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1.书面表达。（10分）
假如你和同学本周日要去西山郊游，请根据单词提示，写一篇60词左右的短文。要求层次清楚，结构完整。
classmate, Sunday, the West Hill, go hiking, 8:00, meet, school gate,
8:30, leave, take, guitar, kite, bread, water, fun
例文：This Sunday, my classmates and I are going to the West Hill for hiking. We’re going to meet at 8:00 o’clock on Sunday morning at the school gate. Then we plan to leave at 8:30. Li Lei likes flying a kite, so he’s going to take a kite with him. Wang Junfeng would like to take a guitar because he prefers playing the guitar. Also we’re going to take some bread and water. I think we will have fun.
2.书面表达。（10分）
根据表格中所提供的信息，以My Favorite Player为题写一篇60词左右的短文。
Name
Lin Dan
Birthday
1983/10/14
Country
China
Event（项目）
Badminton（羽毛球）
Height
1. 76m
Weight
65kg

Name
Zhang Yining
Birthday
1982/10/05
Country
China
Event
Table tennis
Height
1. 68m

:
My Favorite Player
My favorite player is Zhang Yining who is 1. 68 meter tall. She is a table tennis player on the national team of China. She was born on October 5th, 1982. When she was six years old, she began to practice playing ping-pong. She started to play on our national team in 1995. She is clever, quick and hard-working. In 2004 Athens Olympic Games, she did very well and got medals. I like her best because I like ping-pong.
3.假如你叫Peter, 上周日你校在操场举办了场运动会。根据表格信息并发挥想象写一篇作文
Name
Activity
Result
Kate
girls’400-metre relay race
first
Lucy
the long jump
badly
Peter
boys’100-meter race
first
例文：Last week our school held a sports meet on the playground. All the students were very excited. Kate is good at running and she took part in the girls’ 400-metre relay race. She won the first place. Lucy joined in the long jump, but she did badly. I was in the boys’ 100-metre race and I was the first to cross the finish line. At last, our class won the first place.

4. 假如你叫杰克，下面是你同班同学的体育活动情况。请根据表格信息写一篇短文， 80词
Name
Favorite sport
How often
Favorite player
Dream
Steve
swimming
twice a week
Sun Yang
great swimmer
Marry
tennis
every day
Li Na
dancer
Jack
football
often
Ronaldo
scientist
例文：I am Jack. My favorite sport is football. I often play football with my friends. I like Ronaldo very much. I want to be a scientist in the future. This is my dream. Steve is my classmate. He is good at swimming. He goes swimming twice a week. His favorite player is Sun Yang. His dream job is to be a great swimmer. What about Mary? Tennis is her favorite sport. She plays tennis every day. Her favorite player is Li Na. But her dream is to be a dancer.
5.假如你是Li Tao，昨天下午踢足球时你因脱衣服受凉而感冒了。医生建议你卧床休息两天。因此你向Miss Zhang请两天的病假并承诺按时归校。请根据信息和下面提示词写一则请假条，60词左右。（注意格式）football, take off (脱), cold, advise, bed, return
Dear Miss Zhang,
I am sorry to tell you that I had a bad cold because I took off my clothes when I played football yesterday. The doctor advised me to lie down and have a good rest for two days. So I would like to ask for two days’ leave. I hope I will get well and return to school soon.
Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Tao
6.假如你是康康，你很健康，你是如何保持健康的？从个人生活习惯角度谈谈你的保健方法。不少于60词。
I am Kangakang. I am glad to talk about health.
I never go to school without breakfast. I think breakfast can keep us active all day. I always have meals at home and I seldom eat out. I don’t like fast food. Mum says it’s unhealthy.
I like doing sports. Before breakfast I run for half an hour. I play basketball with my friends after school. Of course I will do some other sports. I exercise at least two hours every day.
I played computer games a lot before, but now I find myself and I am living a healthy and happy life. What about you?
7.由于学习生活紧张，现在许多学生饮食随便、不爱运动、不讲卫生，对身体有很大危害，假如你是学校的一名校医，请写一篇简短的发言稿，给同学们提出一些建议和忠告。
Hello, everyone! Now I will give you some advice about how to keep healthy.
First, never eat unhealthy food. Fast food, junk food and hot food are all bad for our health. We should eat green food.
Second, do more exercise. Exercising can keep us active all day. It’s good for our study.
Third, keep your room clean and keep the air in your room fresh. Stay away from the crowded places.
If you do these, you’ll be healthy.
That’s all! Thank you for listening!
8. 根据图片内容和单词提示，写一篇意思连贯的短文。不少于60词。

