初中英语书面表达常考话题审题指导与高分范文.docx

一、题型分析书面表达是中考中一个比较难的、也是必考的题型，要求考生根据题目的要求写一段80词左右的短文。书面表达主要考查考生综合运用英语的能力，同时考查考生是否掌握所学过的语法知识、时态、句型和结构等。书面表达的话题一般都与学生熟悉的校园生活相关，并且紧贴单元话题，也会结合当下热点，因此要求考生不仅要打好基础，注重课内话题的训练，也要培养思维的发散性和解决问题的能力。二、解题技巧考生在考场上，可以按照以下几个步骤来完成书面表达题。第一步：认真审题，明确要求。审题是写好书面表达题的关键。通读试题所给的每一个字，观察所给的每一幅图画，从而明确该文的题目要求，判断作文的类型、特点，了解作文的重要内容，力求写作切中题意。1.确定主题。通过仔细观察、认真分析，确定文章的主题，然后再围绕主题进行写作，以满足中考“切中题意”的要求。2.确定格式。文体不同，格式也不一样。书信有书信的格式，便条有便条的格式。同样都是通知，口头通知与书面通知格式也不相同。因此，应根据不同的文体来确定写作时所采用的相应格式。3.确定人称。因搞错人称而失分，实在令人可惜。所以，在动笔之前应先确定是使用第一、二人称还是第三人称。4.审提示中所交代的时间、地点、人物及人物关系。第二步：依据要点，草拟提纲。根据内容提示，在草纸上列出各要点所用的单词、短语以及句式等。注意这是组织语言、形成短文的基础步骤。这一步骤的要求是：根据内容提示简单地列出提纲，将所需的语言材料准备好。可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型；暂不考虑动词的时态、语态、第三人称单数等词形变化。第三步：扩展成句，连句成篇。将上述所列出的单词、短语等扩展成句。注意时态、语态的正确运用，并适当使用一些连接词将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应结构紧凑，前后连贯。第四步：仔细检查，认真修改。检查修改是书面表达解题过程中必不可少的一个重要环节。检查修改的原则是大处着眼，小处着手。具体应从词法、句法、语篇三个方面入手仔细检查并认真修改。1.从词法角度。主要检查词汇的运用是否妥当；拼写是否有误；名词、代词的数和格是否正确；词性是否混淆；词与词之间是否“搭配不当”；用词是否重复等。2.从句法角度。主要检查句子结构是否完整；动词时态、语态是否正确；主谓是否一致等。3.从语篇角度。主要检查文体格式是否正确；字数是否符合要求；要点是否齐全；语句是否简洁；上下文是否连贯、符合逻辑等。第五步：认真书写，讲究规范。中考书面表达对答卷的书写问题有明确具体的要求。因此，在考试中同学们应注意书写的美观性，千万不能因为书写问题影响自己的得分。另外，整洁干净的卷面，规范、美观的字体会给阅卷者好的印象，可以得到“印象分”。三、审题指导(一)写人叙事类第1篇I am proud of.提示：在你的学习和生活中，一定有你引以为傲的人、物和事，请以“I am proud of.”为题写一篇短文，如“I am proud of my mother/ sister/dream /school/ family/ being a student.”。要求：1.补全并抄写题目，短文80词左右；2.语言流畅、内容连贯、书写规范、卷面整洁；3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。_【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1.首先应补充题目，介绍一位让自己引以为傲的人，或者一件引以为傲的物或事，故文体为说明文或者记叙文；2.人称主要用第一人称，介绍目前的状态用一般现在时，叙述过去的事用一般过去时；3.词数80左右，不得使用真实姓名和校名。【高分范文】I am proud ofmy motherMy mother is thirty-eight years old. She wears glasses and has long curly hair. She is tall and very beautiful.My mother works in a hospital. She is a doctor. She always looks after those lonely patients in the hospitalin her spare time. Although she is always busy, shetries her best to look afterour family. She can cook delicious food, and she usuallygets upearly to prepare breakfast for us in the morning.This is my mother. I love her very much, and I am proud of her.第2篇A Regretful Thing提示：三年的初中生活就要结束，崭新的高中生活即将到来。回首过去，你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失败的遗憾。请以“A Regretful Thing”为题写一篇英语短文。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。_【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1.本文要求叙述一件遗憾的事情，故文体为记叙文；2.记叙过去的事情，时态用一般过去时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主；3.词数不少于60词；不得出现真实人名和校名。【高分范文】A Regretful ThingIn the past three years, the life in middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.Xiao Ming was one of my good friends. One day, a little thing caused a serious quarrel between us.From then on,we didnt talk with each other. I hoped to make peace with him, but I finally failed to do that because Iwas afraid oflosing face. Not until he moved to another city with his parents did I know Ilost my friendforever.What I have learned from the matter is that if we realize our mistakes，we should correct them at once, or we may regret.(二）做法建议类第3篇Lets Learn Together as a Team提示：作为一名中学生，我们不仅需要独立意识，还要有团队合作意识。那到底如何才能做到团队合作呢？请你以“Lets Learn Together as a Team”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。_【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1.本文要求以“Lets Learn Together as a Team”为题，属于建议做法类，故文体为说明文；2.本文要求以中学生的口吻进行写作，所以应使用第一人称；时态以一般现在时为主；3.