高考英语书面表达专题二.docx

寒假专题—书面表达二
名言谚语

1．你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流，以下是某同学的句子：“Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you.”请按下列要求用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文：
针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法
举例说明理由
注意：
短文的开头已给出（不计词数）。
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: "Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you. "

【答案】One possible version:
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this; "Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. " I can't agree more with this view. It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.
Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the 'history of America. Even to this day. Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.
【解析】【考点】观点类议论文—开放式
【写作指导】试题材料新颖，贴近考生实际生活，属于半开放性话题。 对既定的话题进行讨论，考生有一定的自由发挥空间，畅所欲言，各抒己见。论点明确，论据充分是得分的关键。如能灵活运用学过而且熟练的亮点词汇、短语和句型，尽量变换句式，长短句交错使用，并且恰当地穿插一些过渡性词语，使文章自然、流畅，有较强的逻辑性，文章一定会脱颖而出。在写作时注意把握好以下几点：(1)书写规范，卷面整洁。(2)行文紧凑，过渡自然。(3)要点完整，表达清楚。(4)语法正确，时态准确。(5)用词无误，控制得当(80-120词之间)。(6)认真复查，胸有成竹。
2．请品读以下三条关于perseverance (坚持不懈) 的名言 (quote)，选择一条谈谈你对此的理解；并结合一个具体事例，说明perseverance的重要性。
A. When the world says, "Give up", Hope whispers," Try it one more time."
B. You can't go through life quitting everything. If you are going to achieve anything, you've got to stick with something.
C. Don't be discouraged. It's often the last key in the bunch that opens the lock.
注意事项：
1. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。
2. 词数为100－120左右。
【答案】见解析
【解析】
A句意：当世界说，“放弃”，希望低语，“尝试再一次。
B句意：你不能在生活中去放弃一切。如果你想实现什么，你必须坚持做某事。
C句意：不要气馁。它通常在打开锁最后一把钥匙。
参考范文：
Perseverance is what it takes to achieve one's success. Without perseverance, one may find it hard to realize his dream.
Personally, I prefer quote A, which asks us not to give up but stick with what we're pursuing. Only by trying again and again can we make it at last.
Take Madam Curie for example. To fulfill her academic ambition, she overcame many hardships to go abroad for further education. After her husband's death, she carried on her research work despite a lot of difficulties. Finally, her continuous efforts paid off. She was awarded two Nobel prizes.
So, never give up easily when faced with failure. Hold on to your dream and you'll surely enjoy a sense of achievement.
3．美国已故大演说家、”成功学家鼻祖”罗曼·文森特·皮尔有一句名言：”Attitude Is Everything”。请你结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈拥有正确的人生态度的重要性,词数120左右。
【答案】
As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. If we take a positive attitude and keep on trying , we will achieve our goals in the end.
  I can’t agree more with this view. At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed. Then I realized that I had to do well in English to go to my favorite university. I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me. With my teacher’s help, I improved my English gradually.
  My story shows that if we have a good attitude and keep on trying, we will be able to overcome difficulty and move on. It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.
【解析】
试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文主题明确，夹叙夹议，在语言上用了一些常见的短语：can’t agree more with不能再同意了，take a positive attitude采取积极的态度， With my teacher’s help 在老师的帮助下，句式上也是富有变化：As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. 这句话用了宾语从句， At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed.和I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me., 这两句话用了定语从句， It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.这句话用了强调句。
考点：考查开放式作文
4．请阅读下面的名言，并谈谈自己对友情的看法。
“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
谈感想 结合自己一次经历 以此为题
要求：1.内容必须包括： 
2.词数：120词。
【答案】Friendship is a kind of human relations. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.
Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. No man can make the most of his life without friends as he goes along.
Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends. Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart. Real friends can share all our sorrows and doubts all our joys.While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. Then we should treat our friends with honesty. We should forgive their failures and do our best to help them.
In short, when we have established friendship, we ought to treasure it by means of words and deeds. Only in this way can we develop real friendship in our life.
【解析】
试题分析：考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】Friendship is a kind of human relations. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. 这句话是用了省略句，With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.这句话用了with复合结构， Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. 这句话用了定语从句， Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends. 这句话用了现在分词做状语，Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart.这句话用了定语从句， While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. 这句话用了省略句Only in this way can we develop real friendship in our life.这句话用了倒装句。
考点：考查开放式作文

