英语六级作文现象解释型模板省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

大学英语大学英语大学英语大学英语1212句作文法句作文法句作文法句作文法I.I.现象解释型现象解释型1212句作文模板句作文模板第1页对这种现象做出说明，同时表明该种现象反应社会问题；解释这种不良现象存在或发生原因针对现象做出评论，表明自己态度、观点或做法，以及怎样在日常生活中有效地实践以消除这种现象或其不利方面。第2页模板 开头段 1.Recently/In recent years,.is becoming more and more What amazes us most is.3.It is true thatModel 2 1.Nowadays,/With the development of,Nowadays,/With the development of,2.For For one thing,one thing,3.For another,For another,4.It is It is obvious that.obvious that.Model 3 1.As is known to all,2.People seem to get accustomed to 3.In fact第3页中间段n4.There are many reasons explaining/to explain The reasons of lie in several aspects.Many remarkable factors contribute to can be attributed to the following reasons.Just as what has happened to anything in the world,many factors lead to_.A number of factors could account for the phenomenon,but the following are the most critical ones.n5.The main reason is that 6.What is more,7.Thirdly,8.As a resultnBut causes many problems,such as,etc.第4页结尾段n9.Considering all these,I think 10.For one thing,11.For another,12.In conclusionModel 2n9.As a matter of fact,10.On the one hand,11.On the other hand,12.Therefore,Model 3n9.As to me/As far as I am concerned,I believe 10.As we know,11.Besides,12.In a word,第5页On Stress城市居民生活中综合压力指数城市居民生活中综合压力指数1 伴随生活节奏加紧，越来越多当代人体会到了来自工作和生活压力；2 产生压力原因；3 我看法。第6页1.Recently,stress has grown with each passing day in modern society.2.What amazes us most is that many people become ill because of a long-term stress.3.It is true that many people find it difficult to relax after work-time.第7页4.There are many reasons explaining the upward stress index of city residents shown in the chart.5.The main reason is that the competition for the jobs causes greatest pressure on employees.6.What is more,uncertainty about the future makes the situation even worse.7.Thirdly,the quick rhythm of life also brings great pressure to city residents.8.As a result,stress causes car accidents,alcoholism and other social problems.第8页9.Considering all these,I think the stress index may rise further.10.For one thing,the social competition will be more intense in the future.11.For another,people will have to spend much more time on work and study.12.In conclusion,people should learn to properly relieve their stress and make effective self-adjustment.(155 words)第9页 On Stress1.As is known to all,stress has become a noticeable part of our daily life in modern society.2.People seem to get accustomed to the long term stress and strains in their work.3.In fact many people under pressure may find it hard to relax themselves after work-time.第10页4.The reason of the severe stress lie in several aspects.5.Firstly,the competition for the jobs causes greatest pressure on employees.6.Secondly,uncertainty about the future makes the situation even worse.7.Thirdly,the quick rhythm of life also brings great pressure to city residents,as is shown in the chart.8.Finally,car accidents,alcoholism and other social problems will be set off in succession.第11页9.As a matter of fact,the stress index may rise further in the future.10.On the one hand,the social competition will be more intense.11.On the other hand,people will have to spend much more time on work and study.12.Therefore,we should learn how to relieve the stress properly and to make effective self-adjustment.(163 words)第12页三 On Stress1.Nowadays,stress has generally become a noticeable part of our everyday life in modern society.2.For one thing,many people become ill because of a long-term stress and strain in their work.3.For another,many people find it hard to relax themselves after worktime.4.It is obvious that we should learn about the reasons of stress.第13页5.Many remarkable factors contribute to the upward stress index of city residents,as it shown in the chart.6.First of all,the competition for the jobs causes greatest pressure on employees.7.In addition,uncertainty about the future makes the situation even worse.8.Thirdly,the stress of modern life is also one of the main factor.第14页9.As to me,I believe that the stress index may go up further.10.As we know,social competition will be more intense in the future.11.Besides,people will have to spend much more time on work and study.12.In a word,people should learn how to cope with these pressures properly and to make effective self-adjustment.(151 words)第15页Petroleum Crisis1我国石油需求量巨大，所以我国石油供给形势严峻；2为何会出现这种情况？3试说明你看法。第16页模板一 Petroleum Crisis1.Recently,the petroleum consumption has got a rapid increase in China.2.What amazes us most is that our crude oil produced is far from meeting the domestic market demands.3.It is true that we must find more petroleum for our domestic market demands.第17页4.There are many reasons explaining the short supply of petroleum.5.The main reason is the demands for petroleum continuously increase because of the economic development.6.What is more,our crude oil is not rich enough to meet our own demands.7.Thirdly,a large number of private cars are entering Chinese families.8.As a result,we have to import crude oil from foreign countries such as Russia and the Middle East,etc.第18页9.Considering all these,we must find more energy for our economic development.10.For one thing,we may enlarge our oil imports.11.For another,we can create other energy substitutes.12.In conclusion,every Chinese should keep an eye on the petroleum problem.(145 words)第19页模板二Petroleum Crisis1.As is known to all,the petroleum consumption has got a rapid increase in China.2.People seem to get accustomed to the rising price of petroleum.3.In fact,we must find more petroleum to meet the domestic market demands.第20页4.The reason of the short supply of petroleum lie in several aspects.5.Firstly,the demands for petroleum continuously increase in China.6.Secondly,the crude oil is not rich enough to meet our own demands in China.7.Thirdly,a large number of private cars are entering Chinese families.8.Finally,the demands for petroleum are very large on the international market.