高考英语书面表达写作技巧教学省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

第1页词汇词汇,句型句型（高级）和语法（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了全部覆盖了全部关键点关键点 2.应用了较多语法结构和应用了较多语法结构和词汇词汇 3.有效地使用了语句间连有效地使用了语句间连接成份，使全文结构紧凑接成份，使全文结构紧凑 4.语言得体语言得体关关键键点点全全连连接接词词怎样算是一篇好文章？怎样算是一篇好文章？语言地道，语言地道，规范规范第2页a compositiontopic sentence （主题句）（主题句）supporting sentences （扩展句）（扩展句）ending （结尾句（结尾句）过渡词：过渡词：first,second,finally,and,besides,also,but,however,whats more 第3页Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich.第4页一一 改变句子开头方式，改变句子开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最终再加一个状语。头，接着是谓语、宾语，最终再加一个状语。能够把状语置于句首能够把状语置于句首.The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.Hungry,the boy hurried home.The boy,hungry,hurried home.第5页二二.Transformation of sentences in writing(写作中句型转换写作中句型转换)A.合并为简单句合并为简单句1.把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为分词短语He had finished supper.He went out to have a walk then.Having finished supper,he went out to have a walk.第6页二二.Transformation of sentences in writing(写作中句型转换写作中句型转换)2.把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语He was brought in.His hands were tied behind his back.He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back.第7页 B.合并为复合句合并为复合句1.The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.第8页2 In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful.which In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast,makes peoples lives convenient,pleasant 第9页C.把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句1.把从句改为分词短语把从句改为分词短语 She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies.Having finished her studies,she was anxious to find a job.2.把从句改为介词短语把从句改为介词短语I insisted that he should go.I insisted on him going.第10页三三.在整篇文章中，防止只使用一两个在整篇文章中，防止只使用一两个句式，要灵活利用以下结构：句式，要灵活利用以下结构：倒装句倒装句强调句强调句主从复合句主从复合句分词状语分词状语With 复合结构复合结构第11页Though he is wealthy,he works hard.Wealthy as he is,he works hard.In spite of/Despite his wealth,he works hard.第12页He didnt get up until 7 oclock.It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.第13页I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to/struck/came to me.I came up with a good idea.注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调词来代替一注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。些单词，以增加文采。四四.use“complicated/advanced words”第14页A.Second,twenty years ago,teenagers listened to music with tape recorders.Differently,today we use mp3,mp4 and even mp5 which are easy to take.B.Another change is in communication.Instead of writing letters,teenagers nowadays prefer writing e-mails or calling to keep in touch with friends.C.First,teenagers of twenty years ago learn from Lei Feng and Zhang Haidi,while now we consider Bill Gates and as our role models.D.What great changes they are!E.Great changes have taken place in teenagers life during the past twenty years.Correct Order:_E C A B D第15页一，改变句子开头方式一，改变句子开头方式二，句型转换二，句型转换A.合并为简单句合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语B.合并为复合句合并为复合句C.把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句把从句改为分词短语把从句改为分词短语把从句改为介词短语把从句改为介词短语三，防止只使用一两个句式，三，防止只使用一两个句式，要灵活利用诸如倒装句、要灵活利用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with 复合结构复合结构等等.四，注意使用高级词汇四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。代替一些单词，以增加文采。五五.有效使用连接词有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。构紧凑。第16页 1 汉式英语汉式英语 2 句式单一句式单一 平铺直叙平铺直叙 3 基础词汇掌握不牢基础词汇掌握不牢 4 书写不规范书写不规范Common mistakes第17页第18页第19页第20页make sentences 3 determine what to write1copy6check 5Writing steps:4 edit2 think out the key words第21页1.格式格式 2.人称人称3.时态时态 4.关键关键点点5.语法语法 6.字数字数 7.书写书写第22页书面表示（满分书面表示（满分30分）分）你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，主题为：主题为：保护环境从我做起。保护环境从我做起。请你依据下列图所表示写一篇英语短文。请你依据下列图所表示写一篇英语短文。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；左右，开头语已为你写好；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。What can I do for our environment?Everyone can do something for our environment.第23页save electricityturn off the lightsprotect our forestsuse paper wiselynot use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticksuse both sides of paper第24页Do youinclude enough information?use proper linking words?make any spelling or grammar errors?Is your handwriting clear enough to read?第25页第26页What can I do for our environment?Everyone can do something for our environment.To love the environment is to love ourselves.As to me,I will try to save electricity in my daily life by remembering to turn off the lights when I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening.In order to protect our forests,I will use paper wisely.It is both sides of paper that should be used whenever it is possible.Whats more,never will I use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood.第27页 In a word,with doing all these small things,we will not only improve our environment but also help make our world a better place to live in.第28页Rome is not built in one day.Rome is not built in one day.Practice makes perfect!Practice makes perfect!第29页