1.stay up, computer 2.headache, fever3.taketo, doctor4.nothing serious medicine5.exercise healthy

Last night, Xiao Qiang stayed up late for computer games. He didn’t go to bed until 12:00. The next morning he had a headache and had a high fever. His mother took him to see the doctor quickly. The doctor said it was nothing serious and gave him some medicine. Now Xiao Qiang is OK and he exercises often to keep healthy.
9.书面表达。（10分）
依照下列问句，以My Hobbies为题写一篇60词左右的短文。
1. What hobbies did you use to have? Why did you like them?
2. What hobbies do you have now? Why do you like them?
3. What different hobbies do you have in different seasons?
My Hobbies
Different people have different hobbies. I used to ride a bike and read story books. They could give me lots of knowledge. I keep cats and dogs. I thought pets were very friendly and lovely, but now I like listening to music and chatting on the Internet, because music can relax me after the daily work and chatting can bring me happiness and friendship.
I have different hobbies in different seasons. In spring, I like flying kites. In summer, I go swimming. I often climb hills in fall. I like making snowmen best in winter.
10.假如李明是你的好朋友，根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文介绍李明的业余爱好。（短文开头已给出）
提示语：
1. 李明以前是个电影迷, 一周至少去看两次电影，有时租VCD在家里看，最喜欢的影星是姜文；
2. 李明现在的兴趣是集邮, 认为集邮非常有趣，可以从邮票上学到很多关于人物、地点、历史的知识, 有些旧邮票非常有价值；
3. 上周五是李明的生日, 他从朋友那里得到了许多邮票，非常高兴。
Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen.
Now Li Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it’s great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable.
Last Friday was Li Ming’s birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.
11. 假如2013年12月31日（周六晚上7点）你校在学校礼堂举行元旦联欢晚会。校园歌手王浩将献唱My Heart Will Go On，校园吉他王子李冬现场弹奏，陈辉将进行魔术表演 (magic performing)，八三班全体同学将进行武术表演 (Kung-fu performing)，还有张丹的独舞……。欢迎全校师生参加。请你为此做一个宣传海报（poster）。
School New Year’s Evening Party
School New Year’s Evening Party
Want to welcome the New Year together?
Want to enjoy exciting songs, music, dancing?
Want to spend an exciting evening?
Guitar playing: the king of guitar, Li Dong
Magic performing: Chen Hui
Kung-fu performing: students from Class 3, Grade 8
Dancing alone: Zhang Dan
Song: My Heart Will Go on, the school singer, Wang Hao
Come and Join us!
Place: The School Hall
Time: 7:00 p. m. Dec. 31
12. 以“How did you spend last Sunday? Did you have a good time? What were you doing at different times last Sunday?”为内容，写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：watch a movie, climb mountains, play basketball, visit friends, play computer games, do housework . . ., happy, excited, sad . . .
A Happy Sunday
I had a happy day last Sunday. From 6: 30 to 7: 00, I was running along the road. At 8: 00 a. m. I was doing cleaning at home, because my parents were out. At 9: 50, I was watching a movie with my friend, Han Xingxing. The film was very interesting, and it made us excited. From 2: 20 to 4: 30, I was playing basketball with my classmates on our school playground. At 6: 00 p. m. my grandparents, my parents and I were having a big dinner together in a restaurant. We all felt very happy and enjoyed it.
I was watching TV from 7: 30 to 9: 30 at home in the evening, then I went to bed.
13.假如李明是你的好朋友，根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文介绍李明的业余爱好。（短文开头已给出）
提示语：
1. 李明以前是个电影迷, 一周至少去看两次电影，有时租VCD在家里看，最喜欢的影星是姜文；
2. 李明现在的兴趣是集邮, 认为集邮非常有趣，可以从邮票上学到很多关于人物、地点、历史的知识, 有些旧邮票非常有价值；
3. 上周五是李明的生日, 他从朋友那里得到了许多邮票，非常高兴。
13. 参考范文:
Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen.
Now Li Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it’s great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable.
Last Friday was Li Ming’s birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.
14.北京仁爱国际英语学校八年级学生魏环向福州的网友李志远发了一封电子邮件，询问了一些关于当地环境情况。请根据来信帮他回一封电子邮件。
注意：1. 词数：60词左右；
2. 邮件的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数。
Receiver
Li Zhiyuan@163. com
Copy

