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第1页二卷少失分二卷少失分,一卷争满分，一卷争满分，得阅读者得天下得阅读者得天下!得分意识得分意识:第2页平时要求：平时要求：1.格式格式 2.人称人称3.关键点关键点 4.时时态态5.字数字数 6.语法语法7.书写书写第3页 1 汉式英语汉式英语 2 句式单一句式单一 平铺直叙平铺直叙 3 基础词汇掌握不牢基础词汇掌握不牢 4 书写不规范书写不规范Common mistakes第4页1.Someone could hardly receive the result.So they lose their heart.2.We should find out our poor points in our studies and throw them away.3.I think we should think more good thinks.4.dare not raise their heads before the other students.5.keep a normal heart(口口)keep a normal state of mind keep an easy mind take it easy 1 汉式英语汉式英语第5页vWhen we fail,we are very sad.We are in low spirits.We dont believe ourselves and we wont work hard at our lessons.vFaced with failure,some of them feel depressed all the time.Whats worse,they throw doubt upon their own ability and no longer work hard at their studies.2.句式单一句式单一 平铺直叙平铺直叙第6页 4 书写不规范书写不规范第7页第8页第9页词汇词汇,句型句型（高级）和语法多（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了全部覆盖了全部关键点关键点 2.应用了较多语法结构和应用了较多语法结构和词汇词汇 3.有效地使用了语句间连有效地使用了语句间连接成份，使全文结构紧凑接成份，使全文结构紧凑 4.语言得体语言得体关关键键点点全全连连接接词词怎样算是一篇好文章？怎样算是一篇好文章？语言地道，语言地道，规范规范第10页 1 汉式英语汉式英语 2 句式单一句式单一 平铺直叙平铺直叙 3 基础词汇掌握不牢基础词汇掌握不牢 4 书写不规范书写不规范Common mistakes第11页一一、改变句子开头方式，、改变句子开头方式，不要一味地都是主语不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最终再加一个状语。开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最终再加一个状语。能够把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。能够把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.Hungry,the boy hurried home.The boy,hungry,hurried home.第12页二二.Transformation of sentences in writing(写作中句型转换写作中句型转换)1.把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为分词短语 He had finished supper.He went out to have a walk then.Having finished supper,he went out to have a walk.A.合并为简单句合并为简单句第13页二二.Transformation of sentences in writing(写作中句型转换写作中句型转换)2.把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语 He was brought in.His hands were tied behind his back.He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back.第14页 B.合并为复合句合并为复合句1.The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.第15页2.In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful.which In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast,makes peoples lives convenient,pleasant 第16页With the development of so that Beijing,peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient,pleasant and colorful.Nowadays,Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient,pleasant and colorful.第17页C.把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies.Having finished her studies,she was anxious to find a job.1.把从句改为分词短语把从句改为分词短语第18页C.把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句2.把从句改为介词短语把从句改为介词短语I insisted that he should go.I insisted on him going.第19页三三.在整篇文章中，防止只使用一两个句式，在整篇文章中，防止只使用一两个句式，要灵活利用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复要灵活利用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等合句、分词状语等.Though he is wealthy,he works hard.Wealthy as he is,he works hard.In spite of/Despite his wealth,he works hard.第20页三三.在整篇文章中，防止只使用一两个句式，在整篇文章中，防止只使用一两个句式，要灵活利用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复要灵活利用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等合句、分词状语等.He didnt get up until 7 oclock.It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.第21页As soon as we arrived at the village,we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.On arriving at the village，we were warmly.The moment we arrived at the village,we were第22页We were warmly welcomed by thevillagers immediately we arrived at the village.No sooner had we arrived at the village than we Hardly had we arrived at the village when we.第23页四四.using“complicated/advanced words”注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调词来代替一注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。些单词，以增加文采。Dont worry about your expensesfor university education,and we will try to help you.and we will make the greatesteffort/do our best/try every meansto help you.