新东方雅思写作之小作文省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

About me 芬兰/荷兰硕士校级国际奖学金取得者TKT证书持有者高级教师资格证持有者西安新东方Teaching Pro组员西安新东方国外部成熟教师赛课三等奖雅思听力8.5分，口语7.5，总分7.5分第1页主讲人：SophiaUnit 1 Unit 1 考试介绍考试介绍第2页目录目录考试介绍评分标准第3页中国大陆考区总体情况第4页考试介绍考试介绍n考试形式：60mins(20mins+40mins)n考试内容：TASK 1 150字文章 TASK 2 250字文章 n考试分数：TASK 1-40%TASK 2-60%Task1:8 Task2:3Overall=5第5页答题纸第6页答题纸12 words per lineTask 1 13 lines page1-2Task 2 20 lines page3-4第7页书写格式首行缩进(空4个字母位置)定格空行第8页备考书籍备考书籍第9页10TASK 1 图形类型图形类型第10页小作文考频1.6饼图饼图1.13饼图饼图1.18柱图柱图1.20线图线图2.1线柱混合2.3柱图2.10线图2.24饼图3.3饼图3.10柱图3.15柱图3.24线图4.7地图4.14表格4.21线图4.26表柱混合5.5线图5.12饼图5.19流程图5.24表柱混合6.2地图6.7表格6.23地图6.30柱状图第11页小作文考频7.7柱图柱图7.19柱图柱图7.21流程图流程图7.28柱图柱图8.2线图8.11柱图8.18地图8.25表格9.8饼表混合图9.13表线混合图9.15柱图9.29柱图10.11动态线图10.13地图题10.20柱图10.27地图题11.1动态柱图11.3表格图11.10 表格图11.17线图12.1动态柱图12.8饼表混合12.13流程图12.15柱图第12页TASK 2 常见题目类型常见题目类型C4T4T2In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?C5T1T2Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree?第13页C5T3T2Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged.Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.C9T1T2Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?TASK 2 常见题目类型常见题目类型第14页Task 1 客观性写作 Task 2 主观性写作Task 1:Describe visual information (diagram,chart graph or table)Task 2:you may be asked to:provide a solution evaluate a problemcompare or contrast different ideas or opinions第15页你写作分数是你写作分数是评分标准评分标准5？OR 7？第16页评分标准评分标准第17页Task 1 评分标准评分标准(OG)You will be assessed on the following criteria:Task AchievementCoherence and CohesionLexical ResourceGrammatical Range and Accuracy第18页Task 2 评分标准评分标准(OG)You will be assessed on the following criteria:Task ResponseCoherence and CohesionLexical ResourceGrammatical Range and Accuracy第19页Task 1 Task Achievement7分：covers the requirements 6分：addresses the requirements5分：generally addresses the requirements覆盖任务要求第20页Task 1 The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.第21页Task 1 Requirementssummarize selecting reporting make comparisons 第22页Task 1 Task Achievement7分：a clear overview6分：an overview 5分：no clear overview 总结段第23页Task 1 Task Achievement7分：clearly highlights key features 6分：adequately highlights key features5分：inadequately covers key features主要信息和趋势:最高值/最低值/起点/终点/交叉点第24页Task 1 Coherence and Cohesion7分：logically organises information and ideas6分：arrange information and ideas coherently 5分：information and ideas with some organisation信息描述逻辑和次序 第25页Task 1 Coherence and Cohesion7分：a range of cohesive devices6分：use cohesive devices effectively 5分：inadequate,inaccurate cohesive devices连接词和衔接伎俩 第26页Task 1 Coherence and Cohesion7分：overuse6分：not using referencing appropriately 5分：lack of referencing and substitution 指代和替换词第27页Task 1 Lexical Resources7分：a sufficient range of vocabulary 6分：an adequate range of vocabulary5分：a limited range of vocabulary词汇丰富性第28页Task 1 Lexical Resources7分：uses less common vocabulary 6分：attempts to use less common vocabulary5分：无词汇复杂性第29页Task 1 Lexical Resources7分：occasional errors6分：some errors，do not imped communication 5分：noticeable errors,cause some difficulty for the reader 词汇正确性第30页Task 1 Lexical Resources词汇正确性 词汇丰富性 词汇复杂性第31页Task 1 Grammatical Range and Accuracy7分：uses a variety of complex sentences 6分：uses a mix of simple and complex sentences5分：uses only a limited range of sentences structures 句子多样性第32页Task 1 Grammatical Range and Accuracy7分：produces frequent error-free sentence6分：无5分：attempt complex sentence,but less accurate 句子准确性第33页Task 1 Grammatical Range and Accuracy7分：make a few errors in grammar and punctuation 6分：makes some errors in grammar and punctuation5分：make frequent grammatical errors and punctuation,cause some difficulty for the reader 语法错误第34页Task 1 Grammatical Range