【备战2021高考】全国2021届高中英语试题汇编(10月-下)：E单元-短文改错-Word版含解析.docx

E单元　短文改错
名目
E单元　短文改错 1
E1 短文改错记叙文 1
E2 短文改错应用文 4
E3 短文改错谈论文 4
E4 短文改错说明文 4

E1 短文改错记叙文

【英语卷（解析）·2021届宁夏银川一中高三其次次月考（202209）】第一节：短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
My brother, who is a Harvard graduate, work in a multinational company. Recently, the company had failed several times in its attempts to break into the Chinese market. As a new manager in the charge of the sale department, he is trying every possible mean to promote their products. Because he has taken some effective measures, their profits are expected to rise at 30%. I am real proud of my brother. What’s more, he has promised to give me five thousand yuan until my summer holidays come. If not, I will be able to afford go travelling. How a wonderful piece of news!
【答案】【学问点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
My brother, who is a Harvard graduate, work(改为works) in a multinational company. Recently, the company had(改为has) failed several times in its attempts to break into the Chinese market. As a new manager in the (去the)charge of the sale department, he is trying every possible mean (改为means)to promote their products. Because he has taken some effective measures, their profits are expected to rise at (改为by)30%. I am real(改为really) proud of my brother. What’s more, he has promised to give me five thousand yuan until (改为when/before) my summer holidays come. If not(改为so), I will be able to afford ∧(加to)go travelling. How (改为What)a wonderful piece of news!
1. work改为works 主语是he,谓语要用单数第三人称
2. had改为has several times 要用现在完成时has\have done结构。
3. the 去the 人+in charge of 人掌管 物+in the charge of
4. mean 改为means means 名词 “方式，方法”
5. at 改为by rise by 上升到，增长了
6. real改为really 副词修饰形容词
7. until 改为when/before 有一个时间先后挨次。
8. not改为so 依据上下文意思“假如这样的话，我就能担负的起旅行的话费了。”
9. afford ∧加to 固定搭配afford to do sth 担负的起做某事
10. How 改为What 感叹句what +a\an +形容词+名词！how+形容词！

【英语卷（解析）·2021届吉林省吉林市高三第一次摸底考试（202210）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
       假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。
短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
       增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
       删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
       修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
       留意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
             2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
     It is three years now since I graduate from Jixing High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in touch with everybody and set a properly time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.
【答案】【学问点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础学问的应用，留意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础学问。
第一行graduate改为graduated过去时；
其次行on改为in，in the class搭配；time后加to不定式；
第三行properly改为proper作定语用形容词；
第四行a改为the，表特指；remember改为remembering，非谓语动词，表主动；
第五行they改为we，人称不对。
第六行which改为that，that引导的主语从句，It is a pity that固定句型；us改为them；去掉to，出国go abroad
第七行card改为cards，应当用复数

【英语卷（解析）·2021届黑龙江省哈六中高三10月月考（202210）】第一节短文改错
Today my father and I drove to visit Li Wei, whom we had been supporting for two years. We set off early in the morning, and after a two-hour drive, we arrived in his home. At that moment, he was working in the garden when his grandpa was sitting in the sun. They were excited to see us and gave us warm welcome. We gave Li Wei a schoolbag and some books as well. Grateful and being moved , he showed us his excellent schoolworks, which impressed us greatly. Li Wei and I talked about our dreams, friends and school life. We were very happy that we didn’t realize it was time to leave. They saw me off at the village entrance and we waved good bye to them, promised to come back again. I really feel happily about what we did today.
【答案】【学问点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
Today my father and I drove to visit m Li Wei, who we had been
supporting for two years. We set off early in the morning, and after a two-hour drive, we arrived in his home. At that moment, he was working in the garden when his grandpa was sitting in the sun. They were excited to see us and gave us ∧warm welcome. We gave Li Wei a schoolbag and some books as well. Grateful and being moved , he showed us his excellent school works, which impressed us greatly. Li Wei and I talked about our dreams, friends and school life. We were very happy that we didn’t realize it was time to leave. They saw me off at the village entrance and we waved good bye to them, promised to come back again. I really feel happily about what we did today.
1. had—have for two years 提示要用现在完成时态。
2. in –at 固定搭配at home 到家；也可以依据arrive in+大地方，arrive at+小地方
3. when-while 这里是“而”的意思。主、从句表示两个同时进行的持续性动作，且强调主句表示的动作连续到从句所指的整个时间，通常要用 while。
4. + a give sb. a warm welcome 向某人表示吵闹的欢迎
5. being 去掉 and连接两个并列形容词 moved adj. 感动的
6. works-work works作品；work 工作，课业
7. very-so 固定搭配 so…that 如此……以至于
8. me—us we的宾格us
9. promised—promising 有逗号，promise的规律主语和主句全都，是主谓关系，要用动词ing。
10. happily—happy feel是系动词，后面要跟形容词作表语。

