高中英语作文道歉信省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

第1页 A Letter of Apology第2页道歉信文体概述（道歉信文体概述（Letter of apology)道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，给他人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔给他人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅信件。通常包含以下礼道歉并请求对方原谅信件。通常包含以下三部分内容：三部分内容：1.开门见山，表明写信目标，表示歉意。开门见山，表明写信目标，表示歉意。2.说明出现差错原因，提出填补办法。说明出现差错原因，提出填补办法。3.再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到了解再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到了解(语言语言要真挚，解释理由要真实要真挚，解释理由要真实)。第3页惯用语块惯用语块1.因某事向某人道歉因某事向某人道歉 _2.向向说对不起说对不起 _3.接收我道歉接收我道歉 _4.为某事原谅某人为某事原谅某人 _5.并非有意做某事并非有意做某事 _ have no intention to do sth.apologize to sb.for sth./make an apology to sb.for sth.say sorry toaccept my apologyforgive sb.for sth.第4页6.填补；赔偿填补；赔偿 _7.赔偿；偿还赔偿；偿还 _8.给你带来不便给你带来不便 _9.给你带来许多麻烦给你带来许多麻烦 _10.愈加小心愈加小心 _be more carefulmake up forpay for/compensate forcause you inconveniencecause you much trouble第5页11.犯这么愚蠢错误犯这么愚蠢错误 _12.应该受到责备应该受到责备 _13.负担责任负担责任 _14.难以接收后果难以接收后果 _15.下不为例下不为例 _never let it happen againmake such a stupid mistakebe to blamebe responsible for/shoulder/undertake the responsibilityan unacceptable result/consequence第6页写作三步曲写作三步曲第7页Step 1：审题审题养成重养成重视审题习惯视审题习惯。思索问题样题样题分析分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章题材是什么？怎样安排信息点次序？(order)动作是什么时候发生？(when)第一人称第一人称一封道歉信一封道歉信说理逻辑性说理逻辑性普通现在时普通现在时第8页93.提出补救方法提出补救方法 2.说明详细原因说明详细原因道歉信写作4步走写信普通要求写信普通要求1.内容要简单内容要简单对于题中所给内容：全对于题中所给内容：全方面方面对于自己发挥内容：简对于自己发挥内容：简单单写熟悉，会写！写熟悉，会写！2.结构要清楚结构要清楚开头段：开头段：中间段：中间段：结尾段结尾段:3.语言要精彩语言要精彩：4.注意内容之间连接注意内容之间连接1.表示歉意表示歉意总结提升总结提升4.再次致歉望了解再次致歉望了解造句能力+高分套话第9页10lBasic structure and expressions第一段第一段:简明说明写信目标，为自己过失表示歉意，希简明说明写信目标，为自己过失表示歉意，希望得到对方谅解。望得到对方谅解。道歉表示：1.I feel sorry for my failure to 2.I am awfully sorry that I cannot 3.I am very sorry for 4.I am writing to express my sincere apology for my 5.I regret to inform you that I am unable to 6.I feel guilty for what I have done to you.pick you up at the airportattend your party.my rudeness/thoughtlessness/bad manners.第10页11l第二段：详细说明当初情况，解释原因，语气第二段：详细说明当初情况，解释原因，语气要诚恳。要诚恳。1.Now let me explain what happened to me that day.2.I had intended to 3.I am afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you.4.I am to blame for this silly mistake.5.Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.6.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.第11页12l第三段：提出补救方法，详细提出自己想法，第三段：提出补救方法，详细提出自己想法，希望能填补过失，消除误会。希望能填补过失，消除误会。1.In order to remove our misunderstanding,I would like to invite.2.To make up for my fault,I will3.To compensate for your loss,I decide to.4.I wish you could give me a chance to make up for my fault.5.I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes.第12页13l第四段：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。1.Please accept my most sincere apology again.2.I promise that I will never make such a stupid mistake again.3.I assure you that it will never happen again.4.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.5.Once again,Im sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.第13页 Step 3：写作：写作第14页15道歉信模板一Dear Bob,I am truly sorry that _（道歉原因）（道歉原因）.The reason is that_（介绍原因）（介绍原因）.Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 第15页习作观赏习作观赏Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week.The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week,but unfortunately yesterday until Icame back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.I promise to pay for the lost of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame.I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿赔偿)for the missed book.I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.第16页习作观赏习作观赏Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week.The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week,but unfortunately yesterday until Icame back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.I promise to pay for the lost of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame.I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿赔偿)for the missed book.I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误过程第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误过程第二段：承诺填补或赔偿及办法第二段：承诺填补或赔偿及办法第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误第17页习作修改习作修改(做短文改错做短文改错)Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week.The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week,but unfortunately yesterday until I came back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.I promise to pay for the lost of the book.borrowed it when loss 第18页I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame.I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿赔偿)for