第24页At that time the taxi driver had to ask the tourist for help.At that time the taxi driver had no choice but to turn to the tourist.第25页I came up with a good idea.I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to/struck/came to me.第26页合并为简单句合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语合并为复合句合并为复合句把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句把从句改为分词短语把从句改为分词短语把从句改为介词短语把从句改为介词短语三，防止只使用一两个句式，三，防止只使用一两个句式，要灵活利用诸如倒装句、要灵活利用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.四，注意使用高级词汇四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。代替一些单词，以增加文采。五五.有效使用连接词有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。构紧凑。一，改变句子开头方式一，改变句子开头方式二，句型转换二，句型转换第27页1.我们必须铭记除了努力工作，成功没有秘诀。我们必须铭记除了努力工作，成功没有秘诀。2.我们从这件事能够看到在这世上没有什么困难我们从这件事能够看到在这世上没有什么困难 是我们无法克服。是我们无法克服。3.只有当我们用知识武装自己时，我们才能在这个只有当我们用知识武装自己时，我们才能在这个 世界上立于不败之地。世界上立于不败之地。4.毫无疑问，假如你专心了，你就一定能够达成目标。毫无疑问，假如你专心了，你就一定能够达成目标。5.老实说，我们犯错误原来都是能够防止。老实说，我们犯错误原来都是能够防止。6.我们该意识到学习主要性了。我们该意识到学习主要性了。7 对于一个下定决心做一件事人，世界上没有什么对于一个下定决心做一件事人，世界上没有什么 能难倒他。能难倒他。8.它让我想起我自己经历。它让我想起我自己经历。9.据我所知，写这本书花了他超出一年时间据我所知，写这本书花了他超出一年时间10.老实说，不论你喜不喜欢它，你没有其它选择。老实说，不论你喜不喜欢它，你没有其它选择。第28页11.我们浪费不起时间。我们浪费不起时间。12.不论英语有多难学，你都必须尽力学好它。不论英语有多难学，你都必须尽力学好它。13.我想当然地认为父母应该为我们做好一切，我想当然地认为父母应该为我们做好一切，其实这是错误。其实这是错误。14.只要我们坚持，我们一定会成功。只要我们坚持，我们一定会成功。15.在某种意义上来讲，一个成功人永不满足在某种意义上来讲，一个成功人永不满足 自己所取得成就。自己所取得成就。16.俗话说，活到老，学到老。俗话说，活到老，学到老。17.显然我们还有很长路要走。显然我们还有很长路要走。18.不可否定不可否定,英语好将有利于增加我们就业机会。英语好将有利于增加我们就业机会。19.听到这个意外消息，他如此地诧异以致说听到这个意外消息，他如此地诧异以致说 不出一句话来。不出一句话来。20 最近，学生会就男女生之间在智力上是否存在最近，学生会就男女生之间在智力上是否存在很大差异对高三很大差异对高三100名学生做了一次调查。名学生做了一次调查。35%被调查学生认为被调查学生认为第29页1.我们必须铭记除了努力工作，成功没有秘我们必须铭记除了努力工作，成功没有秘诀。诀。It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard work.2.我们从这件事能够看到在这世上没有什我们从这件事能够看到在这世上没有什么困难是我们无法克服。么困难是我们无法克服。It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cant overcome.第30页3.只有当我们用知识武装自己时，我们才能只有当我们用知识武装自己时，我们才能在这个世界上立于不败之地。在这个世界上立于不败之地。Only when we are armed with enough knowledge can we stand out in the world.4.毫无疑问，假如你专心了，你就一定能够毫无疑问，假如你专心了，你就一定能够达成目标。达成目标。There is no doubt that you are sure to achieve your goals if you put your heart into it.第31页5.老实说，我们犯错误原来都是能够防止。老实说，我们犯错误原来都是能够防止。To tell the truth,many mistakes we made could have been avoided.6.我们该意识到学习主要性了。我们该意识到学习主要性了。Its high time that we should be aware of the importance of study.7 对于一个下定决心做一件事人，世界上没有什么对于一个下定决心做一件事人，世界上没有什么能难倒他。能难倒他。As the saying goes,nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.第32页8.它让我想起我自己经历。它让我想起我自己经历。It reminds me of my own experience.9.据我所知，写这本书花了他超出一年时间据我所知，写这本书花了他超出一年时间 As far as I know,it took him more than a year to write the book.10.老实说，不论你喜不喜欢它，你没有其老实说，不论你喜不喜欢它，你没有其它选择。它选择。To be frank,whether you like it or not,you have no other choice.11.我们浪费不起时间。我们浪费不起时间。We cant afford to waste time.第33页12.不论英语有多难学，你都必须尽力学好不论英语有多难学，你都必须尽力学好它。它。No matter how difficult English may be,you should do your best to learn it.13.我想当然地认为父母应该为我们做好一切，我想当然地认为父母应该为我们做好一切，其实这是错误。其实这是错误。I take it for granted that parents should do everything for us,which is wrong.14.只要我们坚持，我们一定会成功。只要我们坚持，我们一定会成功。We will be successful as long as we hold on to the end.第34页15.在某种意义上来讲，一个成功人永不满在某种意义上来讲，一个成功人永不满足自己所取得成就。足自己所取得成就。In a certain sense,a successful man is never satisfied with what he has achieved.16.俗话说，活到老，学到老。俗话说，活到老，学到老。As the saying goes,it is never too old to learn.17.显然我们还有很长路要走。显然我们还有很长路要走。It is certain that we have a long way to go.第35页18.不可否定不可否定,英语好将有利于增加我们就业英语好将有利于增加我们就业机会。机会。There is no denying that a good knowledge of English will improve the chance of our employment.19.听到这个意外消息，他如此地诧异以致听到这个意外消息，他如此地诧异以致说不出一句话来。说不出一句话来。Hearing the unexpected news,he was so surprised that he couldnt say a word.第36页20 最近，学生会就男女生之间在智力上是否存在最近，学生会就男女生之间在智力上是否存在很大差异对高三很大差异对高三100名学生做了一次调查。名学生做了一次调查。35%被调查学生认为被调查学生认为 Recently,the Students Union made a survey about whether there is much difference between girls and boys in IQ among 100 senior 3 students.35%of the surveyed students hold the view that第37页第38页