第21页9.As a matter of fact,we must find more energy for our economic development.10.On the one hand,we may enlarge our oil imports.11.On the other hand,we can create other energy substitutes.12.Therefore,every Chinese should keep an eye on the petroleum problem.(142 words)第22页模板三Petroleum Crisis1.Nowadays,the petroleum consumption has got a rapid increase in China.2.For one thing,our crude oil produced is far from meeting the domestic market demands in the years to come.3.For another,our crude oil reserve is not very rich.4.It is obvious that we must find more petroleum for our economic construction.第23页5.Many remarkable factors contribute to the short supply of petroleum.6.First of all,the demands for petroleum continuously increase in China.7.In addition,our crude oil is not rich enough to meet our own demands.8.Thirdly,a large number of private cars are entering Chinese families.第24页9.As to me,I believe that sufficient energy must be found for our economic development.10.As we know,we may enlarge our oil imports.11.Besides,we can create other energy substitutes.12.In a word,every Chinese should keep an eye on the petroleum problem.(143 words)第25页Traveling Crazen旅游热出现n出现原因和造成结果n我观点nIn the past years,_ has become a new fashion for _.n_ can be attributed to the following reasons.Firstly,_.Secondly,_.nAs for me,_.All in all,_.第26页nIn the past years,travelling has become a new fashion for many ordinary Chinese.Especially on every Labor Day,National Day and Spring Festival holidays,numerous people swarm into the scenic spots around the country.Some people define the phenomenon as“travelling craze”and term the holidays as“golden week for travelling.”第27页nThe travelling craze can be attributed to the following reasons.Firstly,peoples living conditions have been improved greatly that many people afford travelling.Secondly,the higher requirement for quality of life makes also travelling one of the most important amusements among the average people.nBut the travelling craze causes many problems,such as the higher prices for all travelling related aspects,the over-crowded scenic spots,the lower quality of services,etc.第28页nAs for me,people should be fully aware of the disadvantages behind the traveling craze.Reasonable plans should be made before taking a trip.All in all,a clear mind is needed.第29页Campus Certificates Crazen当前，大学生们热衷于考取各种各样证书，“考证热”成为时尚n出现这种现象原因n我看法n_ has become a new craze among college students.nThe reasons behind the phenomenon can be summarized into just one:_.nAs far as I am concerned,_.For me,_.第30页nIf you just randomly ask a student on campus what he is busy doing,very possibly,he may answer you he is working for a certificate of some kind.Going further,you will find that this has become a new craze among college students.第31页nThe reasons behind the phenomenon can be summarized into just one:the pressure of finding a job after graduation.With the admission expansion of colleges,a lot more graduates have to compete for the limited job posts.How to make oneself more competitive?Maybe more certificates at hand.Hoping that the employers might find one of them attractive,the students are compelled to run from one exam to another.第32页nAs far as I am concerned,the students should have a more rational attitude toward certificates,because exam certificates do not necessarily represent ones ability.For me,one just should work hard at his or her major.Opportunity will come to you if you are competent enough in your filed.第33页On Off-campus Room Rentingn很多大学生在校外租房住n学生校外租房主要原因n校外租房利弊nNowadays,an increasing number of _.nThere are probably three reasons for _.Firstly,_.Secondly,_.Finally,_.nIts obvious that _.However,_.Besides,_.Therefore,_.第34页nNowadays,an increasing number of college students choose to rent rooms or apartments off campus instead of living in dormitories on campus.nThere are probably three reasons for the popularity of room renting.Firstly,it seems the best solution for students who cannot adjust to dormitory life and show incompetence in roommate relations.Secondly,many a senior lives outside to make better preparations for the thesis or examination.Finally,room renting means freedom to some students,who hate to be regulated by the school rules.第35页nIt is obvious that living off campus provides some convenience,more favorable conditions,for example.However,the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages in this case.Room renting is money-consuming for students.And escape is never the correct way out of maladjustment.Besides,too much freedom may result in indulgence and idleness.Therefore,we must think twice when considering living off campus.第36页College Graduates Working as Community Workersn一些大学生选择毕业后去小区工作n这么做有什么好处n我看法第37页nNowadays,some college graduates choose to _,I think it is a good practice which can benefit not only _but also_.nOn the one hand,college graduates can _.As we all know,_.If college graduates can work in the communities,they can _.On the other hand,graduates can also _.Students can give full play to _.Besides,_,such as _.nIn my opinion,_ is of great importance for a graduate.Therefore,it is a wise choice for college graduates to _.第38页nNowadays,some college students choose to work in grassroots communities after graduation.I think it is a good practice which can benefit not only themselves but also the whole society.第39页nOn the one hand,college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the community.As we all know,the staff members in the communities are mainly made up of retired workers before,most of whom are not well educated.If college graduates can work in the communities,they can introduce some new concepts and methods to the community.On the other hand,graduates can also gain a lot from working as community workers.Community is the smallest unit in the society.Students can give full play to their abilities because they have to deal with various people and solve many thorny issues.Besides,one can also improve his practical skills,such as interpersonal skills and organizing ability.第40页nIn my opinion,learning practical skills is of great importance for a graduate.Therefore,it is a wise choice for college graduates to have an experience as community workers.第41页