证实将会对我到达我正在找工作，您对我能力证实将会对我到达事业目标有很大促进作用。事业目标有很大促进作用。v假如您需要相关我经历信息来帮助您为我写推假如您需要相关我经历信息来帮助您为我写推荐信，请告诉我。荐信，请告诉我。v电邮电邮:: v电话电话:[phone].:(111)111-111.第18页例二vJune23,June23,vDear SirsDear SirsvWe are planning a full day party to celebrate the completion of our We are planning a full day party to celebrate the completion of our Business Language Training Course on June 30,.The party will start Business Language Training Course on June 30,.The party will start at 10:00.President of our instiute will deliver by a cake and at 10:00.President of our instiute will deliver by a cake and champion celebration at 17:00.There will be 100 to 150 attendees champion celebration at 17:00.There will be 100 to 150 attendees for the event and half of them will stay overnight at the hotel.for the event and half of them will stay overnight at the hotel.vAs suggested by one of our professors,we would like to make your As suggested by one of our professors,we would like to make your hotel as our partys venue.hotel as our partys venue.vPlease let us know the term of payment.Should you have further Please let us know the term of payment.Should you have further questions,please feel to contact me at Tel:[phone] questions,please feel to contact me at Tel:[phone] or Fax:[phone].or Fax:[phone].vThank you for your kind assistance and looking forward to your Thank you for your kind assistance and looking forward to your earliest reply.The reservation in detail is attached along.earliest reply.The reservation in detail is attached along.vSincerely yours,Sincerely yours,vLi Yuan Li Yuan 第19页原文大意v我们计划于6月30日举行庆贺聚会。庆贺商业语言训练班结业。聚会10点开始，院长讲话，午餐之后有歌舞演出，下午5点是蛋糕香槟酒庆贺。到时将有100-150人参加聚会，其中二分之一人将留宿酒店。v我们一位教授提议将贵酒店作为聚会地点。v请通知贵店付费方式。v有问题请与我联络，v电话:[phone]v电传:(8610)68882250v谢谢您帮助，希望尽快回复。v聚会所需物品细节在附件中。第20页安排信v定义定义:安排信是指对某一活动安排。安排信是指对某一活动安排。v比如比如:旅游、会议、走访等。旅游、会议、走访等。v这种信件内容包含这种信件内容包含:制订计划、线路安排、制订计划、线路安排、时间范围等。时间范围等。v制订计划要说明是什么活动，必要时要简制订计划要说明是什么活动，必要时要简单说明背景。单说明背景。v然后说明地点、时间详细范围。然后说明地点、时间详细范围。v最终要有些问询对方是否对此计划满意客最终要有些问询对方是否对此计划满意客套话。套话。第21页例一v 07/23/07/23/vDear Aunt and Uncle,Dear Aunt and Uncle,vI write this letter and just want to comfirm the I write this letter and just want to comfirm the arrangement for my trip to Canada.I am really looking arrangement for my trip to Canada.I am really looking forward to it.forward to it.vI should be leaving Beijing Airport at 10 oclock in I should be leaving Beijing Airport at 10 oclock in the morning.Could you meet me at the airport?the morning.Could you meet me at the airport?vId like to stay with you for about three days.Ill be Id like to stay with you for about three days.Ill be back with you about 6back with you about 6thth of Aug,and then we can go off on of Aug,and then we can go off on our travels through southern Canada.I must be back in our travels through southern Canada.I must be back in Beijing before 25Beijing before 25thth of Aug.of Aug.vI hope these arrangements are OK with you.I hope these arrangements are OK with you.vSee you soon.See you soon.v Love Lovev Li Yuan Li Yuan第22页原文大意v此信是为了确定我在加拿大行程安排。我渴望此信是为了确定我在加拿大行程安排。我渴望着这次旅行。着这次旅行。v我将于我将于7 7月月3030号早晨号早晨1010点离开北京机场，并于点离开北京机场，并于早晨早晨1111点点3030分抵达多伦多机场。您能到机场接分抵达多伦多机场。您能到机场接我吗我吗?v我计划在您家里待三天左右，然后进入美国，我计划在您家里待三天左右，然后进入美国，去探望在纽约一个朋友，在那里住上三天。我去探望在纽约一个朋友，在那里住上三天。我会在会在8 8月月6 6号回到加拿大，同你们一起周游加拿号回到加拿大，同你们一起周游加拿大南部地域。我必须在大南部地域。我必须在8 8月月2525日前回到北京。日前回到北京。v希望这个计划对你们没有不便。希望这个计划对你们没有不便。第23页例二v08/16/08/16/vDear Professor Mckenzie,Dear Professor Mckenzie,vI am writing this letter to answer your questions on the I am writing this letter to answer your questions on the arrangement for the International Conference on Women in Beijing arrangement for the International Conference on Women in Beijing University in September.University in September.vThe conference will last five days from Sep.to 7.There will be The conference will last five days from Sep.to 7.There will be meeting in the morning from 8:30 to 11:00,and discussions in the meeting in the morning from 8:30 to 11:00,and discussions in the afternoons from 1:30 to 4:30 during first three days.On the fourth afternoons from 1:30 to 4:30 during first three days.On the fourth day all the members of the conference will go to the Great Wall.The day all the members of the conference will go to the Great Wall.The last day is free for shopping or visiting friends.last day is free for shopping or visiting friends.vWe understand that you are really busy,so you are permitted to We understand that you are really busy,so you are permitted to attend the meetings and discussions only.You will be the second attend the meetings and discussions only.You will be the second speaker on the day of Sep.3.speaker on the day of Sep.3.vIt is a great honor to have you as one of our speakers.Contact me It is a great honor to have you as one of our speakers.Contact me if you have further questions.if you have further questions.vSincerely yours,Sincerely yours,vLi YuanLi Yuan第24页原文大意v此信是回答您对9月在北京大学召开国际妇女大会安排几个问题。v该大会将连续五天，9月3日至7日。大会日程安排:早晨8点30至11点会议，下午1点30至4点30讨论。第四天爬长城，第五天自由活动、购物或探亲访友。v我们知道您非常忙，所以你能够只参加会议和讨论部分。v您讲话安排在9月3日第二个。v有您与会讲话是我们荣幸。v有任何疑问请联络我。第25页道歉信v道歉信情形通常是做错了什么，比如打坏了物件等。道歉信情形通常是做错了什么，比如打坏了物件等。v没有做成什么，比如没有按时赴约或食言等。没有做成什么，比如没有按时赴约或食言等。v内容包含表示道歉，说明原因、提出填补等。内容包含表示道歉，说明原因、提出填补等。v信一开始就应该表示歉意，然后解释、说明原因，并提信一开始就应该表示歉意，然后解释、说明原因，并提出填补方式。出填补方式。第26页例一v 11/09/11/09/vDear MartinDear Martinv Please regard this as a letter of apology for the recent problems Please regard this as a letter of apology for the recent problems that I caused you by moving your belongs in the parking garage without that I caused you by moving your belongs in the parking garage without your permission.your permission.v Believe me I had no intention of causing you any problems.Over the Believe me I had no intention of causing you any problems.Over the long weekend I decided to rearrange my space in the garage.While I long weekend I decided to rearrange my space in the garage.While I was at it I though I would also tidy up the entire garage.It was was at it I though I would also tidy up the entire garage.It was during that process that I noticed that your boxes of books were during that process that I noticed that your boxes of books were stored dangerously close to the electric heating element.So,I moved stored dange