高中英语读后续写升华主旨句.docx

读后续写命题特点
年份
卷别
主题语境
词数
2022年
I卷
特殊教育教师鼓励学生勇敢接受挑战
阅读理解语篇312词
续写要求两部分，共150左右
II卷
特殊教育教师鼓励学生勇敢接受挑战
阅读理解语篇312词
续写要求两部分，共150左右
2021年
I卷
母亲节
阅读理解语篇316词
续写要求两部分，共150左右
II卷
母亲节
阅读理解语篇316词
续写要求两部分，共150左右

选材特点
1.读后续写的选材聚焦社会关爱、友谊和亲情，传递鼓励、关爱、理解、沟通、勇气等信息。内容贴近学生生活，能够引起共鸣，可以顺利展开写作。
2.以情感类话题复习为主，注重学生个人的自我品德的培养和修养提升，构建积极向上的心理暗示。

读后续写万能升华主旨句
【方法一：首位呼应法写】
讲述的是与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事。
I had an interesting  childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. 
我有一个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲——可爱，却心不在焉，健忘。
结尾时候回到文章的开头再次重申妈妈的性格，深化主题。
文章结尾：首尾呼应
Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom. 
尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。
【方法二：名言式结尾法】
名言结尾能增添文采，凝炼中心，深化主旨，引出结论并抒情凸显主旨，渲染氛围
注意：不可生搬硬套名言警句，一定要具体文本具体分析。
Just as the saying goes，“Where there is a will， there is a way.”Now I couldnt agree more with those words. 
正如俗话所说，“有志者，事竟成。”现在我完全同意这句话。
【方法三：情感升华法】
Seeing sth , I felt as if it had been doing and saying,”........”
看到某物，感觉某物好像在做某动作，并且说“（突出主题的话）”。
看个例子。主人公“我”是个颓废少年，无意中通过自己的专长“扔标枪”，找到了自信，并成功逆袭。我们怎么通过万能句型来升华呢？
助人型主旨升华句
Seeing the javelin, I felt as if it had been encouraging me and saying, “You’ve found your talent and I’ve found you”看到标枪，我觉得它好像在鼓励我，并说，“你找到了你的天赋，我找到了你”。这句话中，javelin是“标枪”，talent是“天赋”
公式：动作+感动+感悟  助人型主旨升华句
sb looked at sth / held sth, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which sb felt deep in one’s heart. 

某人看到了某物或者拿着某物，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，在某人的心里深深地感受到了这一点。
这个“动作”可以是：看到了某情景，或者拿着一样东西。“感动”很好理解，别人帮助了自己，产生的情绪就是“感动”，最常见的就是“眼泪往下流”。“感悟”这一句，往往是“爱”“善行”“付出”等关键字的励志句。
成长型主旨升华句
“改变”和“成长”是我们读后续写一个重要主题。在第二段的结尾处，我们怎样写“改变成长”型的主旨升华句呢？我们可以根据“改变”的因素来学习不同的表达。比如克服困难，克服自卑等。下面有七类不同的改变模式。

第一类
学习知识促“改变”
知识就是力量！在改变的过程中，学习不同的知识，然后才能面对各种困难和挑战。比如屏幕前的你，不就是在学习读后续写的技巧吗？请看下面的例句，也是我送给正在学习的你。
It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make moreattempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
【分析】individual这里表示“个人，个体”。make more attempts 做更多尝试。

第二类
发挥天赋促“改变”
认识自身天赋，并且发挥天赋，这是改变我们的现状的一个重要条件。请看下面的例句。
Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.
事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。
【分析】possess 拥有。create miracles表示创造奇迹。

第三类
追逐梦想促“改变”
永远不要忽视了梦想的力量！“做人如果没有理想,跟咸鱼有什么区别呢”。请看下面两个例句。
It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。
【分析】take full advantage of 充分利用，  realize your dreams表示“实现梦想”
第四类
克服困难促“改变”
只有克服各种苦难，才能改变现状。请看下面的例句。
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal (success) finally.
通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标（成功）。

【分析】smooth 表示“平坦的”overcome all the difficulties 表示“克服困难”；make every effort 表示“做出努力”；as long as，表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。

第五类战胜恐惧促“改变”
我们在改变的过程中，经常需要克服自己内心的恐惧。请看下面的例句：
Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.战胜恐惧和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。
【分析】Determination 表示“决心”；optimism表示“乐观”。conquer your fear表示“克服你的恐惧”；accomplish your goal表示“完成目标”
【2023届江苏省南京市第一中学高三一模试题】 In class, I tried my best to seize every opportunity to improve myself. Gradually, I began to have normal conversations with my classmates and got along well with them. Everything in life was becoming more and more beautiful.

