写作微技能之概要省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

写作微技能之概要写作把最易失去分捡起来第1页学习目标：1.了解概要写作要求2.学会使用把握大意和分析结构进行概要写作。第2页考试说明（）解读：概要写作。提供一篇350词以内短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右内容概要。阅读时将主要考虑以下内容：（1）对原文关键点了解和展现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇准确性；（3）上下文连贯性；（4）对各关键点表示独立性情况第3页评分标准1.总分25分，按5个档次给分。（21-25.)2.评分时，先依据所写概要内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最终给分。3.词数少于40和多出80，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应注意从以下四个方面考虑：（1）对原文关键点了解和展现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇准确性；（3）上下文连贯性；（4）对各关键点表示独立性情况5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性一个主要方面，评分时，应视其对交际影响程度给予考虑。6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数减低一个档次。第4页我对概要写作了解：1.主要考查学生对文章主旨大意慨括能力和对文章整体结构把握能力。是基于阅读了解书面表示，是阅读与写作完美结合。2.概要写作就是对所读文章写出中心思想。要把文章详细信息用一些含有概括功效词和句表述出来，而不是剽窃文章原句。第5页举例说明：写出中心思想。要把文章详细信息用一些含有概括功效词和句表述出来，而不是剽窃文章原句。She brought home several Chinese and English novels,a few copies of Time and Newsweek and some textbooks.She intended to read all of them during the winter vacation.概括为：概括为：She brought home a lot of books to read during the winter vacation.第6页惯用概要写作技巧1.把握全文大意2.分析文章结构3.使用主题句4.提炼关键词5.选取主要层面6.合并分层意思7.转换视角8.省略细节9.降低例子第7页10.简化描写11.防止细节12.主动与被动适时转换13.依据需要使用并列句或复合句14.句子变短语15.短语变为词汇16.多用概括性词汇，少用详细描述性词汇17.使用连接词过渡第8页18.改变单词词性19.三步法概括议论文20.要素串联法概括记叙文21.用概括性文字概括说明文第9页概要写作第一招学会概要写作就是要把握全文大意 第10页 微技能训练 （用一句话概括全文）第11页 1.What is your favorite restaurant?Mine is Fridays,of course!At Fridays I can order any kind of Western food I like,such as hamburger,salad,French fries,steak,and all kinds of sandwiches.The waiters and waitresses wore funny and interesting clothes,too,and they were working always with smile.Although Fridays is not as cheap as McDonalds,it is not expensive,either.With its good food,great service and reasonable price,Fridays is my favorite restaurant.第12页2.My father asked me to help him paint our new apartment yesterday morning.At first I wanted to watch TV or go out with my friends.After thinking about it,though,I realized that I should help around our house,too.Besides,my father often does a lot of things for me.We worked together all morning and afternoon.By dinner time I was tired and hungry,but I felt good.We finished the painting,and the house looked and smelled new.Playing around is not the only way to feel good.The writer worked very hard yesterday,but he felt really good at the end of that long day.第13页3.You may think that the ring has a diamond in it,but it doesnt.You may think that the ring is made of gold,but it isnt.You may think that the ring was very expensive,but my boy friend made it with love.That is why it was my favorite gift.My favorite gift is a ring from my boyfriend with love.第14页4.My parents and teachers always told me not to smoke,but I wanted to try it.My best friend David smokes,and one day he gave me a cigarette.“Here,try this.”he said,“Youll like it.”At first I put the wrong end of the cigarette into my mouth,but David showed me how to do it right.Then he lit it.Oh,my God!I coughed for almost an hour,and then I threw up.Smoking is bad for our health.第15页巩固训练 My husband received a letter from a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school.She was writing because she wanted to thank him for having a great influence on her life.In the letter she wrote,“You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math.I had been terribly poor at math,and had never thought I would be interested in it.Thanks to your encouragement,I made continuous progress in math,and today I am working as a math professor in California College.”What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher!My husband has received many letters.This one was special.第16页点拨：点拨：1.谁做了什么？（谁做了什么？（Who did what?).my husband received a letter from a young woman.she wanted to thank him for his encouragement2.结果怎么样？（结果怎么样？（What was the result?).a wonderful gift to a retired teacher3.文章揭示了什么，说明了什么道理？文章揭示了什么，说明了什么道理？(What was the meaning?).a good teacher might have great effect on his students概要归纳：概要归纳：The story tells us that a former student wrote to the authors husband a thankful letter,which meant a lot to him.From the letter,the writer learnt that a good teacher might have a great effect on his students.第17页概要写作第二招学会概要归纳就是要分析文章结构第18页 A typical Chinese family in the past was quite large.Most Chinese families consisted of three generations who shared the same roof.But now the Chinese family has changed a great deal.The traditional large families are gradually disappearing and instead,with the housing reform and due to the family planning,one-child family with only the parents and a child is quite common in todays society.With the change of the family structure,however,a few disadvantages have arisen.A spoiled“little emperor”is found everywhere.Besides,who will take care of the old?第19页点拨：本文讲了三层意思。第一层：过去经典中国家庭模式（a typical Chinese family in the past)。第二层：当代家庭模式改变形式（The changing form of the modern Chinese family).第三层：家庭结构改变所带来不利之处（The disadvantages of the change of the Chinese family)第20页 As time goes by,the structure of the Chinese family is changing.A typical Chinese family was quite large,but now it has changed into a smaller one,which has brought many disadvantages to our society.第21页9+1高中联盟期中考概要写作结构分析：1.Where do all these rivalries come from?（竞争起源，抓住some.Others.)2.Rivalries vary among different sports.(不一样体育运动带来不一样程度竞争）3.Do the rivalries do good or harm to the athletes?(竞争会更有可能给运动员带来伤害）第22页课文概要写作范例 I visited Futuroscope last week and experienced various activites.Futuroscope,a space-age park in France,was opened in 1987.Everything here is developed by using advanced technology.Besides,hands-on learning centres give you chances to learn in a new way.If you visit the park,Convenient services are offered.Everyone will enjoy activites here.第23页巩固训练(用30个词概括以下文章）第24页 Though big cities provide people with many conveniences,they certainly have their own disadvantages.Traffic is the first and often most serious problem.During the rush time,all the streets are jammed.Air pollution comes second.Factories and cars are constantly giving of smoke and harmful gases.If the weather is bad,you will find the whole city overcast with smog.However,noise,and violence are to be found in every big city and the situation seems to get worse year by year.第25页 Big cities provide people with many conveniences,but they certainly have disadvantages,such as traffic problems,air pollution,noise and violence.And the situation seems to be getting worse year by year.第26页课堂小结：课堂小结：概要写作通常是记叙文，说明文和议论文。首先概要写作通常是记叙文，说明文和议论文。首先要仔细阅读短文，掌握文章大意和结构。要仔细阅读短文，掌握文章大意和结构。要清楚原文是总分还是总分总结构，每个层次关要清楚原文是总分还是总分总结构，每个层次关键点组织要与原文相对应。键点组织要与原文相对应。不论是哪种文体，切记不要发表自己观点，只负不论是哪种文体，切记不要发表自己观点，只负责归纳总结每个段落关键点即可。记住概要责归纳总结每个段落关键点即可。记住概要 写作写作不是让同学分析评价，而是概括归纳。假如阐述不是让同学分析评价，而是概括归纳。假如阐述自己观点，就离题万里了。自己观点，就离题万里了。第27页