【备战2021高考】全国2021届高中英语试题汇编(10月-上)：F单元-书面表达-Word版含解析.docx

F单元　书面表达
名目
F单元　书面表达 1
F1书面表达记叙文 1
F2 书面表达谈论文 3
F3 书面表达说明文 4
F4 书面表达应用文 4
F5书面表达夹叙夹议文 4

F1书面表达记叙文

【英语文卷(解析)·2021届山东省临沂市重点中学高三上学期十月月考（202210）】其次节 写作(30分)
假如你是高三同学李华, 今后高考英语阅读量加大, 而你的阅读力量较差, 因此学习压力越来越大。请依据以下提示写信向你的前外教Mr. Johnson求助：
1. 英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰；
2. 期望得到他的指导和挂念。
留意：1. 词数：l20—l50, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Johnson,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】【学问点】F1 书面表达记叙文

【范文】
Dear Mr. Johnson,
How are things going with you?
I’m writing to ask for your help. As you know, I’m weak in English reading comprehension. Although I have tried every means to improve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large number of exercises, so far all my efforts have ended up in failure, which really makes me discouraged. To make things worse, this year reading will make up a higher percentage than ever before in the coming College Entrance Examination. Now with the important exam drawing near, I feel more and more stressed and worried. If I didn’t take effective measures, I wouldn’t be able to get through the exam and that would ruin my college dream.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me some advice on how to improve my reading ability effectively and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes.

【英语卷（解析）·2021届湖南省岳阳一中高三10月其次次月考（202210）】Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese
请一下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。

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内容： 1. 自己或他人的经受；
2. 你的感受。
留意： 1. 必需使用所给的4个关键词语；
2. 词数不少于120个。
【答案】【学问点】F1书面表达记叙文
【范文】When I was in Senior 1, I didn’t study English hard, so my English was very poor. But my deskmate Zhang Yan was quite good at English. Once I whispered to her for the answers during an English exam. She refused to help me, which made me angry and upset. A few days later, Zhang Yan came to talk with me about my English. Her words made me realize the mistake I’d made. To my delight, Zhang Yan promised to help me with my English study from then on. And it was with her help that I was able to make rapid progress in my English. Now I’m also one of the top students in English in my class.
I appreciate her help very much all the time. I feel Zhang Yan is my real friend. What I need in my life is such a good friend.
【答案解析】此文通过英语提高的过程很好的把这几个词联系起来，形成一篇结构严谨，遣词造句很好的文章。文章中用了高级词汇和句子结构，如: which made me angry and upset. Her words made me realize the mistake I’d made.定语从句和宾语复合结构；And it was with her help that I was able to make rapid progress in my English.强调句型；To my delight；appreciate； What I need in my life is such a good friend.
主语从句。

F2 书面表达谈论文

【英语卷（解析）·2021届重庆南开中学高三9月月考（202209）】写作一(满分15分)
    请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。
    A friend of mine said，“I really miss the days when the sky was blue and the river was clear．”
    要求：1．就此材料发表你的看法；
          2．紧扣材料，有明确的观点；
          3．词数不少于6o；
          4．在答题卡上作答。

【答案】【学问点】F2 书面表达谈论文
【范文】As is shown in this sentence, despite the rapid development of our country, our environment has been seriously polluted, with the rivers filled with dirty water and the sky covered with dust and haze.
In my opinion, firstly, the sharp increase of the number of cars is an important contributing factor. The emissions of their exhaust gas into the atmosphere exert a disastrous effect on the air quality. Moreover, many factories, in order to pursue their short-term interests, discharge their industrial waste directly into the river, which has brought about serious water pollution.
As for the measures we need to take, it is high time that we should use less cars, clean the water from the factories, reduce dirt in the air。
【思路点拨】本文讲了环境受到破坏的缘由及治理措施，充分表达了环境爱护的重要性。文章使用了一些好的句型和词汇，如：As is shown in this sentence,…定语从句；with the rivers filled with …with复合结构；it is high time that…句型；文中一些连接词使文章结构紧密，如：In my opinion, firstly, Moreover, As for等，不失为一篇佳作。