【英语卷（解析）·2021届河南省试验中学高三上学期第一次月考（202210）】第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning I went to the shoes shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got there, I noticed a foreign lady talk to a salesgirl. But the salesgirl didn't understand that the foreigner was saying. They both looked worrying. I went up to help them. The lady is Australian. She wanted to buy a pair of traveling shoes. So I told it to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when she took it. She sings high praise for my spoken English. All of them expressed their thanks to me. I felt happy that I expressed myself free in English.
【答案】【学问点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】本文叙述今日早上我去买鞋时发生的事情。
【答案解析】
1.shoes改为shoe 考查名词。 名词作定语的时候经常用单个的名词放在名词前面做定语。
2.talk改为talking  考查动词的时态。 这里是指正在发生的事情，所以使用现在分词表示正在进行的动作。
3.that改为what 考查宾语从句； what引导宾语从句，并在从句中做say的宾语。
4.worrying改为worried考查形容词。主语是they，后面用过去分词转换的形容词对其进行修饰。
5.is后面加an   考查冠词；Australian是以元音开头的单词，所以使用an修饰。
6.删除much  考查much用法。后面的glad是形容词的原级，而much修饰比较级。
7.it改为them  考查代词。them指代上文的shoes。所以使用复数形式them来指代。
8.sings改为sang 考查动词的时态。这个文章都使用的是一般过去时。
9.All改为Both  考查代词。依据上文可知是一名售货员和另外一个顾客，一共是两个人。故使用Both。
10.free改为freely  考查副词。 用副词freely修饰动词短语expressed myself

E2 短文改错应用文

【英语卷（解析）·2021届黑龙江省哈师大附中高三第一次月考（202209）】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my view, the Internet is helpful. It is known to all, the Internet is playing important part in our daily

life. On the Internet, we can read news home and abroad and got as much informations as we can. We can also

attend to the net school and read many books. We can even do shopping online.

Besides, your ability to operate the computer can be improved great. So we should not be addicted to the

Internet, or we'll get our life and study destroying. In addition, we should keep off the harm websites.

Anyhow, this doesn't prevent the Internet from becoming our friend.
【答案】【学问点】E2 短文改错应用文
【思路点拨】短文改错中的错误都是同学们经常犯的错误，修改时应考虑语法和词法学问，如动词、名词、形容词等形式的变化等。
【答案解析】
1.It—As 由于有逗号已经将主从句分开，故前一分句变成非限制性定语从句。
2.playing后加an play an important part in在……中起重要作用。
3.got—get 该短文使用的是一般现在时，故got改为get。
4.informations—information information为不行数名词。
5.attend后的to去掉 attend为及物动词。
6.your—our 该文是以第一人称的书写的，故your改为our。
7.great—greatly 此处需要副词修饰动词improve。
8.So—But 依据前后句之间的转折关系，so应改为but。
9.destroying—destroyed destroy为及物动词，life and study是其动作承受者，故应用过去分词。。
10.harm—harmful 修饰名词websites应用形容词harmful。

【英语卷（解析）·2021届广西省桂林中学高三10月月考（202210）】第一节   短文改错（共10题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Li Mei，
With the midterm exam come，you must get prepared for them. I think that you need is a right study method. As we all know，there are three stage in study—preview，study in class and review，among which review was the most important. You should first make a review plan，and then stick to it.
I follow my review plan strictly and have made a progress in my study. It turns out to be good enough. Of course，there are more than one way to review. So long as you review regular，I'm sure you can find more ways to study well.
If you have any question of subjects，you may ask me I'm glad to help you. We may meet in our school library every Friday afternoon.
Best regards.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】【学问点】E2 短文改错应用文
第一行 come改为coming，with复合结构，exam和come是主动关系；
them改为it，指代exam；
其次行 that改为what，主语从句，what做need的宾语；
stage改为stages，前面有three
第三行 was改为is，应用一般现在时；
第五行 去掉a，progress不行数名词
第六行 are改为is，主语more than one way是单数
第七行 regular改为regularly，修饰动词应当用副词；
第九行 question变复数；
me后加and，起连接作用。