Subject
How to protect the clean water?
Dear Li Zhiyuan，
I feel very excited about my visit to Fuzhou and meeting you for the first time! But I’m still not sure about the following questions：
1. Are there any rivers or lakes in your city?
2. Is the water dirty or clean? Why?
3. Did you do anything useful to protect the clean water?
Please let me know about it.
Your friend，
Wei Huan
Dear Wei Huan，
I am very excited to receive your e-mail. I am interested in your questions.
There are many rivers in my city. Mingjiang River is one of the longest rivers. But the water in the river isn’t as clean as before. This is because people cut down the trees a lot. As we know, trees can keep the water much cleaner. On March 12th, we often plant some trees on the hills. More and more trees are growing. I think the water is becoming cleaner and cleaner.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours，
Li Zhiyuan
15.. 书面表达。（10分）
假如昨天下午全校师生进行了一次地震逃生演练（a practice of escaping from an earthquake）。请展开合理想象，写一篇短文介绍这次演练的情况。不少于60词。
提示词：under the desk, cover the head, run out, one after another (一个接一个), walk on the right down the stairs (楼梯), get to (到达)。

15.参考范文
Yesterday morning, our school gave us a practice of escaping from an earthquake. All the teachers and students took part in the activity.
Before it, our headteacher, Miss Wang, told us the rules for escaping again. It started on time at 8:00 a. m. Miss Wang shouted,“Under your desk!”All the students stayed under the desks with arms covering the heads. Next, she shouted“Group One, go!”… “Group Two, go!”…. My classmates ran out of the classroom one after another. When I was walking on the right down the stairs, Lucy in front of me fell down suddenly. I held her up quickly. All of my classmates got to the playground at 8:01. No one was left.“We only spent one minute.”said Miss Wang happily.
This activity is popular with both parents and students. We learnt a lot from it.
16. 书面表达。（10分）
现在学生在网吧上网（get on-line）成风，你们班在下周班会上将谈论有关问题。请你根据表格中提示的内容用英语写一篇60词左右的讲话稿，要点必须齐全。
益处
1. 学会使用现代设备——电脑；
2. 学会更多知识(knowledge)；
3. 玩游戏，使人更加聪明。
坏处
1. 过于沉迷游戏，对学习有害；
2. 网上交友，通信频繁，学习成绩下降。
建议
1. 在学校学习时不上网；
2. 寒暑假可以上网。
Many students like getting on-line very much. They can learn how to use the modern machine — computers. They can learn much more knowledge from the Internet. It can make them clever by playing different kinds of games.
But some students spend too much time playing games. Some even make friends on-line. It takes them too much time to write too many letters to each other, so they do worse in their lessons.
I think they mustn’t get on-line when they’re studying at school. They can do it in summer or winter holidays.
17. 书面表达。（15分）
(A)Maria要与同学聚会，她给表弟Tommy写了一张留言条。请他帮忙做些事情。请根据图片提供的信息，完成下面的留言条。（5分）