【英语卷（解析）·2021届四川省成都外国语学校高三10月月考（202210）】七. 书面表达（共35分）
随着互联网的进展和流行，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了。某英文报近期开拓专栏,争辩中同学网上购物的问题。请结合实际，按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件，谈谈你对中同学网购的看法。
1.网上购物的好处（比如便利快捷，节省时间，价格低等；）。
2.网上购物的缺点（比如快递比较耗时，无法试穿试用，质量得不到保证等）。
3.中同学对网购应当持什么样的态度。
留意:
1.词数120左右,开头结尾已为你写好;
2.网购的好处与缺点至少各两点；
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

Dear Editor,
With the development and popularity of the Internet, online shopping has become more and more common in China. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Mike
【答案】【学问点】F2 书面表达谈论文
【范文】
Dear editor,
With the development and popularity of the Internet, online shopping has become more and more common in China. I’m writing to share my views about online shopping.
On the one hand, I believe it’s convenient and economical. With the help of online shopping, we can buy things we want at home with a click of the mouse instead of going to the shopping mall. Besides, we might save money by comparing the price of goods sold in different online shops.
On the other hand, it might lead to many problems. For one thing, your package can’t always reach you on time due to various unexpected reasons. For another, you can’t try on the clothes to see if they fit you or not like you do when shopping in a real shop.
All in all, I hold that high school students should have a cautious attitude towards online shopping in order to avoid wasting money or buying things of poor quality.
Yours sincerely,
Mike
【思路点拨】范文围绕网络购物开放，抓住了写作要点。第一段先说明网购的现象，然后表明写这篇稿件的目的。二、三段围绕网络购物的优点和缺点。两段开头分别用On the one hand ，On the other hand串接起来，写作层次清楚。第三段用了一些过渡词For one thing, For another逐一列出网络购物的缺点，使行文更加流畅。最终一段用总结性的话all in all，用have a cautious attitude towards短语表明中同学对待网购应有的态度。总体来说本文论述结构严谨，条理清楚，词汇丰富，句式多变，长短句交替使用。

【英语卷（解析）·2021届湖南省衡阳八中高三上学期其次次月考（202209）】Section C（25 points）
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假定你是某高三班级2班的学习委员，经常看到有同学抄袭作业，针对这种现象，你将在下周的班会上组织全班同学争辩这一现象，并以 “My opinion on copying others’ homework” 为主题作中心发言，请事先用英语写好一篇发言稿。
留意：1.发言稿须包括以下内容要点：
A. 抄袭的主要缘由。
B. 抄袭的危害及解决方法。
C. 简要表明自己的态度。
2. 词数：不少于120字。
【答案】【学问点】F2 书面表达谈论文
【范文】
May I have your attention, please?
My topic today is about copying others’ homework.
As we know, some students copy others’ homework. On one hand, we students have to do masses of homework both at home and at school . Sometimes we do have some problems, too hard to work out. On the other hand, lazy and uninterested in their lesson, some students copy others’ homework not only to finish the assignments but also to please their teachers.
In a word, copying others’ homework is a bad habit. For one thing, it’s against the school rules. Being students, we should be honest and work hard. If we have difficulties, we can turn to teachers and classmates for help. For another, copying others’ homework too often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think.
Personally, it’s for our own sake to study. We should try our best to gain knowledge. Let’s take action to prevent such bad behavior from spreading.
Thank you for your attention.

【思路点拨】范文开头和结尾符合班会发言稿的形式。其次段点出主题，第三段给出同学们抄袭别人作业的现象以及引起这一现象的缘由。缘由用on one hand…,on the other hand…逐一列出，条理清楚。第四段指出，抄袭作业是个不好的习惯。通过for one thing …,for another来论证抄袭别人作业的坏处。第五段再次点明自己的观点，呼吁同学们努力学习，实行行动阻挡抄袭作业的坏习惯。范文整体来说写作层次清楚，紧扣要点，行文连贯。
好词好句：masses of 很多，大量
not only…but also…
强调句 Sometimes we do have some problems, too hard to work out.
现在分词作状语Being students, we should be honest and work hard.
For another, copying others’ homework too often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think.