【答案】He who makes no mistakes makes nothing.
　　Many people around us are afraid of making mistakes. They even feel it a shame to make a
mistake. That’s completely wrong. Other people, however, think that making mistakes is an
essential part of growing. They don't care about making mistakes, they just want to experiment
and obtain experience.
As a matter of fact, no one never makes any mistakes. Children would fall down many times
before they can walk and no one could become an expert until he has failed over and over again.
As far as I am concerned, being afraid of making mistakes is a mistake itself. Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress. Thomas Edison could not have become a scientist if he had not made thousands of mistakes. Making mistakes for pursuing truth is much better than doing nothing. That is, he who makes no mistakes makes nothing.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇开放性作文，题目给出了一个话题，要求结合实例解释这个谚语。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】They even feel it a shame to make a mistake.这句话用的是it做形式宾语，Other people, however, think that making mistakes is an essential part of growing.这句话用了插入语和动名词做主语， Children would fall down many times before they can walk and no one could become an expert until he has failed over and over again.这句话用了两个时间状语从句， Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.这句话用了only的倒装句，. That is, he who makes no mistakes makes nothing. 这句话是一句谚语，还有文章还用As far as I am concerned,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查开放式作文
6．通过描述一件你亲身经历的事情来说明主题“Honesty makes a difference”，要求120词以上。
Honesty makes a difference
【答案】
Honesty makes a difference
　　“Who did this？” asked my teacher once more. She seldom became angry， but she was this time. She held up a piece of broken glass and asked， “Who broke this window？”
I was the one who broke the window. I had not meant to do it. It was caused by an inaccurate throw of a basketball. If I admitted it， I would be in a lot of trouble. How would I be able to pay for a big window like that？ I didn’t even get an allowance.“My father is going to have a fit，” I thought. I didn’t want to raise my hand. But then a force much stronger than me changed my mind. I had to tell the truth.
I couldn’t believe what happened the next day！ My teacher went to my desk with a book I was longing for and said， “You will not be punished as long as you remember that I am not rewarding you for your misdeed， but for your honesty.”
The book is gone and all that remains of that day is my memory and the lesson my teacher taught me！
【解析】略