Dear Tommy，
I’m going to a party today. I need your help. In the morning, would you mind _________________________________________________________________________________________
If you finish all these things, I will give you a big surprise.
Love，
Maria
(B)地球上水资源非常丰富，但可供我们用的淡水资源却极度贫乏。水是生命之源，动物、植物、人类都离不开水，没有水，地球上就没有生命存在。节约用水是每个地球人的职责。请以How to Save the Water 为题写一篇短文。不少于60词。
参考范文:
(A)
Dear Tommy,
I’m going to a party today. I need your help. In the morning, would you mind watering flowers in the garden at 7: 50? At 8: 20, don’t forget to feed the fish. In the afternoon, you’d better repair my computer at 2: 30.
If you finish all these things, I will give you a big surprise.
Love,
Maria
(B)
How to Save the Water
Water is important to all living things. All animals and plants need water. Without water, there will be no life on the earth. So we should do our best to save and protect our water. We must turn off the tap after we use it. We must save every drop of water in everyday life and tell our parents and friends about it. I think it’s our duty to save water.

18. Tony作为中外文化交流的使者，从加拿大来到北京参加了一个月的“体验中国”活动。现在，他想写封信将在这里的学习和生活情况告诉远方的父母。请你根据以下提示，帮助Tony完成这封信。
提示：
1. 与中国学生相互学习，相互交流，周末参加体育活动;
2. 游览北京名胜古迹，看京剧 (Peking Opera), 品尝美食, 了解中国历史;
3. 喜欢这里的生活。
要求：1. 语言规范，字迹工整。
2. 词数在60-80之间；开头与结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Dad and Mom,
How is it going? I hope you are in good health. I enjoyed living in Beijing very much. I studied and communicated Chinese culture with Chinese students. At the weekends, I played different kinds of sports. Last week, I visited many places of interest in Beijing, and I saw Peking Opera yesterday. I enjoyed delicious food here and learned a lot about Chinese history. Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Tony
19. 根据表格内容提示，以第一人称写一篇短文。词数：70词左右。
姓名
夏韵涵
出生
1999年10月
户籍
宁德市
班级
宁德市108中学八年级五班
兴趣
集邮、唱歌等
周末活动
去公园划船、看电影
本人愿望
当一名战士（soldier）
My name is Xia Yunhan. I was born in October, 1993. I live in Ningde. I study in Class 5, Grade 8, Ningde No. 108 Middle School. I used to enjoy playing computer games, but now I like collecting stamps and singing. On weekends, I often go boating in the park, and go to the movies, too. When I grow up, I want to be a soldier. What are you going to be when you grow up?

如何保持健康? 参考例文
All of us want to be healthy. First I think sleep is important. Usually we need about eight hours’ sleep every night. Then we will feel active and full of energy during the day. A healthy diet is also important. Fresh vegetables, fruit and fish are good for us. We shouldn’t eat too many snacks and fast food, such as hamburgers and Coke. Everyone needs to do some exercise in order to keep fit, such as running and playing ball games.
Of course, there are other ways to keep healthy. I think keeping happy is very important.
我的爱好 参考例文
I’m Zhang Ming. I’m a movie fan. But I used to be a TV fan two years ago. My hobbies are changing all the time. Two years ago, I used to play computer games, but now I don’t like it. I enjoy painting pictures very much. I used to listen to music, but now I like dancing. I used to collect stamps, but now I prefer collecting seashells. I used to enjoy reading stories, but now I love reading novels. These hobbies make me happy and healthy.
1. We should do more work with l_______ time.
2. I am busy. Can you a_______ the telephone for me, please?
3. The Great Wall is one of the greatest w_______ in the world.
4. I often go to