第六类
战胜自卑促“改变”
我们在改变之前，可能会有一些自卑的心理阻碍着我们成长，比如自己的外貌的缺陷，性格内向等，如何克服自卑，实现人生逆袭？请看下面的例句。
I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence.Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.
我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲，而且更快乐，因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性。
【分析】
eventually表示“最后，终于”；personality 表示“个性”。

第七类 战胜消极促“改变”
积极的心态像太阳，照到哪里，哪里亮。“积极”思维，最终让我们成长改变，这种主题，是读后续写中比较常见的。请看下面的例句。
Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.
态度对我们来说比事实更重要。 我们不能改变我们的过去；我们不能改变事实。 然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。
【分析】
Attitude表示“态度”；positive attitude.就是“积极的态度”。
【方法四：用修辞手法】
以下是可以用于读后续写结尾的一些美词美句，它们通过运用多种修辞手法让文章更有画面感和美感，既能点题又能大大加强文章的可读性。
1. Todays experience was like an everlasting flower， blooming in the river of my memories. 今天的经历将会像是一朵永不凋谢的花朵，永远绽放在我的记忆里。（比喻）（bloom开花）
2. With laughter lingering in the room， their sincere friendship blossomed in the summer like a flower that never fades. 伴随着笑声回荡在房间里，他们真挚的友谊之花盛开在这个夏季，永不凋败。（比喻）（linger回荡，徘徊; blossom开花）
3. Alexs beam of smile seemed to wipe off Theos frustration and he was really expecting to be the next champion. Alex的微笑冲散了Theo心中的阴霾，他又开始对下一次的胜利充满期待。（拟人，比喻）（frustration沮丧）
4. His words floated in the wind like a birds happy song. 他的话语回荡在风中，就像鸟儿的歌声一样欢快动听。（比喻）
5 Follow your dream and the universe will open doors where there are only walls. 追随你的梦想吧，宇宙会在原本只有墙的地方为你敞开大门。（拟人）
6. Love matters more than anything， which can conquer /overcome /get the better of any difficulty. 爱胜过一切，它能打败世间的任何困难。（拟人）
7. The cloud removed instantly， sunshine landed on the happy teardrops in my eyes. 刹那间，乌云散去，阳光洒在了我充满喜悦的泪水上。（拟人）
此外，用“only +状语”开头的倒装，以及not only ... but also…连接句子时的倒装，也是一种不错的结尾。如：
Only when we open up the door of our heart can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love. 只有当我们打开心门，我们才能沐浴在阳光中享受爱的温暖。（比喻;倒装）
总之，高考续写的方向往往是积极向上的，结尾时通常弘扬一种正面的情感，如，“助人为乐、勤奋、友情、亲情和自我成长”等。如2021年新高考全国Ⅰ卷读后续写讲述的是孩子们精心为妈妈准备母亲节早餐，经历一番波折之后，最终以阖家欢乐结尾。显然，其主题为“亲情”。我們可以套用上述这个句子“With laughter lingering around the room， the love among family blossomed in the summer like a flower that never fades.”

多背诵,多积累,建立语料库,选用句式结尾,争取理想的分数
写作素材
各主题升华句
1.真善美- 助人为乐:   Roses given, fragrance in hand. 
2.真善美- 积极向上:  When life gives you lemons, make lemonade. 
3.真善美- 个人成长:  It’s never too late to learn. 
4.亲情主题: Family and friends are hidden treasures. 

1.真善美- 助人为乐
Roses given, fragrance in hand. (赠人玫瑰，手留余香)
You reap what you sow. (种瓜得瓜；善有善报)
Sow the wind and reap the whirlwind.
Small kindness can bring rich reward. (小小的善意可以带来丰厚的回报)
Small act can bring/contribute to/give rise to a big difference.
A small act/gesture of kindness will perhaps melt/cure one’s loneliness.
"The smallest act of kindness is worth more than the grandest intention." (王尔德)
Never underestimate the power/value of our actions (to lift people up).
No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.
The miracle is this: the more we share the more we have.
2.真善美- 积极向上

When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.
To change the worst situation into best, one should take actions.
“Never lose. I either win or learn” - Nelson Mandela
Adversity/Setbacks in life is either a blessing in disguise or a fruitful lesson.
Your current situation is not your final destination.
Be patient, trust the timing and enjoy the journey.
It is better to light a candle than to curse the darkness.
Life without dreams is like a bird with a broken wing.
3.真善美- 个人成长

Where there is a will, there is a way. (有志者事竟成)
It’s never too late to learn. Every individual is supposed to accept more challenges and make more attempts.
Actually, each individual possesses talent. Be brave, rise to setbacks/obstacles, and make efforts. You will end up creating miracles. (直面困难/努力/终将制造奇迹)
Seize the day, and chase your dreams. As long as you grasp every opprtunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties.
If you get disheartened or discouraged by these hurdles, you can not attain success.
4.亲情主题

Family and friends are hidden treasures.
Family, a wonderful shelter and a 24-hour harbor, is always there for us.
Family love is the greatest gift in life.
Family is to us what harbor is to ships. (家庭之于我们就像港口之于船只)
“Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life.” – J.K. Rowling
Families are the compass that guides us.
Family: where life begins and love never ends.