英语书面表达新闻报道省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

写作写作新闻报导类新闻报导类 新闻报道是经典应用文体裁。掌握新闻六要素，即：新闻报道是经典应用文体裁。掌握新闻六要素，即：人物（人物（who）/事件（事件（what）/时间（时间（when）/地点地点（where）/原因（原因（why）/方式（方式（how）。它它结构普通分为四个部分：标题、导语、主体、结语结构普通分为四个部分：标题、导语、主体、结语。标题标题是新闻题目，是对最有新闻价值内容浓缩、概括、是新闻题目，是对最有新闻价值内容浓缩、概括、提炼和再创造提炼和再创造。导语导语是消息开头第一段或第一句话，它扼要地揭示出消是消息开头第一段或第一句话，它扼要地揭示出消息关键内容息关键内容。主体主体是消息主要部分，它用充分事实表现主题是消息主要部分，它用充分事实表现主题。结语结语普通是最终一句话或者一段话，通常对全文内容作普通是最终一句话或者一段话，通常对全文内容作概括性总结，或对新闻事件发展趋势作出预测概括性总结，或对新闻事件发展趋势作出预测。第1页1.1.文体信息：文体信息：文体：应用文；文体：应用文；语体：正式语体；语体：正式语体；人称：第三人称；人称：第三人称；中心大意：报道两位志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动。中心大意：报道两位志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动。2.2.主导时态：普通过去时。主导时态：普通过去时。3.3.内容关键点：内容关键点：简明陈说事情发生时间、地点、任务和内容概要；简明陈说事情发生时间、地点、任务和内容概要；陈说老人们反应；陈说老人们反应；对此次志愿者活动做出评价对此次志愿者活动做出评价.4.4.温馨提醒：注意人称，除评论部分用第一人称外其它段落均应温馨提醒：注意人称，除评论部分用第一人称外其它段落均应该用第三人称。新闻报道必要要素不可缺乏。该用第三人称。新闻报道必要要素不可缺乏。第2页1、用中心句点明主题；2、添加细节，介绍详细经过；3、点出影响和启示。第3页用中心句点明主题1.It is reported that.,/As is reported.,/According to the report.2.In order to,our school organized In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,our school organized a moun-tain climbing on April 10.Hundreds of us took part in it.第4页介绍详细经过时间时间地点地点事件事件经过经过结果结果第5页影响和影响和启示（意义）启示（意义）The activity benefited us a lot.Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work,but also it promoted the friendship among us.第6页 In order to help us students to keep fit and promote wills,our school organized a mountain-climbing on Aprial 10 and we recieved much fun and benefit.(Introduction导语)It was a nice day,the sunlight warm and soft.(Background背景)At round 9 a.m.,we gatheredat the foot of Daqing Mountain in high spirits,well-equipped for the tough journey to thedestination-the top of the mountaiin.Despite the hardship,we were singing and laughing allthe way,enjoying the the fresh air and the beautiful views.When some students fell behind orgot into trouble,others would come to their aid.At around 11 a.m.,we all arrived at thesummit of Daqing Mountain.Bathed in the sunshine,we jumped and cheered with great joy.(Body 主体)This outdoors activity is really impressive and beneficial.Not only did it get us closer to the nature and relieve pressure form us,it also promote the friendship among us.(End结尾)第7页 5月月1日，高二（日，高二（3）班学生志愿者）班学生志愿者Li Yue和和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老去阳光敬老院（院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿者活动（送水果、清扫、聊）开展志愿者活动（送水果、清扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报记者，请按以下关键点用英语写一则天等）。假如你是校英语报记者，请按以下关键点用英语写一则100120个词新闻报道。个词新闻报道。1.时间、地点、任务、活动；时间、地点、任务、活动；2.老人们反应；老人们反应；3.简短评论。简短评论。参考词汇：志愿者活动参考词汇：志愿者活动 voluntary work注意：报道标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）。注意：报道标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）。Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly_ By Chen Jie,School Newspaper第8页Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly Li Yue and Zhang Hua are student volunteers coming from Class 3,Grade 2 at the senior middle school.One May Day,they went to The Sunshine Nursing Home to attend the elderly.They bought lots of fruits and beautiful flowers for the elderly.As soon as they got to The Sunshine Nursing Home,they began to clean the floor and tidy the rooms.At the same time,they had a chat with the elderly,laughing filled with the room.The elderly were so happy that their words couldnt convey their gratitude to them.Thanks to the two volunteers,they cant feel lonely any longer.Dear friends,no one can keep young forever,we will get old one day,so lets take more attention to the elderly.Never let them feel lonely and then our society will be full of happiness！By Chen Jie,School Newspaper第9页Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly Li Yue and Zhang Hua,coming from Class Three,Grade Two,attended a voluntary activity.On May Day,they went to The Sunshine Nursing Home and visited the elderly with some flowers and fruits.Firstly,they helped the elderly clean the rooms and sweep the floor.After that,they had a chat with the elderly.The elderly warmed up at the view of the sight.They said their gratitude was beyond their power of expression.They wouldnt forget this day forever.As the result of the efforts of the two volunteers,the elderly felt the warm sun shining on them.At the same time,Li Yue and Zhang Hua got a kick out of it(感到非常高兴).They said they would do it like this more in the near future.We should learn from them.If so,our world will become more beautiful.By Chen Jie,School Newspaper第10页