【答案】As the saying goes, behind each successful child is a great mother. Nobody can achieve success without parental love and Mother’s devotion plays an especially critical role in our life. Mothers dedicate almost everything we need, which is a necessary part on our road to great achievements.
My mother always gives me a helping hand in both my studies and my life. Since she is a math teacher, whenever I meet with any difficulty in the subject, she is always patient to give me guidance. On the other hand, she takes care of me in my life like other devoted mothers. Whenever I fall ill she spares no efforts to help me recover from the illnesses. It’s impossible for me to grow up and achieve success in my life without my mother.
In fact, no matter whether you are successful or not, mothers always stand behind you and back you up. Everyone knows that mother’s love is just like a flowing river, and it keeps running forever, pushing and carrying you forward to your destination of life and work. And what we can do is never to stop halfway. Only in this way can we treasure and repay the sacrifice and devotion of our mothers.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇开放性作文，给出了一个话题，“一个成功孩子的背后是一个伟大的母亲”，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】As the saying goes, behind each successful child is a great mother. 这句话是非限制性定语从句， Mothers dedicate almost everything we need, which is a necessary part on our road to great achievements.这句话用了定语从句， Since she is a math teacher, whenever I meet with any difficulty in the subject, she is always patient to give me guidance. 这句话用了让步状语从句和原因状语从句， Whenever I fall ill she spares no efforts to help me recover from the illnesses. 这句话也是让步状语从句和词组：spares no efforts to do，It’s impossible for me to grow up and achieve success in my life without my mother.这句话用了it做形式主语，.And what we can do is never to stop halfway. 这句话里面有主语从句，Only in this way can we treasure and repay the sacrifice and devotion of our mothers.这句话用了倒装句，还有文章用了 On the other hand,这样的词使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查开放式作文
8．根据下面中文提示写一篇100词左右的短文。
俗话说：早起的鸟儿有虫吃（The early bird will catch worms）。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明：凡事要早做规划；不辞辛苦，辛勤劳作；不断追求；方能有所收获，获得成功。
【答案】
The early bird will catch worms
An old saying "The early bird will catch worms" reminds us that if people want to get something useful and want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties. Also they mustn't give up pursuing their ambition.
I was good at English, but I couldn't pass the exam, for I wasn't prepared well before the examination. I had many things to solve at that time. As I met the complex things, I was at a loss. The reason was that I had no plan and involved in many things and didn't study more hard, so I failed.
In short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying.
【解析】本题是一篇相对开放的开放性作文，只给出了一个中心思想，要求考生根据这个思想进行结合自身实际进行合理的拓展，在写作过程中要注意使用高级词组与连接词让文章更流畅。
9．Life is hard, and you are sure to meet much difficulty. You can't go through life quitting everything. If you are going to achieve anything, you've got to stick with something. 请以Never give up为题,结合自己的生活经历，谈谈你对它的理解。
注意：
1．内容必须结合生活中的一个事例，文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2．词数：120左右。

【答案】
One possible version：
Perseverance is what it takes to achieve one's success, without which, one may find it hard to realize his dream.
Take an example of mine, who frequently failed in the dictations given by my English teacher. As the times of failure grew, the sense of inferiority accumulated sharply which led to low spirits and my ignorance of English learning. It is my English teacher who encouraged me not to give up that prevented the terrible feeling spreading. With the inspiration, I worked much harder and determined to stick with my study. Had I given up easily, I wouldn’t have made such great progress.
So, never give up easily when faced with failure. Hold on to your dream and you'll surely enjoy a sense of achievement.
【解析】
试题分析：根据要求可知，本篇作文为话题作文。通过提示语可总结出命题者让学生写的话题即never give up永不言弃。所以在结构上可以采取三段式，第一段用两到三句话引出话题What our life will be like is based on what we actually do at present。第二段按照命题要求自然插入实际生活事例，第三段总结概括，进一步深化主题。在列举事例时注意时态和长短句结合，搭配适当的过渡词使文章衔接自然。最后总结点题时注意呼应第一段内容和第二段观点。
【亮点说明】
本篇范文开篇点题，直接引入话题并表明自己的观点Perseverance is what it takes to achieve one's success, without which, one may find it hard to realize his dream。这个句子十分巧妙，既有what引导表语从句，又体现了非限制性定语从句的用法。开篇就让阅卷老师眼前一亮。文体部分以Take an example of mine自然过渡，引出生活实例，衔接自然。在描述事例的过程中长短句结合，各种句型灵活运用，如强调句：It is my English teacher who encouraged me not to give up that prevented the terrible feeling spreading. 虚拟语气和倒装句：Had I given up easily, I wouldn’t have made such great progress. 祈使句：Hold on to your dream and you'll surely enjoy a sense of achievement.这些都是重要的高中语法点，作者以make sentence的形式表现出来，显示了深厚的功底，是文章的特色。
10．如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."
- Sir Winston, Churchill
内容要求：
1．你对该引语的理解：
2．你的相关经历：
3．恰当的结尾。
注意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数：
2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：
3．词数：120左右。
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that__________________________
【答案】
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. However