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考研写作考研写作2连俊霞连俊霞北京新东方学校北京新东方学校第1页一、短文写作词句选择一、短文写作词句选择1.1 替换词突破替换词突破1.1.1 惯用词惯用词(1)to the best of my knowledge,I hold (2)important:imperative It is imperative that (should)(提议提议)(3)show:unfold It is unfolded that (寓意寓意)1.1.2 例举例举 ,such as/10/10Writing2第2页一、短文写作词句选择一、短文写作词句选择1.2 写作基本语法写作基本语法1.2.1 正确是否凭证正确是否凭证（1）动词唯一性标准）动词唯一性标准例：例：It is look like a network.It is my view that the hot pot represents cultural integration is delicious and nutritious.There are a large number of people are surfing on line.3句型选择句型选择过去式过去式&过去分词过去分词representing情态动词情态动词+动词原形动词原形likev.I like my father.likeprep.I look/am like my father.正确是否正确是否正式是否正式是否/10/10become-became-becomedrive-drove-driven第3页1.2.1 正确是否凭证正确是否凭证This cultural“hot-pot”will looks more colorful than ever before.The hot pot looks very delicious and nutritious,it represents cultural integration.Some of them have went the crime road because of the Internet.That could let people becomes distant.Organize the volunteer is also a good way to help to make the knowledge of the environmental protect well-known./10/104and/;gonecommit crimeslet,help,make Organizingprotectioncommit criminal acts/behaviors第4页1.2.1 正确是否凭证正确是否凭证（2）一致标准）一致标准例：例：A stretching spider web is stick each person sits in their own work room.A large number of people are use computer within a stretching spider web.The web connect people and stand off them from each other.5第三人称单数第三人称单数名词单复数名词单复数roomscomputersusingsticksconnectsstandssitting/10/10one anotherevery第5页1.2.1 正确是否凭证正确是否凭证Last but not least,develop other kind of things to replace the disposable plastic bag.The market economy and competitive society drives many people to study hard for higher academic degrees./10/10Writing6bags第6页（3）明确修饰关系标准）明确修饰关系标准例：例：But it is unfortunately that I found yesterday that my passport was lost.The old man is sad at abandoned by his children.Recently the problem of white pollution aroused widely concern all over the world.71.2.1 正确是否凭证正确是否凭证adj.n.adv.v./adj.prep.n./v.+ingbeing/10/10第7页1.2.1 正确是否凭证正确是否凭证Because the terrible result of“white pollution”is much seriously.The first proposition that should be emphsis is let more and more individuals realize the seriously of use plastic bag.启示：检验内容：语法部分。启示：检验内容：语法部分。/10/10Writing8emphasizedtoseriousnessusingbags第8页（4）特殊结构正确使用标准）特殊结构正确使用标准例：例：Only in this way,will we make our friendship more and more stronger.It is apparent the future of the culture is more brighter along with the globalization.The more we use the Internet to communicate with others,the more strange we become.91.2.1 正确是否凭证正确是否凭证比较级比较级The more,the morethat/10/10倒装倒装will we makeand stronger.muchmore是比较级是比较级 stranger第9页/10/10101.2 写作基本语法写作基本语法1.2.2 正式是否凭证正式是否凭证（1）被动客观表示标准）被动客观表示标准例：例：As is seen from the picture,As is depicted in the pictureIt is vividly depicted in the picture thatIt is universally acknowledged that It is believed that（2）无缩写标准）无缩写标准Id like toI would like to cantcannot isntis not穿衣戴帽标准穿衣戴帽标准 寓寓意意 描描图图 第10页（2）无缩写标准）无缩写标准This time,the flower cant stand in the heavy rain.=12分分We cant imagine a society full of adults having the ability like seven-year-old children.=12分分/10/10Writing11cannotcannot第11页一、短文写作词句选择一、短文写作词句选择1.3 写作功效句型写作功效句型1.3.1 描述图画描述图画（1）个体群体化标准）个体群体化标准1/10/10Writing12个体个体 群体群体 化化 少少许人人 大量群体大量群体转变转变第12页 Directions:Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should1.describe the photos briefly;2.interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them;3.give your point of view.第13页（1）个体群体化标准）个体群体化标准1A man writes Beckhams name on his face,and the other spends 300yuan making a Beckhams hairstyle.the young man in the photo,express their enthusiasm by writing his name on their faces,the one in the hair studio,spend as much as 300yuan for a hair style modeling on that of Beckham.19分范文分范文选句句/10/10Writing14Some,likewhile others,like第14页（1）个体群体化标准）个体群体化标准1Some,like+图中人物中人物 in the picture,do sth,while others,like+图中人物图中人物 in the drawing,do sth.A man writes Beckhams name on his face,and the other spends 300 Yuan making a Beckhams hairstyle.17words Some,like the man in the picture,write Beckhams name on their faces,while others,like the other man in the hair studio,spend 300yuan making a Beckhams hairstyle.30words/10/10Writing151013写作公式写作公式第15页Some,like+图中人物中人物 in the picture,do sth,while others,like+图中人物图中人物 in the drawing,do sth.a large number of peoplepeople in increasing numbersan increasing number of peoplethe majority of people 适合用于一幅图写作。