and Accuracy语法错误 句子准确性 句子多样性第35页Task 1 Lexical Resources词性改变灵活使用单词，防止中式翻译（准确 VS 难度）防止单词拼写错误第36页Task 1 Grammatical Range and Accuracy句子结构多样性和准确性主谓一致/名词单复数/词性混同时态正确第37页拿学生例子来说明评分标准给分项目Anthony:When the global 第38页C11T2T1考官评语考官评语Task 1（Band 6）The candidate covers all the key features of the task and rounds off the description with an overview.There is some repetition of information and some irrelevant commentary(which is good because it shows that more people have learned other languages well).Information is arranged coherently and there is a clear overall progression,with effective use of cohesive devices,though there is a tendency to rely on dates.The range of vocabulary is adequate for the task,but the writer does not attempt any less common items.There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms,with a fair degree of accuracy,but the range would need to be wider to achieve a higher score.第39页开头段写法开头段写法开头段实质：对文章题目简单改写第40页 Collins P11第41页The table shows the percentage of time spent on types of Internet activity by age group.%of time spent on types of Internet activity,by age group图形标题 VS 开头段内容（主语 +shows +标题内容/题目内容）第42页Collins P13第43页Model Answer:The table shows the number of people in millions who watch sports on television.It shows the number of viewers for four sports in four different countries.添加信息改变结构第44页开头段高阶写法开头段高阶写法C7T2C9T2第45页C7T2第46页第47页Model Answer:The graph illustrates changes in the amount of beef,lamb,chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and.词性改变第48页题目题目 VS 开头段开头段The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and.The graph illustrates changes in the amount of beef,lamb,chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and.第49页C9T2第50页第51页Model Answer:The chart shows the time spent by UK residents on different types of telephone calls between 1995 and.第52页题目题目 VS 开头段开头段The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions)of telephone calls in the UK,divided into three categories,from 1995-.The chart shows the time spent by UK residents on different types of telephone calls between 1995 and.第53页 高阶开头段特征高阶开头段特征变换词性/consumption-consumed近义词/show-illustrate改变句子结构/who句型添加信息/图形当中信息(country/图例)第54页主语主语The pie chartThe bar chartThe line graphThe flow chart (diagram)The tableThe map第55页谓语谓语illustrateshow suggestdemonstratereveal present/give/provide information about.开头段时态：普通现在时第56页常见宾语常见宾语change(动态图)timedifferenceconsumptionpercentage/proportionnumber/amountuse/popularitycost/expenditure/spending第57页开头段改变句式开头段改变句式：The chart /shows+常见宾语 the change+in+主语 /shows +how引导宾语从句 +主语+changed /shows +that引导宾语从句第58页C7T2题目：The graph shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and.第59页Practice:1.The graph illustrates changes in the amount of beef,lamb,chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and.2.The graph provides information about the amount of beef,lamb,chicken and fish consumed.3.The graph shows how the amount of beef,lamb,chicken and fish consumed/changed.4.The graph shows that the amount of beef,lamb,chicken and fish was consumed in.第60页宾语修饰和限定宾语修饰和限定定语从句与分词转换第61页定语从句当中常见错误定语从句当中常见错误1.We are students who watches TV.主谓一致2.This is the place where I am born.时态问题3.This is the time that spends on TV.主被动语态第62页分词分词看被修饰名词与分词关系出发者 接收者用-ing，后者用-edThe graph illustrates changes in the amount of beef,lamb,chicken and fish consumed/which was consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and.第63页Collins P23第64页开头段开头段题目：The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegeterian diet.Over the past fifty years,there has been significant variation in the percentage of young people in the UK who choose to eat a vegetarian diet.第65页课后作业课后作业Collins P55Collins P31统计写作一本通上页码，统一布置作业第66页