高中英语说明文概要写作省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

概要写作概要写作第1页what the summary writing is 1requests of a good summary2how to write a good summary3After this class,we will be able to know:4skills of summary writing第2页Asummaryisashortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsomething,notthedetails.牛津高阶英汉双解词典 It is a brief,complete and objective restatement(重述重述)of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.01What is a summary?第3页 提炼提炼关键点关键点 整合整合 concordance 删除细节删除细节 omit details删除详细例子删除详细例子 omit specific examples防止重复防止重复 avoid repetition 同义转换同义转换:近义词、同义词等替换近义词、同义词等替换语言语言 句子重构句子重构:调整词类、语态调整词类、语态(active voice;passive voice)等等逻辑：逻辑：衔接（照应、替换、省略、连接和词汇衔接衔接（照应、替换、省略、连接和词汇衔接）02Skills of Summary Writing第4页a 60-word summaryuse your own wordsin the third person(第三人称第三人称)with a brief sentenceconnection between sentences(句子衔接句子衔接)03Requests of Summary Writing第5页Step 1.Read for the style,topic sentence and structureStep 2.Find the key information of each paragraphStep 3.Paraphrase(改写改写)Step 4.Write the draft(初稿初稿)and better it04Steps of Summary Writing第6页 Miss Li is a graceful teacher who is always ready to help students in need.She helps students who need improve their English.She looks after students who dont feel well.Miss li,a teacher,is willing to give a hand to students needing help.第7页第8页Style：Topic sentence：Structure：ANarration BArgumentation CExposition Have you ever wondered where they come from and what they mean?1 1 A.2.3.4 B.2.3 4 Step 1 Read for the style,topic and structure exposition第9页Find:the first/last sentence/join them togetherStep 2.Find the key information of each paragraph第10页 Theresaquestionthathasmillionsofcorrectanswersintheworld.Thatquestionis“Whatsyourname?”Everyonegivesadifferentanswer,andeveryoneiscorrect.However,haveyoueverwonderedwherethenamescomefromandwhattheymean?Somepeoplegivetheirchildrennamesthatmeansgoodthings.Clarameans“bright”;Beatricemeans“onewhogiveshappiness”;Donaldmeans“worldruler”；Leonardmeans“asbraveasalion”.Theearliestfirstnames,orsurnames,weretakenfromplacenames.AfamilywiththenameBrookorBrooksprobablylivednearabrook(小溪).SomeonewhowascalledLongstreetprobablylivedonalong,pavedroad.Sometimespeopleareknownforthecoloroftheirhairorskin,orsize,ortheirspecialabilities.WhenthereweretwomenwhowerenamedJohninthesamevillage,theJohnwiththegrayhairprobablybecameJohnGray.OrtheJohnwhowastallcouldcallhimselfJohnTallman.JohnFishwasprobablyanexcellentswimmerandJohnLongfootwasprobablyafastrunneroragooddancer.Step 2.Find the key information of each paragraphexamplesexamplesexamples第11页iscorrect.However,haveyoueverwonderedwherethenamescomefromandwhattheymean?Step 3:Paraphrase(改写改写)originsmeaningscome into beingwherethenamescomefromandwhattheymeanHowever thoughas第12页 As to peoples names,various origins and meanings are involved.Faced with a variety of names,people may be curious about how they come into being.Step 3:Paraphrase Various as peoples names are,they have developed gradually in some common ways.整合、提炼第13页 ParaphraseParaphrase supporting points 1,2&3 on your own and then shareshare them with your desk mate.第14页Somepeoplegivetheirchildrennamesthatmeansgoodthings.Step 3:Paraphrase Some peoples first names may carry family members wishes and blessings(祝福祝福).).第15页Theearliestfirstnames,orsurnames,weretakenfromplacenames.Step 3:Paraphrase Place names are where people got their inspirations(灵感).第16页Sometimespeopleareknownforthecoloroftheirhairorskin,orsize,ortheirspecialabilities.Step 3:Paraphrase Other origins include peoples hair or skin,their sizes as well as their special abilities.第17页 1.As to peoples names,various origins and meanings are.2.wishes and blessings(祝福祝福)3.Place names are where.4.Other origins include.Step 4:write the first draft write the first draft and betterbetter it 表转折：表转折：but,however,though,although表递进：表递进：in addition to,not only.but also,besides,whats more表对比：表对比：meanwhile,on the other hand第18页ChecklistWhether does he shep begin with a sentence that states the main idea?p use his/her own words?p avoid adding his/her own comments?p use restatement to emphasize the main idea and unify his/her writing?p any mistakes in spelling,grammar and punctuation?If so,please underline and correct them.第19页第20页 Multiple as peoples names are,they have evolved in some common ways.Some first names originate from family members sincere hopes and blessings.Place names are where people got inspiration for some early surnames.Meanwhile,other early surnames are related to peoples hair or skin,their sizes as well as their special abilities.第21页WhatRequestsHow第22页第23页Stylesargumentation 1narration2exposition3 议论文议论文 记叙文记叙文 说明文说明文第24页