适合用于一幅图写作。（1）个体群体化标准）个体群体化标准1,like+图中图中人物人物 in the picture,do sth.第16页（1 1）个体群体化标准）个体群体化标准1In your essay,you should1)describe the drawing briefly,2)explain its intended meaning,and then3)give your comments.第17页（1 1）个体群体化标准）个体群体化标准1 1The two disabled men help each other walk forward.Some,like the two disabled men in the picture,help one another walk forward.People in increasing numbers，like the two disabled men in the picture,help one another walk forward.1113第18页（1 1）个体群体化标准）个体群体化标准1写作公式写作公式*两幅图写作两幅图写作 Some,like+图中人物图中人物 in the picture,do sth.,while others,like+图中人物图中人物 in the drawing,do sth.一幅图写作一幅图写作 (increasing),like+图中人物图中人物 in the picture,do sth./10/10Writing19第19页1.3.1 1.3.1 描述图画描述图画（2 2）个体群体化标准）个体群体化标准2 2people/human beingspeople/human beings主语主语 those who those whoPeople should remember that they are much People should remember that they are much indebted to their parents for their birth indebted to their parents for their birth and growth.and growth.Those who tried every means to avoid their Those who tried every means to avoid their duty of looking after their elders should duty of looking after their elders should bear in mind that they are much indebted to bear in mind that they are much indebted to their parents for their birth and growth.their parents for their birth and growth.1.3 写作功效句型写作功效句型/10/10Writing20转变转变1218第20页（2）个体群体化标准）个体群体化标准2写作公式写作公式Those who do sth.People do not talk to one another face to face.Those who communicate with others through Internet seldom talk to others face to face./10/10Writing211013第21页1.3 写作功效句型写作功效句型1.3.1 描述图画描述图画（3）双重否定标准）双重否定标准 This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of how elders are treated by their grown-up children in some of the families in China.写作公式写作公式 This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of+n./that+从句从句/10/10Writing22第22页1.3 写作功效句型写作功效句型1.3.1 描述图画描述图画（4）比喻手法标准）比喻手法标准写作公式写作公式 A see(s)B as C.The goalkeeper sees himself as such a dwarf that he cannot keep the ball from the goal.The player/forward regards the keeper as a giant who almost cover the whole goal./10/10Writing23see:regard,view第23页1.3 写作功效句型写作功效句型1.3.1 描述图画描述图画（5）状语分词化标准）状语分词化标准 Looking at it carefully,the flower is protected from the rain outside the warm house.写作公式写作公式 分词作状语，与主语主被动保持一致。分词作状语，与主语主被动保持一致。/10/10Writing2413=10we findgreen housethe flower is going to wither and die.Living without the protection of the green house,第24页1.3.2 总结寓意总结寓意（1）强调化标准）强调化标准 It is teamwork that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want to.写作公式写作公式 It is that makes it adj.to do sth.It is love that makes it possible to overcome all difficulties.1.3 写作功效句型写作功效句型/10/10Writing25=19强调句强调是成份（主、宾、状）强调句强调是成份（主、宾、状）.第25页1.3.2 总结寓意总结寓意（2）广泛化标准）广泛化标准 It has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.写作公式写作公式 It has been universally acknowledged that that anyone who wants to should possess.1.3 写作功效句型写作功效句型/10/10Writing26=19It has been universally acknowledged that confidence is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.第26页（2）广泛化标准）广泛化标准(-Text1)Of all the changes that have taken place in English-language newspapers during the past quarter-century,perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline in the scope and seriousness of their arts coverage.写作公式写作公式Of all the changes that have taken place in during,perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline/sharp increase in./10/1027第27页（2）广泛化标准）广泛化标准Of all the changes that have taken place in the communication means during the past half a century,perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline in face-to-face intercourse./10/10Writing28第28页（2）广泛化标准）广泛化标准Of all the changes that have taken place in international culture during the past half a century,perhaps the most far-reaching has been the sharp increase in culture blending./10/1029第29页1.3.2 总结寓意总结寓意（3）动词名词化标准）动词名词化标准 The real implication of the author is that everyone has to meet difficulties in their life experience,so we have to make adequate preparations for them.写作公式写作公式 The real implication/meaning/indication of the author/picture(s)is that 1.3 写作功效句型写作功效句型/10/10Writing30=17The author implies that第30页（3）动词名词化标准）动词名词化标准动词名词化扩展动词名词化扩展 We cant imagine a society full of adults having the ability like seven-year-old children.It is beyond imagination that a society is full of adults.公式公式 It is beyond imagination that/10/10Writing31第31页