the missed book.I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.Yours sincerely,Li Mingto on missing inconvenience carelessness 第19页诵读经典范文诵读经典范文Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week.The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.I read it every evening and intend to finish it next week,but unfortunately yesterday when Icame back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.I promise to pay for the loss of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and I am to blame.I will go to your place on Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿赔偿)for the missing book.I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble caused by my carelessness.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误过程第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误过程第二段：承诺填补或赔偿及办法第二段：承诺填补或赔偿及办法第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误第20页诵读经典范文诵读经典范文Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week.The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.I read it every evening and intend to finish it next week,but unfortunately yesterday when Icame back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.I promise to pay for the loss of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and I am to blame.I will go to your place on Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿赔偿)for the missing book.I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble caused by my carelessness.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.第21页Lets take actions!Write an a letter of apology in 15 minutes.第22页课堂练习课堂练习 假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训，回国时因为慌忙，把房东培训，回国时因为慌忙，把房东Bob音乐光盘夹在音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信，写一封道歉信，关键点以下：关键点以下：1.对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。2.提出处理方法。提出处理方法。3.再次请求原谅。再次请求原谅。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右。左右。2.能够适当增加细节，以能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。第23页 A good essay should plete 2.coherent3.accurate4.various 5.neat第24页Dear Bob,I am writing to make an apology to you for the fact that I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week.Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage.I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England,so I believe you can find another one in your local store.How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it?If you cannot find a similar one,I would send it back to you through a post office.And if there are any other solutions you like,please let me know.I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness.Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua第25页Homework：课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华，你美国老师假定你是李华，你美国老师Mr.Evans要求你要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史讲座。你因故不能们明天下午去听一个英国历史讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向参加。请你写一封信向Mr.Evans道歉并说明情况。道歉并说明情况。关键点以下：关键点以下：1.表示歉意。表示歉意。2.理由：父亲去北京出差，母亲生病住院需要人理由：父亲去北京出差，母亲生病住院需要人照料。照料。3.问询：是否有录音，方便补听讲座。问询：是否有录音，方便补听讲座。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右。左右。2.能够适当增加细节，以能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。第26页Dear Mr.Evans,I am indeed sorry to tell you that I wont be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon.My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now.I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days.How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it?If you cannot find a similar one,I would send it back to you through a post office.And if there are any other solutions you like,please let me know.第27页 However,I am actually very interested in English society and history.I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded,and if so,could I borrow the tape?It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.Please allow me to say sorry again.I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.Yours sincerely,Li Hua第28页套用句式套用句式1.我写这封信是因我写这封信是因向你致歉。向你致歉。2.请接收我真诚道歉。请接收我真诚道歉。1.I am writing to apologize to you for /I am writing to say sorry to you for2.Please accept my sincere apology.第29页3.对于我说话对于我说话/做事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相做事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非有意要信，我并非有意要4.我真心希望你能了解我处境我真心希望你能了解我处境/设身处地地为我考设身处地地为我考虑，并接收我道歉。虑，并接收我道歉。5.对于造成不便我再次表示歉意。对于造成不便我再次表示歉意。3.I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did,but please believe I had no intention to5.Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.4.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.第30页