【英语卷（解析）·2021届黑龙江省哈三中高三第一次模拟测试（202209）】其次节书面表达 (满分25分)
高考在即，高三同学在紧急复习。你现在用英语，在博客上给父母写一封信，内容包括：
1：感恩父母 2：加强理解 3：畅想将来 字数100左右
Dear Mom and Dad,

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【答案】【学问点】F2 书面表达谈论文
【范文】
Dear Mom and Dad,a
The annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you.
Through those years of my growing up, I always feel grateful to you for your unselfish help,care and love for me. Thanks to your constant encouragement , I have been making remarkable progress in my studies. It will be less than three months before I take the College Entrance Examination, which makes me feel under great pressure. I need frequent support. You know, good studying conditions and timely help will do me a lot of good.
Mom and Dad, my dream is the very one you always have. I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing. I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practise solving problems of different subjects. It is so necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit. If possible, as a family member, I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit.
I am quite confident of my future life and I do wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours ever,
Li Xiang

【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语around the corner即将来临；Thanks to由于；make progress取得进步；be aware of 意思到；under great pressure有压力；It will be less than three months before I take the College Entrance Examination, which makes me feel under great pressure.这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句；Mom and Dad, my dream is the very one you always have.这个句子you always have.是the one 的定语从句；I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practise solving problems of different subjects.这个句子中so that引导结果状语从句；

【英语卷（解析）·2021届河北省冀州中学高三上学期第一次月考（202209）doc】第三节 书面表达（满分15分）
闲逛     是一种良好的熬炼方式，它对我们的健康格外有益。请以“Walking to Keep Fit”为题写一篇100～120词的英语短文，介绍一下闲逛     的好处以及你的建议。
留意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Walking to Keep Fit
As we all know，walking is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health.
【答案】【学问点】F2 书面表达谈论文
 【范文】Walking to Keep Fit
As we all know，walking is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health.It cannot only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases but also strengthen the muscles and build up the bones.It’s safer than many other ways of exercise，especially for the elderly and it’s easy to do without considering rules.Besides，walking can also help us lose weight.
What should we pay attention to during the walk？First，we should wear loose clothes and good shoes so that we can relax.Second，we should walk fast enough to cause us to breathe with difficulty but still able to talk.Third，it’s important to walk with our arms moving freely.And last but not least we should do it every day.
【思路点拨】一篇好作文的四要素：一是要点要齐全；二是用词和句子结构要富于变化；三是文章句子之间连接自然，是一有机整体；四是书写要清楚、美观。 
本文叙述了闲逛     的好处和方法，语言简洁有力，使用了同学们常见的句型和词汇，如not only…but also…；it is 形容词 to do；好的词汇有：strengthen，build up等；再就是文章使用了一些连接词，是文章内容格外紧凑，不失为一篇佳作。

【英语卷（解析）·2021届广东省深圳市高三上学期第一次五校联考（202209）】第一节：基础写作（共1小题， 满分15分）

假设你是某中学高三(5)班的班长。你班同学利用课余时间回收废报纸和饮料瓶获得了一笔收入。就如何使用这笔收入，你昨天下午特地组织了一次班会让全班同学进行争辩。请你依据以下争辩结果用英语写一篇班会总结。
【写作内容】

【写作要求】
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．作文中不能消灭真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括精确     ，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
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【答案】【学问点】F2 书面表达谈论文
【范文】
Yesterday afternoon，we held a class meeting discussing how to spend the money our whole class earned by recycling and selling newspapers and plastic bottles after class. Three fifths of the students suggested buying stationery for our own use because it can let us experience the enjoyment of harvest. Meanwhile，it is an approach to encouraging our classmates to continue this action. However，two fifths of the students believed that the money should be donated to the people in the earthquake stricken areas because they need the money more urgently than us. More importantly，it is meaningful to spend the money earned by ourselves in helping others.
【思路点拨】
本文是谈论文，主要介绍同学争辩会的主要内容，同学很简洁把握要点，也简洁写出自己的感想和评价。
【解析】
该生具有很好的语言表达力量，语法结构、语态的把握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇格外流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用how to do sth做宾语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面连接的也格外恰当，使用了Meanwhile、however等连接结构。文中使用了an approach to doing sth，be donat