E3 短文改错谈论文

【英语卷（解析）·2021届陕西省西安一中高三上学期二模考试（202210） 】其次节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students sleep
less than nine hours every night. One main reason lies at students’ bad habits.
Too much homework is given by school teachers is another main cause. Some students
are absent-minded while doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time.
The third cause is that some students have to get up earlier on weekday to get to
school that far away from home. Experts think the amount of homework for the students
should cut down. Beside, teachers should encourage their students make good use of
their spare time. Only in this way can the students improve our study efficiency.
【答案】【学问点】E3 短文改错谈论文
【答案解析】
1. Basing变为 based 固定用法based on sth 以…为基础.
2. at 变为in lie in 在于
3. is去掉 given by school teacher作homework的后置定语，句子中已经有一个系动词is。
4. wasting变为 waste and连接两个并列的句子 这里waste做some(students)的谓语。
5. weekday 变为weekdays weekdays 工作日；周一到周五 要用复数。
6. that后加 is 或去掉that that后加is,是变成school作先行词定语从句。school far away from home;
7. should 后加be homework和cut down是动宾关系，要用被动形式，情态动词+be+动词过去分词
8. beside变为besides beside 在…….旁边，这里考察的是“除….之外（还有）”的意思。
9. make前加to 固定搭配：encourage sb. to do sth.
10. our变为 their students 人称代词宾格their。

【英语卷（解析）·2021届辽宁省沈阳二中高三上学期10月月考（202210）】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1；每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.
【答案】【学问点】E3 短文改错谈论文
【文章综述】本文叙述的是对于远足的争辩。
【答案解析】
1. had –has 考查动词的时态。句意：一场关于远足的争辩在我们班进行。用现在完成时。
2.or more ---and 考查连词。句意：一些同学认为远足可以使人们更健康，布满活力和与自己更和谐。表达并列连接。
3. the nature去掉the 考查冠词。Nature是抽象名词，故不用冠词。
4.deep---deeply 考查副词。句意：他们发觉自己被大自然深深地吸引。Deeply用来修饰atract.
5. relaxing---relaxed 考查形容词。Relaxed 用来修饰人，意思是放松的。Relaxing,用来修饰物，表示 令人放松的。
6.ever—never 考查副词。句意：但是现在远足者开头去探究些人们没有去过的地方。
7. because后面加of 考查短语。句意：事故时不是会发生由于对于远足学问的缺乏，because是连词用来连接两个句子。
8.life—lives 考查固定短语。Lose one’s life失去生命，life的形式随着one’s的变化而变化。
9. think后面加it 考查动词的用法。Think it adj to do 这个句型中it做形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式。
10. which—that 考查同位语从句。句意：他们建议，必需有肯定的立法和在参与活动之前必需经过专业的训练。Suggestion后面跟着同位语从句，由that来引导。

E4 短文改错说明文

【英语卷（解析）·2021届山西省山大附中高三上学期第四次月考试题（202210）】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必需按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
A tornado is a rotated column of air from a thunderstrom to the ground. The most violent have winds of more than 400 kilometre per hour. Tornadoes can pick up cars, trains and even houses and put it down in the next street --- or even in the next town. They can take the fur out the back of a cat and the feathers off a chicken. They can destroy houses, and leave the furniture inside exactly what it was.
On average, there are 800 tornadoes in the US each year, cause about 80 deaths and 1500 injuries. The worst tornado of all the time occur in 1925, affecting three US states. By the time it ended, more than 700 people had killed and 2700 had been injured.
【答案】【学问点】E4 短文改错说明文
【文章综述】 本文叙述龙卷风的危害
【答案解析】
1. rotating 考查形容词。句意：龙卷风是空气中旋转的气流，形成风暴。
2. kilometres 考查数词。具体的数学重要的单位要用复数形式。
3. it---them 考查代词。依据上文消灭cars, trains and even houses可知用them 来代替。
4. out---off 考查副词。依据下半句中提到the feathers off a chicken可知用off 表示离开。
5. and---but 考查连词。两个句子表示转折，故用but
6. what---where 考查特殊疑问词。句意：他能破坏房子，但使家具保持原来的位置。
7. cause --- causing 考查非谓语动词。句意：平均来说，在美国每年800场飓风，导致80人死亡和1500人受伤。
8. of all time –times 考查名词。在全部这些糟糕的龙卷风发生在1925年。
9. occurred 考查动词的时态。In 1925表示发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
10. had been killed 考查动词的时间。By the time 在。。时间为止，故用过去完成时。