词数不少于60词；不得出现真实姓名和校名。【高分范文】Lets Learn Together as a TeamAs students, we should be independent, but we still need to learn as a team. Therefore, we should know how to work together.First of all,we shouldbe friendly toothers andready tohelp others when they arein need.Whats more, its normal thateveryone has his/her own ideas. When we have different opinions about a problem, we should discuss it togetherinstead of arguing witheach other. Finally, we shouldshareour happiness and sadnesswitheach other.If we do this, we will become much happier. I hope everyone can havea sense of teamworkandgrow uptogether!第4篇How to Protect Our Eyes提示：现在，戴眼镜的学生越来越多，因此国家把每年6月6日定为爱眼日。请你结合自己的体会，以“How to Protect Our Eyes”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1.本文题目是“How to Protect Our Eyes”，要求考生介绍如何保护眼睛，故文体为说明文。2.考生在组织写作思路时，要从眼睛的重要性以及如何保护眼睛两方面进行考虑。3.谈论自己对保护眼睛的建议时采用第一人称，时态采用一般现在时。4.词数不少于60词；不得出现真实姓名和校名。【高分范文】How to Protect Our EyesAs we all know, eyes are the windows of the soul. We shouldtry our bestto protect them. Here are some suggestions.First, eat some foods thatare good foreyes,such ascarrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, its helpful to lookfar awayfrom time to timeafter studying for a long time. Finally,make sureto have a good habit of using eyes. Dont read books or use cell phonesin bed.In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.（三）梦想计划类第5篇My Dream提示：梦想是浩瀚宇宙中的一颗星，是五彩花海中一朵芬芳艳丽的鲜花，是广阔海洋里的一朵浪花。梦想引领着我们一路前行，每个人的心目中都有自己的梦想。请以“My Dream”为题，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享你的梦想。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。_【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1.本文以“My Dream”为题，介绍自己的梦想，故文体为说明文；2.写作时主要使用一般将来时描述自己的梦想，也可使用一般现在时表达自己现在的想法；3.因为介绍自己的梦想，故本文主要使用第一人称；4.词数不少于60个，文中不得使用真实姓名和校名。【高分范文】My DreamEveryone has his or her own dream.So do I. I want to be a football player when Igrow up. I think playing football is really interesting.How can I make my dreamcome true?First, Im going to study hard so that I willbe good atall the subjects. Next, Im going to go to a college to study football after I finish high school. Then, I will finda part-time jobto practice playing football. Finally, Im going to go to a famous football city where there will be lots of famous football teams.In a word,I believe that the man who holds on to his dream willbe able toachieve it one day.（四）说明介绍类第6篇The Changes in.提示：初中三年，每个人都发生了变化，而我们周围的事物也在悄无声息地改变着。请以“The Changes in.”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你周围的变化。要求：1.请把题目补充完整；2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。_【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1.本文要介绍自己周围的改变，故文体为说明文；2.考生在选择周围事物的变化时，可以从自己熟悉的地方入手，如：学校、家乡等；3.写作时以第一人称为主，涉及其他人时用第三人称；4.讲述过去的事情应用一般过去时，抒发个人情感及感悟时用一般现在时；5.词数不少于60词；不得出现真实姓名和校名。【高分范文】The Changes inMy HometownMy hometown is a small mountain citylocated inYunnan.In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere.Whats worse,the transportation was inconvenient, so few visitors came here.Now great changes havetaken placein my hometown. The environment has become much better. The mountains have turned greener, and the rivers are clearer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. The houses are larger and brighter. Many people have their own cars. Every year,thousands oftourists fromall over the worldcome to visit my hometown.Im sure my hometown willbecome more