2023年英语专四系列作文之范文赏析出国留学的利与弊.doc

英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析--出国留学的利与弊
题目：Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards

写作规定

Nowadays more and more students choose to go abroad after they graduate from colleges and universities. They say that they benefi t a lot from it, though some people argue that there are many hardships and diffi culties. What’s your opinion about it?

Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards

You are to write in three parts.

In the fi rst part, state specifi cally what your idea is.

In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to

follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

审题思绪

本题是一个观点选择型的题目，就目前大学生在毕业后选择 留学的利弊孰大孰小进行分析。题目可以从以下几个方面入手：

思绪1：利大于弊

虽然有困难 ，但整体上利大于弊，利体现在 ：1. 教学软件硬件优异 ；2. 有助于将来就业等。

思绪2 ：弊大于利

虽然有好处 ，但整体上弊大于利 ，弊体现在 ：1. 费用昂贵 ；2. 文化差异 ，难以融入其中档。

思绪3 ：应具体问题具体分析 ，因人而异

留学有益 ，体现参考思绪1；

留学也有弊端 ，体现参考思绪2 ；

是否选择留学 ，应根据个人情况而定 。

Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards

There is no denying the fact that studying abroad is a hotly debated2 topic today. As far as I’m， concerned, I believe hardships and rewards coexist and people have to consider it from all sides.

引言部分：作者先提出留学是个热门话题 ，然后说明留学有利有弊应全面综合来考虑 。这表白下文将既讲利又讲弊。

Obviously, studying abroad has a number of rewards . In the first place, a student can have access to advanced science and technology as well as desirable working conditions which mightnot be available at home. In the second place, he can be exposed to entirely new ideas and trends. Last but not least, by living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home.

Nevertheless, as every coin has two sides, studying abroad also confronts one with a series of hardships. For one thing, learning a foreign language is far from an easy thing at the beginning for most people. For another, a completely new environment with different customs and habits may also be a barrier to overseas students, especially to the young. An added difficulty lies with finance: it can cost a lot to study abroad.

主体部分：作者先说有几个显而易见的益处是列举观点时常用的句式。然后用“In the first place, ... In the second place, ... Last but not least” 。nevertheless进行转折，说明留学会让人碰到很多困难。这时列举所用的句式换为“for one thing ... for another...”使文章更富有变化。

Therefore, studying abroad should be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us with10 both benefi ts and troubles. The best policy11, as I see it, is to take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding. Personally, I’d choose to go abroad and study if I find it necessary.

总结部分 ：作者概述上面所列利弊，用“a two-edged sword”来概括再恰 当但是，并提出选择出国留学的标准应当是“take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding”。

亮点回放

1. there is no denying that:“无可否认” ；还可以用undoubtedly ，without doubt等更为简洁的表达方式 。

2. hotly debated: “被剧烈讨论的” ；相称于“heavily/frequently discussed” ，但比之要g更地道些 。

3. rewards: “奖赏、报酬 、报答” ；此处表达“回报”，近义词为“returns”。

4. have access to: “能获得”，access的形容词accessible也经常使用在be accessible to的词组中，注意与之区别 。

5.desirable:“令人满意的，称心如意的”，此外它的反义词undesirable表达 “不尽如人意的”。

6. be exposed to: “暴露在……之下”，此处还可以用 “be faced with ，be confronted with”等。

7. confront sb. with sth.: “使某人遭碰到 （某事 ）” ，此处注意与be exposed to的区别 ，前者不以人为主语 ，用积极语态 ；后者以人为主语 ，用被动语态 。

8. far from: “远离” ，此处表达 “远非” ，相称于never ，但语气委婉些 。

9. barrier:“障碍” ，近义词尚有 “obstacle ，block ，hardship ，setback”等 。

10. present sb. with sth.: “给某人带来某物” ，也可以用 “provide sb. with sth.” ，但present 显得更正式些 。

11. policy : “政策 、方针 、保险单” ，此处 “the best policy ”表达“最佳的办法” ，用法地道 。